Reviews For Falling Stars
Title: Bonding

Vita has the sickness! I'm loving this story!

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 18 2012 03:09 am

Title: The old lion.

Nice start.

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 18 2012 01:29 am

Title: Bonding

I really, really like this story! I think Vita is awful! Hopefully Carla and Aza can get along. Can't wait to read more, please post soon and make them longer ;-)

Reviewer: Rainbows Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 17 2012 09:55 pm

Title: The old lion.

i love this!

Reviewer: silentwriter Signed [Report This]
Date: August 17 2012 08:15 pm

Title: Bonding

LOVEE THIS!!! It's so different! Update soon!

Reviewer: leah Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 17 2012 06:40 pm

Title: Bonding

Okay our boy Vita is going made...

Apparently they did not get past the mutation that the toxin caused the Sato clan as they thought

Where as the mutation for the Sato are physical the mutation for the Junirk clan is mental.  It took awhile to manifest apparently.  I wonder if there is something that can reverse the effects.

Enjoying the story thank you for sharing.

Happy writing

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 17 2012 03:38 pm

Title: Growing Obsession

I am enjoying this story at first I was a bit confused but now I am clear and enjoying myself.

Vita is going to be a problem I see so far but maybe that will change.

Thank you for sharing.

Happy writing.

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 17 2012 02:48 pm

Title: Bonding

Interesting update.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 17 2012 06:38 am

Title: Bonding

I'm happy that I decided to check and see if the formatting was changed, so THANK YOU! for adding more paragraphs. It was easier and smother to read, not to mention much better on the eyes. 

 

Is Vita going to have the two old rulers killed? 

Carla and Aza are cute together. I'm looking forward to a scene of the three of them that's...I don't normal. Like, just the three of them together, no beating or anything else. 

 

Thanks again for better formatting the chapters. I do like this story and was sad to give it up. 

Reviewer: Cholyn Signed [Report This]
Date: August 17 2012 05:39 am

Title: The old lion.

OMG. I read this story after the last update and it is now a new addiction. I fear for Aza and Carla, if Vita has the madness.

Reviewer: Drea Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 17 2012 02:51 am

Title: Bonding

I can't wait for the next update 



Author's Response:

Thank you! I will do my beat.

Reviewer: luv2read Signed [Report This]
Date: August 16 2012 10:05 pm

Title: Bonding

Please more Aza and Carla,I'm also wondering if Carla is mentally challenged in some way because the way she acts and talk is very childlike for a young lady of twenty-one and wonder if her life circumstances and tragedy play a big part in the way she is...



Author's Response:

Your right. Carla is the way that she is for many different reasons. She isn't challenged, she is just herself. She never really had time to grow up nor does she want too. She just wants to be happy and will take what she can get out of life.

Reviewer: cocoablue Signed [Report This]
Date: August 16 2012 07:39 pm

Title: The old lion.

I kinda feel bad for Vita. It obvious that he really like Aza just like Aza is developing feelings for Carla. Neither know how to express them. I also think Carla and Aza interaction is so adorable. I'm very happy u decide to keep writing this story and dnt stop till this is complete! Lol



Author's Response:

Oh, thank you for tour kind words.

Reviewer: Kaykay Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 16 2012 05:30 pm

Title: The world is mine.

So, I'm not even gonna lie, when I saw this story I squealed and clapped from excitement and my goodness, i was not disappointed. Those poor babies. I almost, ALMOST feel sorry for Vita. He's a colossal dickwad, jerk, asshole, and a shitface. Anyway, thanks for the update! :) I'm really looking forward to your ext update!



Author's Response:

Oh, wow. I hope I dont disappoint you. Thank you for the review.

Reviewer: abbokora Signed [Report This]
Date: August 15 2012 03:26 am

Title: The world is mine.

Vita really disgusts me. I think he feels like if he rapes Aza enough, he'll develop feelings for him. But it's really a power thing and I'm sure that he'll be using Carla next. I feel sorry for Aza and I don't get that he likes "men" from him. And she's so innocent that I couldn't see it being anything but forced. I keep looking at tIhe "threesome" warning and wondering how that's going to come into play. I'm still liking this story because it's different and well-written.



Author's Response:

Hehe..thank you. Your review really made my day. I'm struggling cause I really am nervous about my writing, but seeing your review made me want to be more confident.

Reviewer: AP Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 14 2012 05:36 am

Title: The world is mine.

I even fainted myself...Look !Passes Out


There is so many question that I have to ask...Dont know  which one to choose?


Can't wait to see an update.



Author's Response:

Haha. Thank you very much.

Reviewer: Insomniac Sioj Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 13 2012 07:54 pm

Title: Found Possessions.

Oh my this girl is brave!



Author's Response:

She can be, but we all can. Thank you for the review.

Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: August 13 2012 07:20 am

Title: Growing Obsession

Wow okay I can deal that his a unisex thangy dude...I heart this story!

Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: August 13 2012 07:04 am

Title: Clarity Aproachs

Great chapter but I'm not feeling the two dudes part...

Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: August 13 2012 06:42 am

Title: The world is mine.

Interesting update!! Vita is a sicko!! He raped Aza and im sure he'll rape Carla if he wants to. He seems to get off on control over them. Does he really think they will love him after his pyscho behavior? He doesn't know the meaning of the word love and will never know if he doesn't change his behavior!! Poor Aza!! No wonder he's the way he is after dealing with Vita. Sad situation.

Author's Response:

Yes it is.  Thank you for the review.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 13 2012 03:59 am

Title: The world is mine.

Oh..I was hoping for some redemption for Vita, but alas I think he's just going to be..the villain...Oh well..loving this story and waiting patiently for hopefully a longer update!



Author's Response:

Well, don't lose hope for him yet. Thank you for the review.

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed [Report This]
Date: August 13 2012 03:49 am

Title: The old lion.

I meant to give you 10 stars >.<



Author's Response:

Lol. Thanks, but your words was more then enough.

Reviewer: DarkandLovely Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 13 2012 03:13 am

Title: The old lion.

Oh thank you thank you thank you for updating! Omg... Carla... Vita is one crazy son of a b*tch. Oh lord a mercy... It gives me comfort that Aza *whether he realizes it or not* somewhat cares for Carla. Vita is sick for raping him.. omg. Sick bastard. 

 

How the hell is he going to use her for "breeding" like some animal?! God, I hate that word... it brings me back to the slave master days and that's exactly what Aza and Carla are to him... slaves. I only hope that they find a way out of this together...

 

Please update soon! Oh and your formatting is fine once you get everything together so don't let some people discourage you. It is a very good story and don't stop. Please continue, I'm hooked. <3



Author's Response:

You are the writer of all my fave stories. I'm sorry I don't really look at the Author's names very often. I just look for the story....man I hope you get to update soon. I just decided to click on your link and low and behold you are one of the writers I have been waiting for.  Thank you for your words, I will admit that I was a little down. I know she was just trying to be helpful. Thank you for your words they really made me happy. I mean seriously I am crying tears of happiness, because I just want to connect with people and share. Your review has been nothing but inspiring for me to write the next chapter. Thank you so much.

Reviewer: DarkandLovely Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 13 2012 03:12 am

Title: The world is mine.

Vita is straight crazy.



Author's Response:

Yeah...he is, though there is a reason behind it.

Reviewer: nightseer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 13 2012 03:02 am

Title: The world is mine.

Welp, I'm done with this story. Not because I dislike it, but because I refuse to try to read it. The formatting of this story is ridiculous. It's not difficult to break up a large paragraphs. When you copy and past it a chapter, press preview, reread your work, press enter to seperate sentences to start a new paragraph, and once finished press sumbit or whatever.

 

I'm sorry if this comes off as harsh, but it's very incosiderate to post these huge paragraphs, with multiple character's speaking. Even if it's a long paragraph, there should only be one speaker per paragraph, just as there are in books. 



Author's Response:

I am sorry to hear that. This is the way it makes sense to me, and I am sorry that it may come off as confusing. I am trying my best and I am trying to be considerate. I do edit as best I can, and have others edit for me as well. I truly do thank you for your words, they really have been very nice to hear. Constructive criticism is always welcomed.

Reviewer: Cholyn Signed [Report This]
Date: August 13 2012 02:38 am



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