what a meany!!lol
Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]Date: August 13 2012 01:12 am
Wow this is really cool!!
Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]Date: August 13 2012 01:11 am
Wow,this story has me mesmerized!!! I actually realized that I was like on the edge of my seat wanting someone to save Carla and Aza...Oh Carla what have you done and what is the fate of Aza and yourself??? Can't wait for next update!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much.
Reviewer: cocoablue Signed [Report This]Date: August 09 2012 08:54 pm
Go Carla! Although, she may live to regret it. I was soooo happy she got Lanie back. :D
Vita is...
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review.
Reviewer: Cholyn Signed
[Report This]Date: August 09 2012 07:27 am
This is my reaction after reading.
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I know how the family can get.
Hope you figure out the formating.
Hope to see you update soon.
I want to know what happen next!
Have a nice day/night (KA)
Author's Response:
Wow! Thanks for your review.
Reviewer: Insomniac Sioj Signed [Report This]Date: August 09 2012 06:05 am
I really like this story! There isn't too much sci-fi on this site (not that I'm complaining, I'm overjoyed that this site actually exists lol) and I'm happy to see one- an interesting one too!- on here. Thank you so much!
Oooh man. Vita is an ass. Poor Aza and Carla! I'm glad to see that Aza is not a complete douchebag. And Yay Carla! She grew a backbone! I was relieved to see that she had strong courage! Yep...I just got a new favorite!
Thanks again! :]
Date: August 09 2012 05:01 am
Well dang, this story is good as hell. I cannot wait for the next update. Aza is definately going to see Carla in a new light since she openly threw herself into harms way for him. Vita is a bully.
Reviewer: Anna Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 08 2012 05:15 pm
Wow. I don't think this is going to turn out well for Carla. Truth be told, I just knew that Vita was going to rape her and make Aza watch when he bent her over the bed. What is the brand going to mean for her besides the obvious of him claiming her as his posession? I'm glad that Aza is mellowing toward her but I'm scared for him too. With the circumstances and Vita being able to read Carla's mind, I don't see how this is going to end. Exciting chapter!
Reviewer: AP Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 08 2012 11:21 am
Hey, really liked the start of your story, looking forwatd to an update
Reviewer: Ro Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 06 2012 11:35 pm
great job....love the story
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: July 31 2012 09:19 am
Interesting story so far. More please.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: July 31 2012 06:21 am
Very good.... no scratch that... EXTREMELY good and intriguing....... Sigh can't wait for the rest soooooo.... PRONTO!!!!!! XDD
Reviewer: Nutella Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 31 2012 01:28 am
Awe...
Reviewer: nightseer Signed [Report This]Date: July 30 2012 02:12 pm
Me likey!! More please.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: July 30 2012 06:58 am
I don't really care for Vita. I do like that you showed the changed Aza is going through.
I can't give this chapter much of a review because it was hard to read. The huge blocks of text make it diffifult to read and is bad on the eyes. Please work on the formatting, and seperate the text so that it's easier to identify who's speaking...much like in a novel.
Reviewer: Cholyn Signed [Report This]Date: July 30 2012 06:49 am
The general is not going to like this last development. So they steal humans to produce children with. Is the general a homosexual because he is definitely obsessed with Aza. Aza ain't thinking about him but he sure feeling Carla. Looking forward to reading more.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: July 30 2012 04:06 am
Thanks for a good update. Does bonded mean that they are married?
Author's Response:
Yes it does. Thank you for reviewing.
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: July 29 2012 05:57 pm
I love this!
It's refreshing to see some Sci-Fi in here!
Hope your MUSE is FULLY FUNCTIONING because I can't wait for an update ASAP!
What's happening to Carla/Lanie?
What will happen to the General and Aza/Carla?
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P.S. Can you make the dialogue in seperated lines?
To give my eyes the impression that your (next) update is longer,hahaha :D
Can't blame me I just can't stop reaading :P
Author's Response:
Wow...thank you! That means alot to me that you are liking the story so much.
Reviewer: Insomniac Sioj Signed [Report This]Date: July 29 2012 08:25 am
Scifi I love this story is very interesting please continue
Author's Response:
Thank you very much.
Reviewer: TheMaelstrom Signed [Report This]Date: July 28 2012 06:47 pm
I hope this story doesn't contain Mpreg. I can deal with homoeroticism, but not that.
These are some weirdly described 'men'. I can see you're really into anime. lol
I hope Carla gets Lanie back soon. Poor thing.
Author's Response:
Well it has mention I guess you could say, since the Sato or both male and female. Though those days are growing ever slimmer the Sato are strictly becoming just regular ol' males. As for the Mpreg....you don't know how happy it makes me that someone else knows what that is. As for Lanie she will get it back...soon.
[Report This]Date: July 28 2012 12:31 am
I will be seriously pissed off if he burns her lion.
Aza needs to get a freaking grip.
I feel bad for Carla. She seems so sweet and awkward.
Do you have a thing for Draco Malfoy because Aza looks an awfully lot like him, lol. (Draco from most Dramione fanfics, not the story...to pointy)
Author's Response:
Hahahaha.....um....yeah Carla is very awkward.
Reviewer: Cholyn Signed [Report This]Date: July 28 2012 12:11 am
So how are the General and Aza supposed to create life?
Author's Response:
Aza's people are actually Hermaphrodites. However due to the war of thier two races, the Sato (Aza's people) genes have become mutated. So alot of his people is sterile now or can't give birth anymore. Aza and the general can't actually create life, becasue Aza's gentics have mutated as well. They both can only give life, so they are actually only getting bonded in name only to create peace. When it came time for them to make babies they would actually just pick somone and have the female have a baby from each.
Reviewer: AP Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 27 2012 07:41 pm
Great job. There aren't too many sci fi stories on here, thanks for the addition. Just don't make us wait too long for an update.
Author's Response:
Thank you very much. I will try to update as soon as possible,.
Reviewer: annette Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 27 2012 06:04 pm
Are the Sato just taking females of child bearing age? That is the inly that I can their race continuing as two males can't procreate. Unless their phisoligy is different from the male of just about every species. Aza was captured and enslaved himself or was he sold by his family? Are Aza and the General from the same planet? This story is good, keep the updates coming please!
Author's Response:
First off I want to say thank you. You have given me two great reviews. I'm gad to see that so many people are enjoying the story so far. I really was scared to put this up here. I really didn't think the story would be received as well as it has been, that really motivates me to keep going.
Now to answer your questions. The general(known as Vita) and Aza are from the same planet. There two races were at war with one another. The end result being that they nearly destroyed one another. So they came to an agreement to become one race 'The Satork'. Hence Aza and Vita going betrothed to one another. Aza isn't enslaved in a traditional sense, but he is a slave to his duties I guess. As for the Sato they are considered hermaphrodites, but thanks to all the toxins from the war, there genes had mutated. Now they are either becoming sterile or becoming a life giver as they are called (becoing just able to give life but not bear it) now the Sato'swhole culture is crumbling. While the Junirk have lost mostly their women, so yes they are kidnapping mostly females. They still are still taking some males, but they mostly need the females.
I hope this helps thanks again.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: July 27 2012 03:30 pm