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Title: Captured Dreams.

cute story...keep the updates coming



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Thank you. I apperciate the time you took to review. It really means alot to me.

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 26 2012 03:14 pm
Title: Captured Dreams.

i likey...



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Thank you!

 Reviewer: IRJunkie Signed [Report This]
Date: July 26 2012 03:28 am
Title: Captured Dreams.

Does this alien have any redeeming qualities? I really don.'t like him. Thanks

Author's Response:

Um...well...he does, but they are hard to see. You won't really see them until later on. Aza is a real jerk but that is because most of his people are. They will learn though, hopefully. Thank you for taking the time to review I really apperciate it.

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 26 2012 02:08 am
Title: Captured Dreams.

I like please update soon



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. I am already workin on the next chapter. I hope it will be to your liking.

 Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 26 2012 12:28 am
Title: The old lion.

OMG!!!



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Thank you.

 Reviewer: Insomniac Sioj Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 25 2012 11:49 pm
Title: Captured Dreams.

Aza is an alien ahole, so I can't want for him to fall the human.  Why does Aza hate humans but females particularly?  Is she still on Earth?  This story has definitely peaked my interest so please continue.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing I really apperciate it.

He his race doesn't have gender distenction. They have those that give life, and then those that bear it. He finds most humans weak and emotionally driven. The female's being the worse. The Sato is all about self pleasure and dominance. Who can I top, and will it bring me amusement is basically how his race thinks. They are a very agressive people and enjoy causeing others to suffer, though it really isn't there faults. Its just a viscious cycle, since that is all they are taught. An yes they are still on earth for now.

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 25 2012 10:58 pm
Title: Captured Dreams.

Good chapter I hope that he starts to treat her nice or maybe his boss will take her from the evil alien. Please update asap good story

Author's Response:

Thank you. Your review has really made my day and is making me want to right the next chapter straight away. However I hope you can grin and bare with me, casue to be honest its only going to get worse before it gets better.

 Reviewer: primesgirl4 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 25 2012 09:50 pm
Title: The old lion.

I really like the beginning of your story. I'm not a big fan of sci-fi so I don't usually read them but this is very intriguing. I'm ready to know what happens next. Great start.



Author's Response:

Thank yous so much, that really means alot to me. I hope I don't disappoint you.

 Reviewer: AP Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 24 2012 10:04 pm
Title: The old lion.

Wow, that's a really good beginning. Looking forward to reading the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you very much.

 Reviewer: Tanya Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 24 2012 11:48 am
Title: The old lion.

Wow he is a creepy idiot. How old is the captive. She seems like she could be in her twenties but I don't think that she is a child. Thanks

Author's Response:

No she isn't a child. In fact she is turning twenty two soon. The easiest way to describe her is just the fact that she is that weird imature kid who never grew up. Even now that the world his falling to it's knees, she holds on to her childish antics and comforts becasue that is all she has right now.

Carla is a mixture of me when I was a teeanger and also she has alot of my faults. I was kind of imature, *carrying my stuff simba around in my backpack", and I am clumsy, and basically blind. I just wanted to create a character that I could relate too mostly. Thanks alos for your review it made my day.

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 24 2012 07:22 am
Title: The old lion.

Wow, definitively gonna love it, what an imagination. Really well done. I can't wait to see her melt his heart ! Go on, suprise me !



Author's Response:

I will do my best to surprise you. To be honest I surprised myself, this story is based off of a dream I had. Thank you for your review.

 Reviewer: Peanut Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 24 2012 06:35 am
Title: The old lion.

Great start!  I love sci-fi, so I am definitely looking forward to more.  Thank you for sharing!



Author's Response:

No thank you for taking the time and reading. I apperciate your review.

 Reviewer: idriveavitz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 24 2012 04:43 am


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