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Title: Said the Spider to the Fly

Nice... continue plz?

 Reviewer: swirly_girl Signed [Report This]
Date: February 15 2016 05:31 am
Title: Said the Spider to the Fly

Why didn't you finish this story😭😭😭 ? It's spooky good.

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Date: March 09 2015 11:30 pm
Title: Come Into My Web

Please, please limit your paragraphs to no more than about 8 or 9 sentences. Your paragraphs are too big, it's a bit much to read... Gives the impression the dialogue will go on forever. I hope you don't mind the constructive criticism.

 Reviewer: swirly_girl Signed [Report This]
Date: February 25 2015 02:42 am
Title: Come Into My Web

So...will you, ever, continue this story? 

 Reviewer: Katt Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 13 2014 03:16 am
Title: Said the Spider to the Fly

Pretty good, too wordy at times, but can't wait to read the updates.

 Reviewer: swirly_girl Signed [Report This]
Date: September 18 2014 05:19 am
Title: Said the Spider to the Fly

Whoop whoop! Love this story so far. Update soon please! 

 Reviewer: Gothic-Innocence16 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 06 2014 03:15 pm
Title: Said the Spider to the Fly

This story rocks n wish u could update this please. ...

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Date: January 29 2014 07:53 pm
Title: Said the Spider to the Fly

I would like to know if you will continue with this story, I find it very interesting  and I would love to read more  about Noah and Eliza....................................

 Reviewer: Maria Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 29 2014 06:22 pm
Title: Said the Spider to the Fly

Update

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Date: May 30 2013 03:13 pm
Title: Said the Spider to the Fly

Loved it. don't know why you don't continue.

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Date: May 27 2013 03:00 pm
Title: Said the Spider to the Fly

Damn that was hot! More please! I guess I am an undercover submissive! ooooh spank me,baby!

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Date: April 01 2013 11:56 pm
Title: Said the Spider to the Fly

I am not quite sure of the world of BDSM, but for some strange reasson, the way Noah makes Eliza cum just from a look or a word is enough to make me venture into the unknown and take a "test drive".

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Date: December 23 2012 07:06 am
Title: Come Into My Web

Feening!!! Why do you all do this to us?!!? Get us all hooked on the good stuff then disappear!!

Please update soon! 

I gotta know what that little silver object is and what the heck he's fixin ta do with it! *grinning devilishly*

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Date: November 16 2012 02:43 am
Title: Said the Spider to the Fly

What's next? What happens next? 

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Date: October 23 2012 04:08 am
Title: Said the Spider to the Fly

I loved is and I can't wait until you update more. UPDATE SOON!!!!!!

 Reviewer: BLU Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 12 2012 12:39 am
Title: Said the Spider to the Fly

waiting for the next update.

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Date: October 02 2012 02:30 am
Title: Said the Spider to the Fly

Amazinnnggg please keep udating

 Reviewer: Chasz143 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 16 2012 08:29 am
Title: Said the Spider to the Fly

Damn! This story in intense and hawt!

 Reviewer: aprilfool Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 19 2012 06:12 pm
Title: Come Into My Web

I liked it but felt Eliza should have inquired more about being his sub before saying yes. It was like signing a contract but not reading it. I thought *that* was queer but other wise I highly enjoyed Noah. My kind of Dom

 Reviewer: Lynn Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 15 2012 10:11 pm
Title: Come Into My Web

That was amazing. You're an excellent writer!

 Reviewer: Lola Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 13 2012 06:05 am
Title: Said the Spider to the Fly

Strange but interesting.Waiting for more story and interaction between Noah and Eliza though outside of the office,but Noah is a little cold and intense...Sort of scary actually,lol

 Reviewer: cocoablue Signed [Report This]
Date: August 13 2012 04:44 am
Title: Said the Spider to the Fly

Noah, is a bad boy, She has no idea what she is saying yes too, but I do not doubt she will love it. Mousy no more.

 Reviewer: bayoumomma Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 12 2012 11:09 pm
Title: Said the Spider to the Fly

Loved it!!! I don't think that poor child realizes what she just agreed to..

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Date: August 11 2012 04:34 pm
Title: Said the Spider to the Fly

mmmm.

 Reviewer: cuppacoffee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 11 2012 04:28 pm
Title: Said the Spider to the Fly

I love it 

Eliza is my type of girl but at one point i would like her to shock him and step out of her usual self. I think Noah will fall in love with her first in the long run 

 Reviewer: Jovana Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 11 2012 03:23 pm


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