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Title: Chapter 14 All's Well that Ends Well

When is the next series starting?

 Reviewer: great story Anonymous starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 26 2014 02:29 pm
Title: Chapter 1 Why Do Fools Fall in Love?

Wow... Compatiable freaks....I'm speechless

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Date: May 27 2013 03:10 am
Title: Chapter 14 All's Well that Ends Well

enjoyed and laugh, good  story,

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Date: April 23 2013 09:54 pm
Title: Chapter 14 All's Well that Ends Well

enjoyed and laugh, good  story,

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Date: April 23 2013 09:54 pm
Title: Chapter 14 All's Well that Ends Well

Sweet ending! I love the Gringales! Well, most of them!

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Date: October 18 2012 07:34 pm
Title: Chapter 14 All's Well that Ends Well

Loved the update!!

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Date: October 16 2012 08:03 pm
Title: Chapter 14 All's Well that Ends Well

Thanks for a great read. Glad that Cara and Stephen are so compatible.

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Date: October 16 2012 11:54 am
Title: Chapter 1 Why Do Fools Fall in Love?

Thanks for finishing this story. U are the greatest. I wish you can fininsh ur other stories. I think u have three outstanding. Carrying the good work

 Reviewer: NK Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 16 2012 09:33 am
Title: Chapter 14 All's Well that Ends Well

Well done! Great ending.

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Date: October 16 2012 07:41 am
Title: Chapter 14 All's Well that Ends Well

Awesome ending!!! I can't wait for the next installment with little Miss Hot Pants, Gretchen.

Thanks for finishing up your other stories, it's really appreciated....

 Reviewer: LadyeT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 16 2012 04:40 am
Title: Chapter 14 All's Well that Ends Well

I enjoyed the story between Cara and Stephen. It was fun watching Cara grow from a shy insecure girl to a confident woman. Stephen needs to learn to respect the safe word and Cara's uterus needs a breather.

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Date: October 16 2012 03:47 am
Title: Chapter 14 All's Well that Ends Well

Thanks for writing such a wonderful story.

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Date: October 16 2012 01:19 am
Title: Chapter 14 All's Well that Ends Well

Ah that was a sweet ending Cara and Stephan love them some them.

Stephan doesn't listen very well LOL! What was the point of a safe word when he didn't take heed to it.  LOL!  I wonder who is going to win out on Cara getting her tubes tied....Hmmm for now it is Cara in favor but who knows what the future may bring and she talking about 4 babies are enough who's to say it's not twins again.

I have truly enjoyed this couple and story.  Thank you so much for sharing.  I can't wait to see what you have if anything for them in the future.

Happy writing.

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Date: October 16 2012 12:39 am
Title: Chapter 14 All's Well that Ends Well

I loved this story Brenda especially the growth of Cara.  Meeting and falling in love with Stephan was the best thing to happen to Cara.  Meeting him caused Cara to grow in both mental and emotional maturity.  I love how Stephan loves Cara and his children.    It's unfortunate the Uncle Douglas did learn anything in his old age.  When the story ended Uncle Douglas is just numb in the head as he was in the beginning.  Most excellent!!

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Date: October 16 2012 12:12 am
Title: Chapter 14 All's Well that Ends Well

GREAT JOB

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Date: October 15 2012 09:51 pm
Title: Chapter 14 All's Well that Ends Well

Awesome ending. Love these two. Gretchen is a mess!!

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Date: October 15 2012 09:38 pm
Title: Chapter 14 All's Well that Ends Well

Great!!! I really enjoyed this story...

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Date: October 15 2012 07:57 pm
Title: Chapter 1 Why Do Fools Fall in Love?

Excellent update! You are super talented, and I love all your stories! I'm looking forward to the final chapter. Bittersweet though because this awesome story is ending. 

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Date: October 10 2012 08:12 am
Title: Chapter 13 Happy Endings

EXCELLENT!!!! I love this story, definitely one of your best.

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Date: October 10 2012 05:24 am
Title: Chapter 13 Happy Endings

Ok, married finally. Good deal.

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Date: October 10 2012 04:04 am
Title: Chapter 13 Happy Endings

My goodness. Gretchen is a hoot. Poor Julius. He doesn't yet understand what he's gotten himself into. I hope he doesn't hurt Gretchen. He's vulnerable right now and could easily be enamored by someone who's giving him all kinds of ego-boosting attention. I'd like to see more of them. Looking forward to the next update.

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Date: October 09 2012 08:48 am
Title: Chapter 13 Happy Endings

Loved it!! Gretchen is a lil firecracker!! Poor uncle Douglas!! He's getting more than he bargained for !!

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Date: October 09 2012 04:11 am
Title: Chapter 13 Happy Endings

Love this story!!! So happy for Gretchen and Julius...if I can have vote, I'd want more of their storytold...if catching Gretchen and Julius post-coitus wasn't enough to kill off that old fart...nothing will...but I'd love to read how that relationship turns out...and of course, I can't wait until Stephan and Cara can really celebrate their union...so sad to see this story go, but I know you will take it out with a bang!!! Great writing as always, Brenda...

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Date: October 09 2012 02:50 am
Title: Chapter 13 Happy Endings

loved it cant wait for the end update soon.

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Date: October 09 2012 01:39 am
Title: Chapter 13 Happy Endings

loved it cant wait for the end update soon.

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Date: October 09 2012 01:39 am


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