This story's main character sound exactly like someone i know.
Reviewer: Afofon 3rys Signed [Report This]Date: November 07 2016 03:43 pm
It's so sweet and simple. I really like it! Just a modern love story without the complications and all the drama. It's not far from perfect to me!
Reviewer: Lyllii Signed [Report This]Date: November 22 2014 02:17 pm
This is soooo beautiful and well written. I really don't like first POV, but this story was very sweet and direct. I can't describe how much I really liked it. Plus this is so close to home for me too, I am sociable and loud but very much anti-social. I love being at home and doing things alone. Rarely go out alone or with family and friends.
You killed me softly with this story and now I want to go out and find my own 'Park' LOL!!!!
Great JOB!! :D
Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 14 2014 08:50 am
Very beautiful story, especially for an introvert like me.
Reviewer: Leo the Yardie Chick Signed [Report This]Date: March 22 2013 09:07 pm
This was really cute. I liked it. The only problem that I saw was that dialogue tags were ocassionally left out.
Reviewer: Flicker and Sparkle Signed [Report This]Date: February 15 2013 03:41 am
What a beautiful read. How lucky was she to find her true mate that likes what she does being alone together. Thanks for a wonderful story.
Reviewer: divsionred Anonymous [Report This]Date: February 15 2013 01:28 am
You really are a great, developing young writer. Sweet story
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: February 13 2013 08:45 pm
I've just stumbled upon u're work and I must say that I really like it. Please write more stories.
Reviewer: MI97 Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 26 2012 09:59 am
This story was great! I love how simple and sweet their relationship is. Also who is that you casted as Park? He's sexy!
Author's Response:
Thank you! So glad you liked it! I used Tony Or, he's a model. I found him on modelsofcolor.tumblr. He is indeed sexy.
Reviewer: EvaJaye Signed [Report This]Date: October 28 2012 07:36 am
Really sweet story. I can relate to Jessica, but being like that is a good and kinda bad thing. But anyway I liked it!!! :-)
Reviewer: Loop Signed [Report This]Date: October 21 2012 09:59 pm
Nice story..I can relate to Jessica's character quite a bit.
Reviewer: Natori aka R Signed [Report This]Date: October 16 2012 06:03 pm
Sigh. Such a lovely story. The voice is so strong, and the descriptions have this quality to them where they suggest a lot without actually saying too much. Kind of like Jessica, actually.
But my favorite part? "I decided that I loved him too." That she said "decided". I love that it was a choice and not some vague, indefinable feeling that just overwhlemed her.
Author's Response:
Wow. I really can't say thank you enough for this review. Words like these make me want to write more. I truely appreciate it.
Reviewer: curiouslyamused Signed [Report This]Date: October 16 2012 09:57 am
I really like this story. It's not often you get the POV of the truly anti-social character. Very nice one shot!
Reviewer: fancyfree Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 15 2012 01:34 am
I enjoyed this story. I wouldn't necessarily call Jessica anti-social, just someone who really enjoys her alone time. Park seems super sweet. ^_^
Reviewer: Elektralyte Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 14 2012 08:03 pm
Lovley one shot! I loved it. EVERYTHING. It was a great read.
Reviewer: readlover Signed [Report This]Date: October 13 2012 10:07 pm
Very nice. I liked your story.
Reviewer: ShelbyD Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 13 2012 05:35 am
This was really good. I enjoyed.
Thanks
Reviewer: The Girl next door Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 12 2012 05:31 pm
This is truly a lovely story. Well written.
Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 12 2012 12:26 pm
Those two are perfect for each other and Jessica's mother should be that her daughter found someone. Thanks for sharing.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: October 12 2012 05:13 am
beautiful story, refreshing. i feel like the main character is me
Reviewer: FindingMyself Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 12 2012 04:57 am
Good story ... I don't like change . : )
Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 12 2012 04:23 am
Sweet! There is love for everyeone even the loners:)
Reviewer: Drea Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 12 2012 04:06 am