Reviews For Born to sin
Title: Chapter 24

I just started reading this story and it captivated me from the very beginning. This story is very intriguing. Your writing seems effortless. If there were any mistakes, I did not notice, the story is that good. I will however, try to keep an eye out in future. LOL!

Happy to see positive black heroes, you don't get much of those unless you are Brenda Jackson and Beverly Jenkins to name a few. 

Keep it up. Thank you for the updates, looking forward to seeing this story through.

Reviewer: Sarah Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 24 2017 06:26 pm

Title: Chapter 24

I'm glad they survived the attack but I will be honest and say I don't really remember what's going on in this story. Maybe when I have the time and patience I will re-read it. She accepted their bond, that's good. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: July 18 2017 08:28 pm

Title: Chapter 23

You have done a marvelous job of painting the minds eye with your words. I look forward to each new update.

Reviewer: Lovely Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 31 2016 06:11 am

Title: Chapter 23

Who is that? I bet it's their old grandmother... Man seriously... These guys are need to get it together and fight this mess!

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: January 28 2016 01:48 am

Title: Chapter 22

Oh crap! Where in the world is the uncle??? Is Kianna okay? What does this damn girl have to do to accept their bond? She's messing everything up. What if they kill him? Kill any of them? I hope she remembers her training.

Update soon!!!

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: January 15 2016 04:42 am

Title: Chapter 21

Aww, it must hurt to have your mate tell you that. They know you are supposed to be together but I'm going to fight it anyway.

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: January 15 2016 04:34 am

Title: Chapter 20

Girl you are stuck with his fine ass!!! Not a bad life though. LOl. I loved that history lesson. It's sad that the African American race has fallen into that mindset and that we as a people still live in that cage.

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: January 15 2016 04:26 am

Title: Chapter 19

She definitely needs to learn that trick. I'm glad she isn't a dark creature anymore

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: January 15 2016 04:16 am

Title: note

I think your story is great so far. I would maybe add more detail. So that we understand everything that's happening. Maybe more background of how these different lives work or something.

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: January 15 2016 04:11 am

Title: Chapter 18

What in the fuck?! A snake fell out of her hand! Is this how he's going to get the darkness out of her or something.

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: January 15 2016 04:08 am

Title: Chapter 17

Awww, poor sissy. I know she will make it. Her soul mate is within reach!

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: January 15 2016 04:00 am

Title: Chapter 16

I knew it!!!! He can talk to dead people and they are soul mates. Ha!!!

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: January 15 2016 03:54 am

Title: Chapter 15

Oh wow. So she is going to have to kill Sam and her sister can save her soul too. I wonder if his uncle is her soul mate?

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: January 15 2016 03:46 am

Title: Chapter 14

Lol hell naw. How did she get on that plane? And he read her thoughts. Dang

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Date: January 15 2016 03:40 am

Title: Chapter 13

Oh shit! Now Tom is going to come after Sam and Kye. Dang, they need to kill Ankah

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Date: January 15 2016 03:33 am

Title: Chapter 12

No freaking way!!!! He lifted the curse from her! Yay Super excited

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: January 15 2016 03:27 am

Title: Chapter 11

Lol. What in the hell?! Did she kill him? Is she not cursed anymore?

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Date: January 15 2016 03:21 am

Title: Chapter 10

Oh wow... I wonder how she's going to get her energy up without killing someone?

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: January 15 2016 03:15 am

Title: Chapter 9

Why in the hell is she telling him anything? You are right! You don't know him. Get it together girl, shut up and take the ride

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: January 15 2016 03:08 am

Title: Chapter 8

Nice to put faces to names. Lol

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: January 15 2016 03:01 am

Title: Chapter 7

Wow... So it's been over a month and she still hasn't killed. Extremely strong to say to least.

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: January 15 2016 02:59 am

Title: Chapter 6

Oh wow. So he can tell the future and past... Interesting. He was going to kill Sam!! Dang girl, 6 men in 4 days. My goodness, she is eating good. Why does he want to kill Kye now? She didn't do anything. You said yourself that she wasn't tainted! Leave her alone

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: January 15 2016 02:52 am

Title: Chapter 5

Oh no! Sam is going to be killing whore!! That's horrible. So each one has a special power or something? What are Sam's and Kye's powers going to be? Will they have to fight each other?

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: January 15 2016 02:31 am

Title: Chapter 5

Oh no! Sam is going to be killing whore!! That's horrible. So each one has a special power or something? What are Sam's and Kye's powers going to be? Will they have to fight each other?

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: January 15 2016 02:31 am

Title: Chapter 4

Wow... So be a killing whore or live a life on the run. What a decision. Lol

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: January 15 2016 02:26 am



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