Title: Chapter 1

Good  start , but  are they  going  to  war with  each  other  or against  other  people  

Reviewer: ushergal Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 17 2014 11:33 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Very promising. I'm on board.

Reviewer: AP Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 04 2012 04:37 am

Title: Chapter 1

Nice start but a little short....More please

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 04 2012 03:52 am

Title: Chapter 1

Good start. Can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 04 2012 01:59 am

Title: Chapter 1

Good start

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 04 2012 01:48 am

Title: Chapter 1

Aww, snap! That was good, more please!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 04 2012 01:46 am



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