Reviews For The Less Fortunate
Title: Get it Over With

Great update. Terri's icy shell is slowly cracking. Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 09 2013 03:36 am

Title: Get it Over With

I am so glad he is following up and taking some form of control. she will not like him long term if he doesn't. great update. glad you softened her up some too.

Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 09 2013 01:25 am

Title: Get it Over With

Eureka, Terri finally wants to change. Danny is a hottie and please don't sign that contract Terri stuck on stupid and glued to dumb!  

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 09 2013 12:16 am

Title: Love Without Tragedy

Glad he is starting to stand up for himself. 

 

 

 

Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 07 2013 04:05 am

Title: Love Without Tragedy

Terri must want Daniel bad

Reviewer: nightseer Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 02 2013 03:08 am

Title: Love Without Tragedy

wow she wants him

Reviewer: faye Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 01 2013 02:06 am

Title: Love Without Tragedy

I just read this story and I am hooked on it.  Terri needs to get a life and Daniel deserves a better one than on the street.  I hope Daniel fights to stay signed on with Terri and not Alonzo.  Is Terri really so afraid of her growing attraction to Daniel.  I can just imagine his smirk...yeah, that "Damon" smirk is a "killer" of women's resistance, everywhere. LOL.

Looking forward to more updates.

Nyeesha 

Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 31 2013 08:37 pm

Title: What Now

This story is so good!  It can't be drawing to conclusion yet!  Why you may ask?  First, we NEED for the romance to blossum and for her to let Daniel in behind that wall she's built up and she needs to reap the benefits for finding him and not ALONZO! 

Second, I really really want Daniel's family to see him succeed as a top model and that he did it without them.  I want them to realize that he's his own man now with his own life and let them be the ones to say, "That's my son"  when they look at a TV commercial or a magazine with a doze of humble pie.

Third, the've both been out of commission for a while so I know that they will surely rock each other's world when the romance goes to another level.

And finally, this story is just so good that it can't end yet, OK?

 



Author's Response:

haha you're amazing :DDD

i MIGHT make it over 10 chapters, but it's a little hard for me to write long chapters so they'll have to be smaller than normal

but you're right. i have a lot to cover lol i'm excited!

Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 31 2013 01:47 pm

Title: Love Without Tragedy

Good job



Author's Response:

thanks for reading :)

Reviewer: Emy Signed [Report This]
Date: May 31 2013 08:45 am

Title: Love Without Tragedy

Good chapter . Can't wait for more .

 

Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 31 2013 05:07 am

Title: Love Without Tragedy

wtf why?!!?!?!



Author's Response:

answers are coming your way ma'am :)

Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 31 2013 02:08 am

Title: Love Without Tragedy

She has the HOTTZ! For Daniel! Is that why she is ending the contract? I guess she isn't trying to be like Samantha and Smith (sex and the city). Manager/lover relationship. Good update!

 

 



Author's Response:

lol i'm glad you guys can see the attraction without me actually spelling it out for ya'll. i don't like being cliche so that MIGHT be the reading haha

thanks for reading!

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 31 2013 01:39 am

Title: Love Without Tragedy

WHAAT!?  Why sign with Lopez!  That's insane!  Daniel is about to blow-uuup as a male model, and Terri stands to make a small fortune b/c of his success (that's why Alonzo was trying to recruit him in the first place, plus, I don't trust Lopez's motives or methods at all), why sabotage your professional and financial growth now?  aah...I know why...she's got it bad for Daniel that's why- hell, I don't blame her but still I think she's making a professional and personal mistake.  Daniel is fantastic for her - they're good for each other and I hope he has the backbone to turn her down.

I like this story.  Daniel is hawt! That smirk at the end of the runway works for me too. lol.

Update soon



Author's Response:

LOL! i don't like lopez either. every story needs a villian, right?

they are good for each other though. maybe that's why she's scared.

i'll be updating soon!!!

btw, ian somerhalder's smirk gives me life

Reviewer: JV4ME Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 31 2013 01:22 am

Title: Nobody's Business

I don't know if 10 chapters will be enough. Seems like it will take 9 chapters to get go the bottom of why Terri has such a bad attitude. I say give the story at the very least 20 chapters. 10 for Terri' s hangups and 10 for romance.

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 31 2013 01:07 am

Title: Love Without Tragedy

What the hell is doing giving his contract to Alonzo?  I  can't stand the man he should receive an atomic wedgie everyday!!!  She is so attracted to Daniel and it scares her.  He was right Terri you have to let someone in, not everyone is like that jackass that scammed you.  Relate, relax and release Terri!!



Author's Response:

girl...

let me tell you...this woman does not think clearly when it comes to developing emotions for people. i hope she takes your advice ;)

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 31 2013 12:56 am

Title: Nobody's Business

I like the story I just hope he mans up a little more stop being such a scaredy cat with her. I also hope she softens some no need to be so rude and mean to him. Its uncalled for and unprofessional besides being a turn off with her personlity. I love the fact she is a professional! Good job

Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 27 2013 01:05 pm

Title: Nobody's Business

I did not rate/review until now because I wanted to get a feel in what direction the story was taking. Although it is early, I have a good feeling about the story concept, and I think although different from your other story it will be just as good, maybe even better than you will expect! So for right now I am giving you an 8.75.

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 26 2013 07:26 pm

Title: Nobody's Business

Good update. I really liked this chapter . Sadly I can totally relate to Terri . Can't wait to read more .

Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 24 2013 06:03 am

Title: Nobody's Business

I love your story.  I hope Daniel is the one to break through that wall of Terri's.

Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 23 2013 12:19 pm

Title: Nobody's Business

:)

Reviewer: Emy Signed [Report This]
Date: May 23 2013 12:17 pm

Title: Nobody's Business

Terri's emotional wall is going to down like the Hindenburg!  Daniel is sweetheart keep that asshole Alonzo away from him!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 22 2013 11:32 pm

Title: No Love Allowed

Loved the update! Hope Terri gives hime a chance!

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 08 2013 05:16 am

Title: No Love Allowed

Great update!

Reviewer: Anna Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 08 2013 03:03 am

Title: No Love Allowed

Good update . I'm ready for more let's bring on the sexy Daniel !

Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 08 2013 12:49 am

Title: No Love Allowed

Loved it! Please update soon. Daniel has a huge crush on Terri.

Reviewer: oHH Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 07 2013 07:14 pm



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