Daniel is freaking hot snd Terri is jonsing! I am realky impressed yo u wrote this off the top of your head, amazing. I sm loving the lenght and the pacing of the story! Keep it coming sister!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: March 07 2013 02:21 pm
Of the to of your head? This is talent! I love this story. I know school can be demanding, but this was well worth the wait and it only made me want more! Please update when you can. I'll be waiting!
Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]Date: March 07 2013 11:23 am
I like it! Next shell be teaching him how to pose and walk i suppose? Then theyll bring him into the office? Shell fall for him and he for her... then hell blow up and she will get jealous when he starts seeing some barbie wannabe?
Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed [Report This]Date: March 07 2013 09:26 am
:) up date soon
Reviewer: Emy Signed [Report This]Date: March 07 2013 08:47 am
I was thinking about how irrelevant this chapter was until I got to the end. Good job
Reviewer: Emy Signed [Report This]Date: March 07 2013 08:24 am
Sexy and it fits. :)
Reviewer: Emy Signed [Report This]Date: March 07 2013 08:13 am
Sexy and it fits. :)
Reviewer: Emy Signed [Report This]Date: March 07 2013 08:13 am
While Jerome did an absolutely despicable thing, Terri shouldn't take it out on the entire homesless population thereafter! Talk about holding a grudge!
I am wondering now how Daniel is going to navigate what seems to be prior knowledge of Laila in all of this. Not sure he wants to explain everything.
Laila really is a sweetie.
Nice!
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: March 07 2013 08:07 am
at least this one will not screw around with her like Jaquille. LOL
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: March 07 2013 07:25 am
WTH, is right. I would have found out something about him well before the tenth date.
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: March 07 2013 07:18 am
I like. Terri is all business for now. She found her model,or should I say Lay found her a model.
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: March 07 2013 07:12 am
i love the interaction between the characters
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: March 07 2013 06:31 am
wow love this story.. dying to see more daniel terri interactions..wow ian somerhalder is daniel that is so exciting...dying to see how he looks as a model...update sooon!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 20 2013 07:50 pm
Grea!t next =]
Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed [Report This]Date: January 19 2013 05:57 pm
Very interesting. I wonder what Jerome is doing now?
Reviewer: juno Signed [Report This]Date: January 19 2013 02:57 am
Interesting update! Can't wait to see what happened next! Wow,was Jerome homeless?!!
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: January 19 2013 01:38 am
So the roles are reversed, yet she's still the one dealing with a homeless person? I guess I have to wait for the rest because I still don't see why that would make her so unsympathetic, on its face. Unless Jerome did something else. There is a risk with that, now that she knows. We'll see.
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: January 18 2013 11:58 pm
Update Soon!
Reviewer: Dreamingofalifetime Signed [Report This]Date: January 18 2013 11:31 pm
Uh-oh. What is Jerome doing?
Reviewer: Dreamingofalifetime Signed [Report This]Date: January 18 2013 11:31 pm
Looking back on the past could be really hard especially when someone is living two lives. Jerome is trying to be someone else.
Reviewer: nightseer Signed [Report This]Date: January 18 2013 11:18 pm
Fantastic chapter, Terri's past seems interesting. Can't wait to read more!!!
Reviewer: Annie Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 18 2013 09:49 pm
Jerome is homeless, first I want to know what happened that caused him to homeless? Second, how long as he been homeless? Third, has he stolen anything from Teri? Fourth, does he expect him to invite him to stay? I hope that Teri wouldn't be that stupid!! What is a homeless dude doing macking on a women when he don't have a pot to piss or a place to lay his head? Some nerve, Teri kick him to curb.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: January 18 2013 09:30 pm
lovely update, please continue...MORE
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: January 18 2013 09:13 pm