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Title: two : the business of being mortal

The goddesses are funny and you can already see parts of their personality. I wonder if Achilles' one night stand was with Vesta, can't wait to meet her. 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing, dear :] And good, I did want them all to be contrastive in their own personas and how the respond to Achilles. We'll just have to see about Vesta, now, won't we? ;]

 Reviewer: AP Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 06 2013 02:02 pm
Title: two : the business of being mortal

Loving it so far!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much, dear! :]

 Reviewer: kimyso Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 06 2013 06:40 am
Title: two : the business of being mortal

Good and funny update .



Author's Response:

Hahaha thanks, I tried. Writing humor is kinda difficult to be honest, but I must not have done too shabby a job!

 Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 06 2013 05:18 am
Title: two : the business of being mortal

Interesting start!

Author's Response:

Thanks, glad you enjoyed :]

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 06 2013 05:04 am
Title: two : the business of being mortal

I  can't wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Yaaaay! :] Thanks, hun!

 Reviewer: chatty504 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 06 2013 02:34 am


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