Noemi is beautiful...
Reviewer: nightseer Signed [Report This]Date: January 19 2013 08:50 pm
I want to see where this is going in your author's mind because it seems like every urban cliche there is is in this story.
Also, Ky brought her roommate with her, but she leaves her like that? She didn't seem like she wanted her there all that much in my oipinion; but to just leave her like that, no matter if she did ask her (which I don't know if she did), is rude as hell to me. She leaves her in a place where she is uncomfortable at, and alone with people she doesn't know. I don't think anyone would appreciate that.
I don't Lincoln is that kind of a bad guy, really. He was in school trying to do better in life when this mess happened. He is still young enough get something done.
Interested where this goes.....
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: January 19 2013 08:35 pm
That was awesome, Emily is evil. Lincoln you were stupid you should have wrapped it up becasue now you are stuck with a woman that you never loved. What made Emily think that she was keeper? I really wanted to see Ruthie get in that heifer's ass that would have been freaking amazing. It's not over, Emily ain't finished she is going to try to keep Lincoln away from his baby. That fool Silas I have now lost all respect for his ass. Nothing but bad karma is heading Silas's and Emily's way. I am so looking forward to ways that you will make them pay!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: January 19 2013 08:14 pm
Debbi Morgan, so awesome she is one of my favorite actresses. That little girl is a cutie, such a sweet face. Loving this story!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: January 19 2013 07:59 pm
nice pics
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: January 19 2013 07:34 pm
Wow...Great update...More please
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: January 19 2013 05:07 pm
Loved the update! More please.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: January 17 2013 05:25 am
There reunion was so sweet, Lincoln had tears in his eyes, that is man comfortable in his manhood!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: January 16 2013 09:46 pm
Well, I'm curious to see this story unfold because the premise has someone saying Lincoln is bad for Ky, so I want to see how, exactly. You have them as BFF's and wanna-be lovers, and then she went off to make something of herself. What happened with him?
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: January 16 2013 08:21 pm
i like what you have so far and can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: sandradee Signed [Report This]Date: January 16 2013 06:56 pm
Love it! Kind of upset you accidentally deleted it! Bbbuuuttttt this story is still amazing! Update soon please!! I'll be waiting!!(:
Reviewer: Kissrole Signed [Report This]Date: January 16 2013 05:06 pm
Did you re-post these chapters? Or were there edits done?
Still a 10!!<3
Reviewer: idiotendenial Signed [Report This]Date: January 16 2013 03:40 pm
I want to read more, seems like a very good story
Reviewer: keikei2 Signed [Report This]Date: January 16 2013 01:08 pm