It seems that Mac has made quit an impression! It ain't good one!! Lol, I love Mia's family! They are annoying as hell. Please continue!
Author's Response:
I know right FAMILY UGGGHH lol !!! and the impressions are interesting, all Mac wants is a tumble in the sheets. Update comming i swear.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
[Report This]Date: February 14 2013 02:08 pm
Awesome cast, hot men are always a plus!
Author's Response:
I knoowww right! lol Update comming soon i promise
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: February 14 2013 01:40 pm
More please. I want some fire.
Author's Response:
lol their will be i promise. i do have an exam friday so i have to study but im trying to write on study breaks so that will be updated soon maybe tomorrow night, but if not friday maybe. Thanks for the review though. i appreciate the read.
Reviewer: Sharise Signed [Report This]Date: February 13 2013 11:21 pm
Great update. I like the background info on Mac; explains why he's so harsh in his dealings with women. Hana is oh so funny. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response:
Thanks, yeah Mac isint the spoiled rich boy we all thought he was, and more is to come dont worry. Hana is hilarious and shes a really good friend i appreciate her. Welp better get back to writing.. Thanks for the review :)
Reviewer: AP Anonymous [Report This]Date: February 13 2013 12:50 pm
So has Mila just been really sheltered? Because I'm gonna need for her to know that Mac is running game hard right now. I'm not sure if Hana will end up with Mickey or Jackson.Thanks for the description btw, I assumed she was a straight up white girl.
Author's Response:
Mila, hasnt had a boyfriend before, so she doesnt really know the tricks of the trade or how to flirt and Mac is the complete opposite, well he doesnt date as much as devour. and Hana's story is still a mystery to me. I dont think il write a whole story about her but she will end up with someone by the end of this one. And yeah i know, Hana is based off of a real friend of mine and she's almost the same as my real pal. lmao Thanks for reading and rating. STAY TUNED LOVE.
Reviewer: AP Anonymous [Report This]Date: February 12 2013 05:54 am
Looking forward to the next update
Author's Response:
Thanks im trying to decide what to do next. Stay tuned.
Reviewer: nightseer Signed [Report This]Date: February 12 2013 02:41 am
Mac is hot but why is he such an an ass? What woman pissed in his wheaties? I can't wait for Mila to put him in his place at least I hope that she does. Mac with his fine self requires an rude awakening!!! Hana is too funny but maybe she needs to go to AA. Mickey is an interesting character but I can see that he really cares about Mila.
Author's Response:
I just want you to know i literally laughed out loud when i read "What woman pissed in his wheaties?" BAHAHAHA that was hilarious. but all will be revealed im still learning about these two as well. Hana doesnt need AA but she may need anger management.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: February 12 2013 01:58 am
Go head Mila get your freak on with Mac!!! That was just too sexy!!!
Author's Response:
LMAO yessss i agree, but i think Mila's going to make him wait. Stay tuned and thanks for reading.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: February 12 2013 01:48 am
Bella is so cute, I just want to pick her up and kiss her all over her little face!! Two tasty men in one story, how will I read this story without drooling on my keyboard? Mac is feeling him some Doctor Mila!!!
Author's Response:
haha thank you for reading and a cast is comming soon dont worry. As for drooling i have no clue, i do that everytime i write about the man. But dont worry il update soon hopefully! Thanks for reading and rating.
Author's Response:
haha thank you for reading and a cast is comming soon dont worry. As for drooling i have no clue, i do that everytime i write about the man. But dont worry il update soon hopefully! Thanks for reading and rating.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: February 12 2013 01:39 am
Great chap.. Seems Mac just can't resist her
Author's Response:
Thanks!! Mac really cant as you will learn in the next chapter. Is he obsessed? we shall see huh!! Stay tuned for my next update love.
Reviewer: SandyBrownEyes Signed [Report This]Date: February 11 2013 06:43 am
Good chapter. I liked Mika and even Mac..lol!
Author's Response:
Yeah their both some weird characters!! and i understand the slight hesitaion to Mac but i like him secretly as well ;) !! Keep reading il be updating soon!
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: February 11 2013 05:30 am
Wow! Cliffhanger on the spicy part of the story.
Author's Response:
Hell yeahh!!! i kinda didnt know how i was gonna end it but i just typed and i loved where i was going with it. Stay tuned :)
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: February 11 2013 04:40 am
Can't wait for the followup.
Author's Response:
I cant either. I honestly have a plan for how i want the story to go, but this next chapter is tricky! Stay tuned.
Reviewer: AP Anonymous [Report This]Date: February 11 2013 03:59 am
Love it. You ar doing great for just starting today. Thanks for the same day update. Love this story.
Author's Response:
Aww thanks! And i know, i have such a drive to write. I am struggling on the next chapter but its comming slowly but surely.
Reviewer: Sharise Signed [Report This]Date: February 11 2013 03:28 am
keep adding more please its getting good
Author's Response:
For sure! I will of course. and thanks for the review. the next chapter will be up soon. Im trying to decide where to take the pair now. so many different options.
Reviewer: tiffany Anonymous [Report This]Date: February 11 2013 02:32 am
ooooooh this story is definitely warming up...can't wait to see what happens..eagerly waiting :))
Author's Response:
Ha ha! Ohhh stop youre making me blush. No seriously though thanks for the review. And i might have to keep yall waiting, im not really 100% sure what i want to happen next so stay tuned.
Reviewer: anony Anonymous [Report This]Date: February 11 2013 01:31 am
Good start, I like it so far.
Author's Response:
Thank you! All your kind words are greatly appreciated. Keep reading. i may update tonight :)
Reviewer: SandyBrownEyes Signed [Report This]Date: February 10 2013 09:49 pm
Great start to your first story :P
Author's Response:
Thank you, i was pretty nervous putting myself out there and posting a story. Im glad the feedback is positive.
Reviewer: AP Anonymous [Report This]Date: February 10 2013 09:08 pm
Good start. Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response:
Thank you!!! i really appreciate it! Im updating soon, can you believe i have the second chapter almost drafted out? im just so excited :)
Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous [Report This]Date: February 10 2013 08:26 pm
Me likey! More please.
Author's Response:
Thanks!! I dont believe i have ever been as excited as i have been all day. lol Im almost done with the next instalment so hold tight!!
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: February 10 2013 08:23 pm
So will they be at the club......
Author's Response:
I dont know.. Will they?? All im sayin is im almost done with the next chapter!! You'll See :)
Reviewer: nightseer Signed [Report This]Date: February 10 2013 08:05 pm
Great so far. Looking forward to how this goes. Please update soon and provide pics if you can.
Author's Response:
Hello, Thanks for the feedback and im working on some character pics, I know who i envision for Mac, but im not quite sure about Mila. Well see though! And im writing in a Word doc right now :)
Reviewer: Sharise Signed [Report This]Date: February 10 2013 06:45 pm
Great start. I can't wait for the next update so we can see what Mac thought of Mila!
Author's Response:
Thanks! And im working on it. But if you can tell Mac's a tough one, but maybe Mila can break his tough exterior! Writing now so hopefully it will be up soon!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: February 10 2013 06:30 pm
I absolutely love the introduction, you were able to give a visual discription of the characters and their personality....Please update soon
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! FIRST REVIEW WOOPD!! Anywho, I kind of struggled with that part so im glad you enjoyed the description of the characters, and Hana, Mickey, and Jackson will be described shortly so dont worry. Might be some suprises to them as well! Thanks im trying to iron out a new chapter now, i would like it to be the same length as the first so it might take me a few hours!!
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: February 10 2013 06:22 pm