I just loved it...
Author's Response:
???? Thanks i think lol! Stay tuned. Update is probably comming tomorow
Reviewer: nightseer Signed [Report This]Date: February 12 2013 02:01 am
Good start, the sex scene was nicely written.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! Stay tuened for more.
Reviewer: Natori aka R Signed [Report This]Date: February 11 2013 10:12 pm
That was hot, however if Lacey expects Liam to believe that she wants a divorce don't give him sex and have the divorce papers there waiting for his signature. Did Lacey not know that he was mobster before they married? Are going to use flashbacks to tell us how they met? Please post pictures of the cast. LIttle Bella seems like a cutie!! More please!!!
Author's Response:
SO MANY QUESTIONS THAT WILL BE ANSWERED SOON ENOUGH! Dont worry :) i got you!!! Thanks for the review and im working on a cast for ya as well.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: February 11 2013 09:29 pm
Good start . More ?
Author's Response:
Much much more. dont worry :) thanks stay tuned
Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous [Report This]Date: February 11 2013 09:09 pm
It nice for you frist sex peice. I look foward to reading more of your story. Is she going to stay or leave him? Look foward to more.
Author's Response:
Thanks!!! and to be honest im even going to be suprised by what lands on the paper! Stay tuned :)
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: February 11 2013 08:36 pm
For that being your 1st sex scene, you did GREAT!!! Loved it, can't wait to see what else you got cooking up. Thanks for sharing and thanks for responding to the Challenge!
Author's Response:
OMIGOD OMIGOD OMYYYGOD!! I cannot believe you read and rated my story! i appreciate the love!! And im looking foward to see what your cooking up as well as myself lol! Thanks again and please keep reading :)
Reviewer: Elizablu Signed [Report This]Date: February 11 2013 08:23 pm
great start add more
Author's Response:
Oh i will dont worry :) and thank you!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: February 11 2013 07:58 pm
Excellent. Can't wait for the nxt update
Author's Response:
Thank you! I am working on ideas now, i know what i want to do with it but the troubble is getting there!!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: February 11 2013 07:45 pm
I thought it was a great beginning
Author's Response:
Thanks!! Much appreciated, hopefully i can keep the steem and the motivation i have so far.
Reviewer: SandyBrownEyes Signed [Report This]Date: February 11 2013 07:43 pm