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Title: Chapter 1

 

Ding!! Ding!! Ding!! Updates please...

 Reviewer: CAColeman Signed [Report This]
Date: October 17 2013 04:06 am
Title: Chapter 1

 

UPDATES!!!!!!

 Reviewer: CAColeman Signed [Report This]
Date: October 08 2013 06:13 am
Title: Author's Note

i cant wait her parents are lucky i am not their daughter i would never stand for that!!!

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Date: June 15 2013 05:18 pm
Title: Author's Note

Thanks for the heads up.

 Reviewer: reader101 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 13 2013 02:22 am
Title: Author's Note

Will do as I love stories with Asian male leads!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 13 2013 12:33 am
Title: Chapter 14.1

Love your stories. Good story, but it's a little slow.

 Reviewer: lonieg Signed [Report This]
Date: June 08 2013 03:52 am
Title: Chapter 14.1

At least it was Jae Hwa and Thomas who discovered her and not some other weirdo. Thanks for the update!

 Reviewer: AnnieNathanson Signed [Report This]
Date: June 02 2013 03:38 am
Title: Chapter 14.1

I like this story but the past chapters seem a bit repetitive and I'm wondering when you will  acknowledge their relationship or fast forward a few years.

We know both sets of parents are evil and trying to force her into an arranged marriage.

 Reviewer: 1nadali Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 02 2013 03:27 am
Title: Chapter 6

I'm glad he has a back bone.

 Reviewer: 1nadali Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 02 2013 02:23 am
Title: Chapter 4

I'm so glad I found this story.

 Reviewer: 1nadali Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 02 2013 02:09 am
Title: Chapter 3

Keep it coming. I can see this gearing up for a fast romance.

 Reviewer: 1nadali Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 02 2013 02:03 am
Title: Chapter 2

This is begining to make me cry.

 Reviewer: 1nadali Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 02 2013 01:44 am
Title: Chapter 14.1

For one moment, I thought that she would catch a break guess not in this lifetime.   Her life no longer seems to be hers.  Will it stay this way or will it turn at the drop of a hat? 

 Reviewer: reader101 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 01 2013 07:34 am
Title: Chapter 14.1

Whose Thomas?  You don't have his picture with the other cast pictures.  Yeah, Lisa is still free and I hope that remains that way.    Jae Lisa didn't blow you off on purpose she was help captive by so-called parents.  Good stuff!!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 01 2013 03:11 am
Title: Chapter 13

I am so glad I found this story....I cant imagine what Lisa is going through. ..I want to take her parents and drown them!!!

Amazing story!! Cant wait for an update

 

 Reviewer: Leogina Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 28 2013 11:09 pm
Title: Chapter 13

Her mother was something...

 Reviewer: nightseer Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 15 2013 05:54 pm
Title: Chapter 13

This story is one big roller coaster ride. These people expect her to drop everything and do what they say.  No doubt she would eventually escape.  However she must make a true decision.  It is clear that she is against the arrangement.  Any sane woman would be.  What her parents see her as a doll that is played with and has no soul.

 Reviewer: reader101 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 15 2013 08:05 am
Title: Chapter 13

Lord I hope that she can stay under her capters radar and remain free to live her dream.  I can't stand Tanya or her husband in fact they make my teeth itch!!  I am wishing some bad Karma or juju on them. Please let her remain free!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 15 2013 02:02 am
Title: Chapter 12

What is poor Lisa going to do?  She just wants to have a life that is hers.  But she does need to have a backup plan.  Everything in her life is turning against her.

 Reviewer: reader101 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 29 2013 11:42 pm
Title: Chapter 12

Her mother is one triflin piece of GAh I can't even with this family right now! I just wanna deck her in her throat damn she pisses me off and I'm sorry but Marcus had that coming for his a** I mean seriously. No take backs boy needed to hear it anyway. Though, pause, he did have good reason behind her not running off without a back up plan. I'm all for back up plans but this diabolical mischief her parents are up to is just not my cup of tea no ma'am. Great chapter! Clearly got a rise out of me. I've been holding it in for too long for that woman

 Reviewer: thincakes Signed [Report This]
Date: April 29 2013 10:04 am
Title: Chapter 12

wow

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Date: April 29 2013 06:52 am
Title: Chapter 9

love it

 Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 29 2013 06:41 am
Title: Chapter 12

I really hate Lisa's parents Tonya and her sperm donor.  Marcus was telling her, she could go to college and major in dance.  With a degree she could choreograph after she can no longer dance professionally.

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 29 2013 05:09 am
Title: Chapter 12

Can Lisa's mother be shipped off to some far away land, never to be seen again? I really cannot stand her character! She seems to be the driving force behind the while Marcus-Lisa thing.

 

Thanks for the update!

 Reviewer: Annie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 29 2013 01:08 am
Title: Chapter 11

Lisa needs to move away from her parents ASAP

 Reviewer: keikei2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 22 2013 11:14 pm


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