Great so far. Looking forward to the update.
Reviewer: Sharise Signed [Report This]Date: February 24 2013 02:00 am
good start can't wait to see where you take the story
Reviewer: cdy1216 Signed [Report This]Date: February 23 2013 10:52 pm
Me likey!! I can tell hrr momma is going to work my nerve!! Her father seems cool though. I like how you have introduced your main character. I hope that she doesn't continue to do dumb like opening the door without asking who is it or looking at them out the side glass. I know that the story just start but be more descriptive. What does she look like? What does her rented house look like?:
Geeat start!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: February 23 2013 02:40 pm
It is interesting can't wait to read more.. Good beginning
Reviewer: SandyBrownEyes Signed [Report This]Date: February 23 2013 01:16 pm