Reviews For Never Let Me Go
Title: Sensual Seduction

Sooooo I've been gone forever and 10 lifetimes. Good to be back though. On that note....

She finally gave up the goods!!!!! Soo excited. He rocked her damn world, its hilarious that she didn't even think to look around the house to see if he was there before she calls her girls and starts talking crap. Kendall was in jail? Probably for raping and/or abusing someone else. This is not going to be good. It definitely answers who that was at the club and what they have planned for Ari. I hope she doesn't completely shut down and lose she shit over this. 

Update soon!! 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: July 12 2016 06:46 am

Title: Sensual Seduction

My eyes got so wide reading the ending of this chapter. Colin is going to protect what's his. Great posting.

Reviewer: keikei2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 16 2016 06:00 am

Title: Secrets

Wait.... why can't she have kids? What happened that she can't have kids? Is this some choice or is she fareal. That's going to cause a seriousroblem in their relationship

Update soon



Author's Response:

Don't worry chica! You'll get your answers soon! ;)

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: March 14 2016 12:25 am

Title: Secrets

Please upload!!!!!

Reviewer: Connie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 11 2016 05:44 pm

Title: Date Night

I know dog gone well that is not her ex Kendell? Oh gosh! This is about to get really bad. Why would someone want to hurt Aria? What could she have possibly done to them? She seems so innocent. That's just fucked up. I hope Colin and Aria survive what's to come... I know Aria is going to be knocked back a few steps. I wonder when Kay will tell someone she is pregnant. The signs are all there. They just aren't paying enough attention to notice them.

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: August 30 2015 12:53 am

Title: Date Night

Whose the blonde bitch?  Kendall as in the abusive asshole, who Ariana dated at one time?  Why does blonde ho hate Ari?? Why are there extra letters throughout the text??  It's annoying, please fix it.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 28 2015 11:22 pm

Title: Reconciliation

Bruhhhhhhhhh you cnt keep us  hanging like this give us (Me)  Moorrreeee 😢😢👍👍👍👍👍

Reviewer: fanfictionfantasy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 05 2015 03:50 am

Title: Reconciliation

Wait?!!!! So the rich man is her dad? The dude she was serving at the restaurant leaving her hundreds as a tip? Holy crap. I know I need to read about this. That receptionist was a bitch and should be fired!! Whore. Why did Colin show up like that? His ass should have showed up a week ago. But he came nonetheless. I'm glad that they are talking again.

Update soon!!

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: August 05 2015 02:18 am

Title: Reconciliation

They are angy;at Colin and didn't lay a finger on the girl. Colin was suppose to stick around to for Arianna to not share her story with him?  These girls are working my nerves now. Arianna needs therapy! 

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 04 2015 02:34 pm

Title: Reconciliation

She found her father,  great!  Ariana admitted that she wants her marriage to Colin to last. Will finally allow him all the way in?

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 04 2015 12:18 am

Title: Game Nights {Part 2}

Wow. How cute that they both told their best friends about their lil episode. Lol. I love that the girls played them in their sports. No shame, they are professional athletes after all. You have to get ahead somehow. Come on Derrick, why would you ruin a moment like that?! ARE YOU SERIOUS!!! You got that damn girl pregnant. You better pray that baby isn't yours. I highly doubt Maya goes for that crap. Weren't y'all together when that happened? The only couple not dealing with babies is Ari and Colin. But their situation is just as bad. Why wouldn't he tell her that. As his wife you have to respect her opinion whether you like it or not. She has every right to be upset but she needs to tell Colin why she is upset. Don't just be mad, let him know why you feel that wat towards some of his family members. I hope they don't come trying to check on her. Its nust going to start aroblem and put Colon in a position where he will have to choose. I feel bad that she is still traumatized by her ex beating on her. I'm sure Colin would never hit her but I can definitely understand why she reacted that way. Now my question is, where in the hell did Colin go? And why would you leave at this time? She needs you now more than ever.



Author's Response:

Girl I swear your comments make my freaking day! I love how thorough they are! Derrick is an idiot, but he brings comic relief! lol Yeah, I think we've established Arianna needs a lot of help and is still battling demons from her past. Girl, I promise you won't be mad at Colin! You'll see why he left in this next update! lol

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: July 15 2015 05:18 pm

Title: Game Nights {Part 1}

That is something. At least she somewhat opened up to Colin about what happened to her. That is progress. I wonder what Kat is going to do about her situation. Or when she will tell her best friends at least. This game night is going to be hilarious.

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: July 13 2015 10:55 pm

Title: Changes and Firsts {Part 2}

Damn, so he raped her. That is horrible. What kind of friend has sex with her best friends man and then pushes her to give it to him? Do they know about the abuse? They can't because I know Maya wouldn't push her to do it. That's crazy.

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: July 13 2015 05:29 pm

Title: Game Nights {Part 2}

She just had a breakdown in front of Colin. Where did he go?

Reviewer: kvgurl Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 10 2015 10:50 pm

Title: Game Nights {Part 2}

Where in the heck did Colin go?

Reviewer: keikei2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 01 2015 10:40 pm

Title: Game Nights {Part 2}

I empathize with her for what she went through with that asshole Kendall but Colin is not Kendall. Aria was going off on Colin about communication but she hasn't shared and essential part of who she is. The abuse that she endured shaped the young woman that she is and that's bad becuase it means that she never got the help to heal.  What kind of game is Colin's birth mom playing?  She is 21, does she need a babysitter?   Colin where did you go?  Applogize to your man Aria and put yourself in therapy

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 01 2015 11:46 am

Title: Game Nights {Part 2}

Damn

Reviewer: PurpleLover23 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 01 2015 03:20 am

Title: Changes and Firsts {Part 2}

What other site might that be?



Author's Response:

Wattpad! My username is the same on there as it is here.:)

Reviewer: Lovablebbw82 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 27 2015 05:18 pm

Title: Changes and Firsts {Part 2}

Kendall is a jackass and should die for putting his hands on Arianna Wht are flashing back to him? I am going to have reread a couple.chapters before this on be be ause I don't remember. 

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 26 2015 10:36 am

Title: Meetings

What is the other site this story is posted on?



Author's Response:

Wattpad and my username is the same as it is on here! :) 

Reviewer: none Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 26 2015 10:09 am

Title: Changes and Firsts {Part 2}

What's the name of the other site that you use for your stories?



Author's Response:

It's called Wattpad and my username is the same as it is on here! :) 

Reviewer: keikei2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 26 2015 09:43 am

Title: Changes and Firsts {Part 1} {Fixed}

Maya was screwing a teacher?!!! Woah. Is that why she is soo cut off now. Or she was towards Derrick? 

 

Girl!! Update soon!! 



Author's Response:

Girl....can I just say how much my co-author and I freaking L O V E you?! Your reviews on literally every single chapter honestly made our lives, not days, lives. That is honestly so kind and sincere and sweet of you! I feel like you literally are SO into this story as if it's a television series that you can hardly stand to wait for to see the next episode. As a writer, that makes me feel amazing and so humbled that my work can have that sort of effect on people. You are literally the best reader ever and words can't describe how thankful we are for you. 

 

Geez. I'm getting emotional now. Lmfaooo. These next few chapters are so dedicated to you hun. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: April 13 2015 11:48 pm

Title: Birthdays and Letting Go

Darrius is disgusting!!!! Fucking pervert!!!!!! That just truly upset me. I think I know why she gave up Aria now. She didn't want him to get his hands on her and do horrendous things to her. I don't blame her for making that choice. He is a fiflthy pig. Kay is pregnant!! This is definitely not good. Who is the father? Was she sleeping with Xavior too? I hope not. Either way, she is in school and working and all of that. I only think that Maya told Colin and Derrick that stuff so that he can understand the severity of the situation and what could potentially happen. So he understands why she goes soo hard for her. I would too if my friend was going through all of that right under my nose. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: April 13 2015 11:38 pm

Title: Stadiums and Photographs

Oh gosh!!! Is this man a stalker? A private detective? Her father?? She is about to shut down. I just know it. What is this letter Maya and Kay read? From her birth mother? Trying to come back into her life after news of her marriage to Colin came out no less. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: April 13 2015 11:12 pm

Title: The Morning After

LOl. Haha that was the funniest thing I have read today. Truly epic. I thought she had sex with him. Although I enjoy reading the sex scenes, this created mystery for me. I was allowed to let my imagination tell me what happened. I like that too. I guess we will see what happens with that. Great chapter. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: April 13 2015 10:46 pm



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