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Title: Chapter 2

That poor little, Nina should take her do a doctor then the shopping.  Olivia has been abusing Selina and should pay in kind.  Who is her father?  If Nina moved across the country then how did Olivia find her?  Did I miss Nina calling an attorney?  I want that little girl safe.  Nina will need proof that Selina was abused so taking her to the doctor would prove that.  Great story!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 05 2013 11:00 pm
Title: Chapter 1-The Beginning

What is Alexander, demon, vampire or werewold?  All I know is that he is fine, he could pick me up anytime.  Nina spoke of an accent, so where is Alexander from?  Transylvania??  LOL!! 



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hmmm...more like ancient greece and who knows what he is. lol

 

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 05 2013 10:52 pm
Title: Cast

I love the cast!!  The men are yummy!!

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Date: June 05 2013 10:42 pm
Title: Cast

I hope you will finish this story so far it is intriguing 

 Reviewer: Charming2i Signed [Report This]
Date: May 03 2013 01:28 am
Title: Cast

love this must update SOON!!!!!

 Reviewer: Siren of the Darknessflame Signed [Report This]
Date: April 19 2013 05:47 am
Title: Cast

A good start.  The grammer and spelling need tidying up though.

 Reviewer: caribbeanisland Signed starstar [Report This]
Date: April 17 2013 06:42 pm
Title: Chapter 1-The Beginning

Ok I'm really liking this story.. I wonder what Alexander is.. Doesn't seem all that human to me.

 Reviewer: SandyBrownEyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 15 2013 05:07 pm
Title: Chapter 1-The Beginning

More, please more! I am definitely interested in reading more of this :)

 Reviewer: gentlehaikus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 15 2013 06:12 am
Title: Cast

Me likey! More please!

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 15 2013 06:03 am
Title: Chapter 1-The Beginning

Great start but was distracted by the misspelling.

 Reviewer: Bigsix Signed starstar [Report This]
Date: April 15 2013 05:55 am
Title: Cast

nice pics...

 Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 15 2013 05:09 am
Title: Chapter 1-The Beginning

great beginning, I love some of the first person aspects of the story

 Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 15 2013 05:08 am
Title: Cast

Who is Alexander...I cannot see his whole face?

Nyeesha

 Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 15 2013 04:34 am
Title: Chapter 1-The Beginning

That was a great start, thought the beginning could use the assistance of an editor's pen.

 Reviewer: Noelle Vonham Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 15 2013 04:11 am


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