Reviews For Chance Encounter
Title: Chapter 1

I want to read the rest of the story! Where can I find it? 

Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 25 2020 02:59 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Wonderful story!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 01 2014 05:10 am

Title: Chapter 1

Wow can't believe it's over this story had me in tears awed angry joyous and about every other emotion it was something to read thank you for taking on a such a great journey truly enjoyed every bit of the ride with these two & there families

Reviewer: kvgurl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 27 2013 03:49 pm

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I started reading the story and stopped where the three black guys approached Billy and Paris, but Big Willie saved them.  I thought I can't do this racism thing, but I eventually  came back to the story because you were posting so often.  I'm glad I did.  I loved it.  I loved how Charles became a better person.  I loved how Billy was a man who knew what he wante and wasn't afraid to go against the grain. You got me lookimg forward to the  80's and 90's. 

Reviewer: VeMo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 18 2013 02:06 am

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This story is in my top 5,,,I'm in love with the Westons. Thank you Mrs. Brenda.

Mya

Reviewer: Mya Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 17 2013 01:57 am

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I hope that Paris' condition gets better and that Billy sticks it out long enough to pay off his college tuition. Hopefully he can get some revenge on this firm by moving on to a bigger and better law firm and taking away clients who do think progressively. I look forward to reading about the 90's because the 80's were still hard on interracial couples in the South.

Reviewer: charly43 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 16 2013 10:00 pm

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This story has brought tears (happy) to my eyes.  It is a wonderful read that I could see myself reading over and over.

 

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 16 2013 08:11 pm

Title: Chapter 1

I absolutely love this story. Thank you for gifting us with it. I hope to read a follow up in the near future.

Reviewer: Apple Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 12 2013 03:32 am

Title: Chapter 1

You Mrs. Brenda are exquisite. I love your stories and you always always always deliver the goods. This is a beautiful story. I love that they commited to each other & held each other to their promise, truly forsaking all others. Not sure of your intentions but I'd like to know what happens when the Westons finally are in the same place, after billy finishes school, how they navigate the social climate especially in the South and of course a baby would be good :). Thank you for sharing your gift.

Peace

Mya

Reviewer: Mya Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 11 2013 05:23 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Hi Brenda, I know that you research thoroughly as the events are accurately written...and now that you've lived in that era then it just adds more authenticity.  For me, I was mostly hinting at an epilogue again...like I would love to read about their lives years later and with my saying "I'd like to think that as time goes on people in that decade became more tolerant"...was me thinking that by 1975-1979 things were getting better with race relations.  I didn't grow up in the era but I sometimes romanticize the 70s...I just think it was cool decade, lol. I also know someone who grew up in that same era that you did...and was asked out on dates by white men (I don't know what year this was ) and of course this person politely declined.



Author's Response:

LOL I graduated in 1975.  It was a wonderful time.  I made friends with some white girls while in high school but I really thought that white guys weren't attracted to black girls because the black guys would talk to white girls, but not the other way around.  From what I read in later years, white guys back then didn't think that black girls wanted them either.  LOL

I probably will do an epilogue on the story.  I've gotten a lot of postive response from this story.

I've always wanted to write a story that was during civil rights/jim crow era.  I may do another later.

Now I must admit that my sister dated and later married a white guy and I can't begin to tell you the grief that they caught, but he didn't help matters either but that's another story for another day.

Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: Natori aka R Signed [Report This]
Date: August 10 2013 01:12 am

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Loved the update - I must admit Janie has grown on me. 

 

Reviewer: katie Signed [Report This]
Date: August 07 2013 05:48 am

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Oh by the way, the pic of Paris Branch is familiar.  Do you know who it is?



Author's Response:

Yes, it's Marsha Hunt a true sixties girl.

Reviewer: Natori aka R Signed [Report This]
Date: August 05 2013 05:13 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Great story. But id hate to see things blow up for Billy and Paris as he told his dad to say he went home with Rob while Janie has already seen Rob and knows he (Billy) went away on his own.



Author's Response:

True, but Janie's a bit distracted now....lol and she might not think about that.  Thanks!  More is coming

Reviewer: sasis Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 02 2013 04:17 am

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Brenda I said kinda feel sorry for her. lol I really don't care what happens to her and Charles as long as they leave Paris and Billy alone.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 01 2013 05:53 pm

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Charles and Janie deserves each other! Janie will think Charles is her meal ticket to the big life. Hope he knows that what he plans for her, will turn around and hurt him, two losers, deserves each other!



Author's Response:

Yes they do deserve each other and they'll get just that!  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Serenity Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 01 2013 04:11 pm

Title: Chapter 1

I was just wondering who was the guy you choose to be billy. And great chapter 



Author's Response:

I wanted black and white pix to set the tone.  The guy is Chord Overstreet.  (It was hard finding a black and white of a blond with a bowl type hair cut sixties looking)  The girl is Marsha Hunt and her pix is from the 60s I think.  thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Toya23 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 30 2013 07:26 am

Title: Chapter 1

i am so hooked on this story. Please let the muse come out to play a lot more:)

Reviewer: katie Signed [Report This]
Date: July 30 2013 01:29 am

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Hahahaha. Billy is a mess. He knows what he wants and he's not stopping until he gets it.

Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 29 2013 06:31 pm

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Hmmm so this story is set back in "those" times. I'm interested! Let me hurry up and read the next chapter. Great so far!

Reviewer: katherinemadison Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 29 2013 03:58 am

Title: Chapter 1

Oooh, that spark......do I smell smoke?

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 28 2013 01:09 pm

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Lovely

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 25 2013 04:10 am

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Ahh that was sweet

Reviewer: luv2read Signed [Report This]
Date: July 18 2013 05:26 am

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This was an awesome tease and I want more! But understand its a challange :(



Author's Response:

I can't seem to let it go...

Reviewer: Cali2mt406 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 18 2013 01:29 am

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This is a great start. I really want to see where this goes.

Reviewer: peachmartini Signed [Report This]
Date: July 18 2013 12:39 am

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Yikes. As always you leave me wanting more. I wish this was a we bit longer. I know its suppose to be short and sweet but you always have a way grabbing my attention.

Author's Response:

You got your wish.  LOL

Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 18 2013 12:30 am



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