Yeah, I like it and can not wait to read more! This type of challenge leads to a lot of chapters, that's a win for us readers!
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: August 24 2014 12:45 pm
I like it so far. I hope you continue to write more.
Reviewer: Gothic-Innocence16 Signed [Report This]Date: August 23 2014 06:29 pm
Interesting start!
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: August 19 2014 06:25 am
It sounds like he has good intentions but I agree that Arielle should be wary of him. More please.
Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed [Report This]Date: August 18 2014 11:22 pm
So far, so good. More please.
Reviewer: bookbutterfly Signed [Report This]Date: August 18 2014 04:02 pm
Please keep writing, I really like what you have so far and I want to read more.............
Reviewer: Maria Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 18 2014 08:12 am
I like officer Miller and Arielle has spunk. Please continue!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: August 18 2014 06:45 am
Yes, please continue!!
Reviewer: alee92 Signed [Report This]Date: August 18 2014 04:14 am
do it! do it!
Reviewer: aleta Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 18 2014 04:03 am
I don't know about Darren dropping this complete stranger off at his mom's house. He should have dropped her off at a motel or something. Just like she doesn't know him. He doesn't know her. This story has potential though. I'd liked to see what you turn it into.
Reviewer: azzure1020 Signed [Report This]Date: August 17 2014 10:58 pm
Findingmyself please make this into a story girl. I'm sorry if I'm asking for too much but It's just too good I'm hooked.
Reviewer: Heartless808 Signed [Report This]Date: August 17 2014 10:55 pm
Omg! I felt this girl's pain. A broken down car happened to me way too many times. I can totally relate. This story is going to be interesting. Keep it up.
Date: August 17 2014 10:54 pm
Please continue!!
Reviewer: cheetahgrl07 Signed [Report This]Date: July 24 2013 06:29 am
Good start...a cop and a black college student...interesting. Can't wait to see how this plays out.
Reviewer: Natori aka R Signed [Report This]Date: July 23 2013 07:30 pm
I don't like that last statement she made. lol
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: July 23 2013 07:15 pm
OMG!!! Please do make this one chapter. Make it a full story, PLEASE! But, I understand this is just a challenge. Can you just start another story that picks up from here, lol! The officer, the stranded woman, everything.....These challenges are just way to good. This one especially, because I haven't read any stories with a southern policeman as a potential main character. OMG, please continue this in another story.
Reviewer: LOVE IT! Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 23 2013 03:30 pm