Reviews For The 'Other' Girl
Title: Chapter 5: You never know?

IIt's getting better. They made a connection. He's looking for her and she"s looking for him...I wished we had a chance to see more interaction between them. Her crying was enough? There was no mention of his thoughts of her while she was in his hotel room. Yet he became so enamored he goes after her...why? So getting us into the character's thoughts would help.

Reviewer: jahchannah Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 29 2015 12:48 pm

Title: Chapter 4: What you see is what you get? (Part two)

This chapter doesn't flow with the previous chapters. And as I mentioned in my last review, for some reason in the morning Camden can now leave and get into her room? Makes no sense she couldn't do the same last night.

Reviewer: jahchannah Signed starhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 29 2015 12:36 pm

Title: Chapter 3: What you see is what you get? (Part one)

Why didn't Camden just go to the front desk to get help? Who would just sit on the hallway floor instead of trying to get help at the front desk? Or why not try to find the other stunt actors with whom she worked? She didn't seem very practical...

Reviewer: jahchannah Signed starhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 29 2015 12:25 pm

Title: Cast

Liking the cast!

Reviewer: jahchannah Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 29 2015 05:34 am

Title: Chapter 2: When one door closes......another door swings wide open???

Camden is too funny!

Reviewer: jahchannah Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 29 2015 05:34 am

Title: Chapter 1: Should've, would've, could've

Really cute! I really like Camden and love the name for a female!

Reviewer: jahchannah Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 29 2015 05:27 am

Title: Chapter 1: Should've, would've, could've

Really miss this tale. I hope you update soon.

I love Camden, what a cool chick and Haruko is very mysterious. Update please 😜

Reviewer: Rainbows Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 30 2015 11:23 pm

Title: Chapter 5: You never know?

Short but sweet PurpleChocolate!  I that Camden runs into him soon 

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 25 2015 02:54 pm

Title: Chapter 4: What you see is what you get? (Part two)

Awesome sauce! ! Camden you have every right to be angry at your donors but with your donor dead your anger has no target so let it go.  Is she old enough to drinking? 

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 25 2015 02:48 pm

Title: Cast

TABLOOOOOOO!!!!!!! sorry fan moment

Reviewer: Keyajackson Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 28 2014 10:17 pm

Title: Chapter 1: Should've, would've, could've

When you said "Crazy" you weren't exaggeratinf but Camden is my kinda crazy looking forward to seeing more of her

Reviewer: LetMeDream Signed [Report This]
Date: October 28 2014 12:34 am

Title: Chapter 2: When one door closes......another door swings wide open???

Sucks for you Camden but i am thoroughly entertained by these situations

Reviewer: LetMeDream Signed [Report This]
Date: October 28 2014 12:33 am

Title: Chapter 4: What you see is what you get? (Part two)

I reeeeeeeaaaaaaaallllllllllllllly want more

Reviewer: LetMeDream Signed [Report This]
Date: October 28 2014 12:31 am

Title: Chapter 3: What you see is what you get? (Part one)

My night are neveeerrrr that interesting *SIGH*

Reviewer: LetMeDream Signed [Report This]
Date: October 28 2014 12:29 am

Title: Chapter 2: When one door closes......another door swings wide open???

Sucks for you Camden but i am thoroughly entertained by these situations

Reviewer: LetMeDream Signed [Report This]
Date: October 28 2014 12:22 am

Title: Chapter 1: Should've, would've, could've

When you said "Crazy" you weren't exaggeratinf but Camden is my kinda crazy looking forward to seeing more of her

Reviewer: LetMeDream Signed [Report This]
Date: October 28 2014 12:14 am

Title: Chapter 1: Should've, would've, could've

Lol

Reviewer: Trulyme35 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 26 2014 04:35 pm

Title: Chapter 4: What you see is what you get? (Part two)

I really love this. Yes! Another blasian story. Yay! I love Camden, she reminds me of me. Minus the stuntwoman part. Hope you continue and update.

Reviewer: Dreamingofalifetime Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 26 2014 07:26 am

Title: Chapter 4: What you see is what you get? (Part two)

Glad to see this story back.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 26 2014 05:06 am

Title: Chapter 4: What you see is what you get? (Part two)

Will  Cam and Haru do a little something something? I sure hope so!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 25 2014 04:06 pm

Title: Chapter 3: What you see is what you get? (Part one)

I liked this a lot. I look foward to reading more,

Reviewer: Mary Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 09 2013 04:02 am

Title: Chapter 3: What you see is what you get? (Part one)

I'm so glad that you updated this! I lurve Camden and can't wait to read more. But please can you make the chapters just a tad bit longer? Pretty please?? Lol! c6;a039;😊

Reviewer: Rainbows Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 02 2013 01:40 am

Title: Chapter 3: What you see is what you get? (Part one)

LOL at Camden.  She's acting just like a Penn.  *snicker*  I'm loving this story.

Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 31 2013 12:32 pm

Title: Chapter 2: When one door closes......another door swings wide open???

The visual had me rolling. She is special, isn't she? Any guy that gets with her will never have a dull moment. She's a kindred spirit for me. I've been told I should have my own sitcom. Prolly, because of how I look at life. Wacky things just happen to me.

I really needed the chuckle.

Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 09 2013 04:50 pm

Title: Chapter 1: Should've, would've, could've

I had to laugh at Camden.  Being a Penn myself I see you've gotten the family traits down to a tee.  LOL  Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 09 2013 12:35 pm



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