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Title: Chapter 9

So I've read this story for the second time- a rarity for me.  Will you continue?   It's an excellent story that begs for further development. 



Author's Response:

Hello! I  am sorry I took so long to respond. This last few days and months have been crazy!  In response to your question, I  hope to conitnue this soon.  My goal is after the holidays. I thank you for your interest and I am so excited to hear your enjoying the stories.  Thank you! :)

 Reviewer: Astrid Signed [Report This]
Date: November 30 2013 03:16 pm
Title: Chapter 1

My bad she really looked like her. But anyway love your story! :)

 Reviewer: Treale Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 30 2013 03:06 am
Title: Chapter 9

Wow!  Can't wait for the next update.



Author's Response:

Thank you.  I am immensely humbled by the reads and reviews.  It makes me happy to see so many people enjoy it.  

 Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 25 2013 08:22 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Oh, Goodie!  I am happy someone has taken up the challenge.  Now I'm off to read the next chapter!

 Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 25 2013 07:26 pm
Title: Chapter 9

good looking cast

 Reviewer: bayoumomma Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 25 2013 03:26 pm
Title: Chapter 9

Harlan is a tasty morsel!!  Uncle Clay is dashing!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 25 2013 07:45 am
Title: Chapter 8

I can already tell that I don't like Uncle Clay.  I wonder what happened to make the police reopen Josie's father case?  They did an autopsy so what happened to make them supicious.  More please!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 25 2013 01:35 am
Title: Chapter 7

Josie is crar cray and Liza Sue will now be an accessory after the fact.  I feel bad for Josie her life made her cray cray!!  Josie is coo coo for coca puffs!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 25 2013 01:30 am
Title: Chapter 6

Did Josie finally kill her sperm donor?  Did she kill by baking poison into the pie?  The suspense is killing me!!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: August 25 2013 01:24 am
Title: Chapter 5

Her sperm donor allowed his so called to rape his daughter as well as beat her.  This hearts my heart but I don't understand the anger from Josie to Liza Sue?  Liza Sue was blessed with loving family was a blessing.

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 25 2013 01:21 am
Title: Chapter 4

The adults in this town failed Josie and her momma.  Her father is certifiably  evil and should die.  I am glad that Josie had assistance with taking out the trash.

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 25 2013 01:17 am
Title: Chapter 3

Who is the she that killed him?  Why did she kill him?  Whom is he that was killed?  What did Dee Dee do to protect her?

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 25 2013 01:13 am
Title: Chapter 2

Harlan is sweet for horn dog!!  So Liza Sue wants to be a doctor that is an impressive dream and I want it to come true for her.  Go Harlen!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 25 2013 01:11 am
Title: Chapter 1

I don't know how he got the nickname Dee Dee out of Liza Sue?  I am intrigued enough to read more when you post another chapter.  I am looking forward to seeing what the characters look like.



Author's Response:

Hi pmgayles! "waves"  The  nickname stands for Dangerously Delicious".  That's the way he describes her kisses. :)

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 25 2013 01:07 am
Title: Chapter 8

More problems for them.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading this.  I confess that i wasn't sure if I should continue this one- I might be persuaded though.  Thank you again to everyone!  

 Reviewer: bayoumomma Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 25 2013 12:54 am
Title: Chapter 7

I understand why she did it, but I think she was wrong to implicate Liza Sue in this.

 Reviewer: bayoumomma Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 25 2013 12:51 am
Title: Chapter 6

She poisoned his ass, with the pie. I hope she did anyway.

 Reviewer: bayoumomma Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 25 2013 12:47 am
Title: Chapter 5

Dad need to die, I would not feel bad about it.

 Reviewer: bayoumomma Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 25 2013 12:45 am
Title: Chapter 4

Interesting story.

 Reviewer: bayoumomma Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 25 2013 12:41 am
Title: Chapter 3

Things have turned serious. Who killed whom and why is she involved in it?

 Reviewer: bayoumomma Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 24 2013 11:43 pm
Title: Chapter 2

Harlan sounds like the perfect gentleman.

 Reviewer: bayoumomma Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 24 2013 11:41 pm
Title: Chapter 1

I like it!

 

 Reviewer: bayoumomma Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 24 2013 11:39 pm


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