Great start!
Reviewer: aprilfool Signed [Report This]Date: October 09 2017 07:08 pm
Did you re-do the story Am I missing something? I thought there were more than 6 chapters.
Reviewer: PearlsofWisdom Signed [Report This]Date: July 16 2015 01:42 am
Casey, I feel so bad for you boo!! Hayes has protected you your whole life and now the both of you are protecting Sallie. Now that he knows about his past Casey can be whole and in love with Sallie. Hayes, why were you ignorinf Sallie? I love this story Beastlover18!! Thank you for updating.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
[Report This]Date: July 13 2015 11:18 am
Yay, you're back! Is chp 7 misnumbered? Or is therea chapter 6 floating around somewhere.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 13 2015 08:13 am
Glad I found this story. These brothers are hot!! Please update!!
Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed
[Report This]Date: July 04 2015 06:59 pm
I love this story. longer and more frequent updates please
Reviewer: DiamondPrincess Signed [Report This]Date: June 27 2015 03:35 pm
Why didn't Sallie just go to the police with the information she has about her relatives? Why did the McRyan brother's kidnap her as they have no reason to want to protect her. She's a stranger to them as they are to her and this excuse of taking her to protect her from her relatives trying to possibly murder her makes no sense because they don't know her...it's really a stretch...in this case to believe this part of the story definitely requires a willing suspension of disbelief...And why would the brothers assume once released from the basement that Sallie would just stay and not try to leave...again this part makes little sense...just saying...
Reviewer: jahchannah Signed [Report This]Date: June 26 2015 04:10 pm
I love this story. It's hilarious and keeps your attention. Please finish the story
Reviewer: Major1 Signed [Report This]Date: November 10 2014 09:03 pm
So happy you came back & gave us more ! I loved this crappie . More please .
Reviewer: kisser Anonymous [Report This]Date: November 09 2013 01:11 am
I hope Hayes will be there when her mother shows up. I love the dress!! I want it.
Awesome chapter. Looking forward to seeing how the meeting with Hayes and his mother goes.
Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed [Report This]Date: November 08 2013 12:12 pm
Sly Chase to bring her The business so she can work there. Lol. Can't wait to see what's next
Reviewer: kvgurl Signed [Report This]Date: October 14 2013 01:48 am
Things are building up and Sallie will have to choose whether to stay and be a part of the threesome or go to a hotel. I doubt if they will allow her to leave anyway. She'll have to decide whether she wants them both at the same time or take them on one at a time. Who will be first? Casey? Will Hayes be that patient? This is going to be interesting.
Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]Date: September 23 2013 01:08 am
I sooooo loved this ch. & the one b4 helps to put the pieces of the first few together & make the story more understandable. So she's having fantasies about both & neither one know. Hayes being the big brother wants her but is conflicted b/c he can see Caleb wants her too; now with the truth of their past behind & them sharing a bed even if it was to sleep & comfort each other it was her decision & she was in the middle comforting each just by being there. Now it's the next morning & Caleb tells his brother he doesn't mind sharing ................ Now oh how my mind wanders what's gonna happen next
Reviewer: KVgurl Anonymous [Report This]Date: September 20 2013 01:08 pm
You're ace for updating so quickly! But so many more questions have come up now. You have amazing restraint even though you know we are going to blow up the review section with our 'What happened?' -questions! Keep going, I'm hooked.
Reviewer: Bookbutterfly Anonymous [Report This]Date: September 19 2013 03:27 pm
That nice kitchen very nice kitchen but why is Haye lying to to her and what is he hidding from his brother? thank for the update.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: September 17 2013 03:38 am
Dam Hayes is big dick what his problem. He talking about how much his brother want her but I bet you money he wants her too badly. What kind of mother trys to kill her own daughter smh sick so sick. Thank for the update.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: September 17 2013 03:32 am
Nice cast pics
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: September 17 2013 03:05 am
Why did the brother take her and what is her family after her? I wouldn't mind taking both brothers myself lol. thanks for the update
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: September 17 2013 03:05 am
i like what you have written so far and i'm looking forward to reading more about the mcryan brothers and more about sallie and her family.
Reviewer: sandradee Signed [Report This]Date: September 07 2013 10:20 pm
Wow, with a kitchen like that, what the hell are they doing with a basement with a dirt floor? :} Time for some straight forward answers..... Oh yeah, and Hayes could do with some manners....
Reviewer: VAL1 Signed [Report This]Date: September 06 2013 04:51 am
Love the kitchen!
Reviewer: IRJunkie Signed [Report This]Date: September 06 2013 03:18 am
Love the kitchen! So Sallie knows that her family is plottinv her demise and was trying to run. Why doesn't Casey know about his family background? Why. Is Haynes keeping secrets from his brother? Sallie's presence is already changing the dynamic of the brothers relationship. Me likey!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: September 05 2013 07:59 pm
Loved the update! Hayes a little on the rough side!!
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: September 05 2013 05:28 pm
I think Hayes and Sallie know more about each other than they're letting on and poor Casey is out in the dark.
I can't wait for more details on these three.
Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]Date: September 05 2013 11:47 am