Reviews For Alfred
Title: Chapter 2 The Rules

This is cracking me up hahahah

Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed [Report This]
Date: August 19 2020 08:34 pm

Title: Chapter 19 Unresolved Conclusion

This is a great story!!!

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 05 2016 11:42 pm

Title: Chapter 19 Unresolved Conclusion

Yaaaaaaay!!! I loved it but why the crazy bitch had to have my name!? I personally don't like the idea of a three way relationship between them, I feel like it just defeats the purpose of them going through so much trouble to ensure Alfred getting to stay with Selena. But that's just my onion, you don't have to eat it, lol. Do you have plans for a sequel any time soon? I think their relationship is really cute, and their are plenty of other life issues Selena and Alfred can embark on. The possibilities story-wise are endless given he's and Android they have many obstacles they can face and overcome together.

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Date: January 23 2016 02:31 am

Title: Chapter 19 Unresolved Conclusion

Great update! Congratulations, you deserve it! 

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 21 2013 06:21 am

Title: Chapter 19 Unresolved Conclusion

Thank you Mz. Brenda for writing this AMAZING story. I loved every bit of it! To be truthfully the prelude to a threesome...that surprised me some, but I liked it.  It's your story so do you!

Basically if you wrote a story about an unicorn playing hopscotch with an orangutan in a purple tutu...I would read it and love it. 

LOL

Congrats on your book. Will be getting my copy soon.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your support.  It means a lot to me.

Reviewer: DaSoulVicious Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 19 2013 07:30 am

Title: Chapter 19 Unresolved Conclusion

wow, that was...rushed :(



Author's Response:

I know.  I did the best I could with all that I have going on, plus I didn't like the direction the muse was taking me so I ended it.  Sorry to disappoint.

Reviewer: mehg Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 19 2013 06:42 am

Title: Chapter 19 Unresolved Conclusion

What just happened?



Author's Response:

I dunno.  There was a boxing match between me and my muse and we knocked each other out.  Sorry to disappoint.  Merry Christmas though and a Happy New Year!

Reviewer: What? Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 19 2013 03:07 am

Title: Chapter 1 Hello, My name is Alfred

BOOOOOO to the threesome. Alfred is a submissive, I thought he was an Alpha. Disappointed that I wasted all this time reading this when you planned on this becoming a threesome in the end. A little bit of notice would save readers like myself from reading about a theme they have no interest in.

Author's Response:

I had no plans to do anything in the beginning.  I write as my muse directs.  I'm resisting the threesome even though my muse is playing with the idea.  I decided to leave it up in the air instead of giving in to the direction I was being taken.  Sorry to disappoint.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous half-star [Report This]
Date: December 19 2013 01:50 am

Title: Chapter 19 Unresolved Conclusion

You most definitely owe us a sequel. I want to know more about Thomas. Will there be a baby? By some miracle, will Thomas over come his illness?

As for Anne, that trash got exact what she deserved. Because of her insanity, Antrex was made to become a more ethical company.

Author's Response:

Thanks Juno.  I don't know about the sequel just yet.  My muse and I were butting heads with this story.  LOL

Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 18 2013 11:56 pm

Title: Chapter 19 Unresolved Conclusion

Anne is dead, yes!  Please give us a sequel I have to know what happened.  Thanks  Brenda!



Author's Response:

Thanks PM always for your support.  It means a lot to me.  I don't know about the sequel just yet.  I want to finish the rest of my stories.  Regret is up next....(I hope)

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 18 2013 09:00 pm

Title: Chapter 18 The Madness of Anne Fleming

Love, love, love your work Ms. Brenda, and this is nothing short of genius. I was here even wishing for own Alfred :p... This psycho Anne is crazier than a $3 bill, please make her end a very painful one.

I'm hoping that the sperm isn't viable because she doped them or that she's just sterile... Crazy bitches shouldn't procreate.

Please update soon, I'm on pins and needles here, I gotta know what happens next :)

Reviewer: Terri Day Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 16 2013 05:29 am

Title: Chapter 18 The Madness of Anne Fleming

Anne is crazy! She is so crazy she is going to inject herself with the sperm of 3 brothers, just because she couldn't have the father. Wow, that is crazy!!!!!

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 22 2013 11:59 am

Title: Chapter 18 The Madness of Anne Fleming

Brenda you have really out done your self this time. Anne is crazy!!! I hope she's sterile.

Thanks for the heads up on Regrets. That one of my favorite story on the board.

Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 19 2013 10:58 pm

Title: Chapter 18 The Madness of Anne Fleming

There is nothing more to do at this moment then to laugh at the craziness that is Anne Fleming - the entire time after she left, all I could think of was villian taking public transportation back to a house. She's truly a super star thinking that she's just won SMH 

I can't wait till she gets hers it is long overdue

Thanks for the update! 

Reviewer: thincakes Signed [Report This]
Date: November 19 2013 06:18 pm

Title: Chapter 18 The Madness of Anne Fleming

Why didn't they call the police when they realized that something was amiss?  And now she is holed up inthis this house with enough supplies to last for six months to a year for smart people they sure are dumb. Please let their sperm be allergic to her vagina and run back out! Thank you Brenda!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 19 2013 04:13 pm

Title: Chapter 18 The Madness of Anne Fleming

Ann is cray cray. I hope she doesn't get pregnant.  Loving this story. 

Reviewer: Acdromance Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 19 2013 02:57 pm

Title: Chapter 7 The Creators

good chapter

Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: October 27 2013 05:50 pm

Title: Chapter 5 Moving Forward

So romantic! 

Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: October 27 2013 05:51 am

Title: Chapter 17 Obsession

This chick is soooo cray cray. Keep it coming.

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Date: October 27 2013 05:17 am

Title: Chapter 4 Intimacy

Ooooooh awwwwwwwwwwww....lol

Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: October 26 2013 06:18 am

Title: Chapter 17 Obsession

PLEASE KILL THAT CRAZY ASS BITCH!!!!!

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 24 2013 01:12 am

Title: Chapter 17 Obsession

PLEASE KILL THAT CRAZY ASS BITCH!!!!!

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 24 2013 01:12 am

Title: Chapter 17 Obsession

HAHAHAHAHA this woman has gotten on the train straight to looneyville! She's just mad ... there this is a straight jacket patted cell that awaits her! I can't even be mad with her anymore it's just too hilarious how mad she is smh. Girl needs some help

Thanks for the update!

Reviewer: thincakes Signed [Report This]
Date: October 23 2013 01:32 pm

Title: Chapter 1 Hello, My name is Alfred

Yeah!!!

Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: October 23 2013 08:05 am

Title: Chapter 17 Obsession

ok for real imma need somebody to beat the hell outta anne. hookah dont know when to take several seats!!

Reviewer: Aleta Signed starstar [Report This]
Date: October 23 2013 07:13 am



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