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Title: Chapter 3

Goof very good

 Reviewer: simplydijah Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 04 2014 06:39 am
Title: Prologue

Thank you for clarifying chapter 3 for us, it's more easier to follow now. I'm sorry that I came off as rude in my previous comments. I admire your talent and knew you could fix it ,if you had an honest review. You did gooooooood !

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 07 2014 04:16 pm
Title: Chapter 3

I am with you now--thanks for labeling the flashbacks and present day scenes.  So married Caleb wants her, pregnanted her, and he knows her dad (who was never there for her).  Looking forward to you tying this to her falling for him and then finding out he was married--am I on the right track?



Author's Response:

I was really hoping you would write a review again! Haha. Just because I couldnt find you when I took down the chapter. Yeeees you getting there, but remember we starting from the beginning. I forgot to make that clear. Hopefully things will be more clear. Because when I write, I get so excited and forget other people are reading it and I just wanna shoo it out. But thank you sooooo much for staying with me! :D Do you think it will be helpful if we gave Caleb pov or wait for a sequel where he gets to explain? I need some suggestions. 

 Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 07 2014 04:11 am
Title: Chapter 3

Well alright now, I guess that she told him and told her sperm donor to go fuck himself.  I love it!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you! Was it okay getting through the chapter? I need your honest opinion! Thank you!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 07 2014 02:54 am
Title: Prologue

I was lost and will admit, confused--this is the same story about the married man with a child andwife, vbut is having an affair, right?  Who is Jacob?  What is going on...?



Author's Response:

Stick with me! Questions will be answered! I promise. Also, would you mind telling me what confused you? Would a bridge chapter have helped? 

 Reviewer: Penelope Signed [Report This]
Date: January 06 2014 07:59 am
Title: Chapter 2

interesting story so far!

Author's Response:

Thank you! :} 

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 05 2014 07:44 am
Title: Prologue

Awesome first chapter, I really felt the emotion and chemistry and sadness between the two main characters, I also really liked chapter 2 and the charactesr in the club espcailly Desire and Tico. Would love to know more about Caleb and Camille's story. Please keep it up Im hooked!



Author's Response:

Thank you! I was bugging my roommate about if she felt that chemistry! Haha. You just helped me out. :D

 Reviewer: Spoons Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 04 2014 10:32 am
Title: Chapter 2

Does Camille have an education?  Is the lack of education the reason shes stripping or dancing?  Caleb now that we know that you married so the question why cheat? Was his marriage an unhappy one? Does his wife know that he's unhappy?  This is good!!



Author's Response:

Camille does have an education. Although her schooling is not a main focus, she is receiving an education while working as a stripper. And tsk tsk tsk. Caleb will have his say! We just have to wait a little bit until I get Camille under control. Haha. Thank you for supporting me!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 04 2014 12:51 am
Title: Prologue

Wow, he began  a relationship with  Camille when he was married with son. Now Camille is pregnant what selfish prick of course she gonna leave you! Camille deserves better and so does your wife and son. Oh the agnst!  More please!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 04 2014 12:30 am
Title: Prologue

Wow, can't wait to see what happens next!

Author's Response:

Two chapters! :) Theyre just waiting for you to read them. Haha. Sorry for the late reply btw! 

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 25 2013 04:34 am
Title: Prologue

Whoa. That was intense...Camille seems extremely level headed and from this chapter alone I gather she's a bleeding heart. I'm rooting for her



Author's Response:

Camille will probably always be a bleeding heart. Thank you! :) 

 Reviewer: bhvana Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 25 2013 04:05 am
Title: Prologue

There  I gave you a ten , plz keep writing! 

 Reviewer: hooked!!! Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 24 2013 11:06 pm
Title: Prologue

That was good! I hope there is more...

 Reviewer: vmck Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 24 2013 01:55 pm
Title: Prologue

I like the start of this story.  I can't wait to see what you have in store for Caleb, Camille and the baby. 

I hope to see the next chapter soon.

 Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 24 2013 12:16 pm
Title: Prologue

This is good. really good

 

 Reviewer: africanblossom Signed [Report This]
Date: September 24 2013 09:35 am
Title: Prologue

Loved It!

More. More. More.

 Reviewer: londongirl Signed [Report This]
Date: September 24 2013 06:35 am
Title: Prologue

Thank yall for commenting! Because I seriously was just going to end it there and let yall be mad at me. hehe. But seeing a good number of yall want some more, I believe I will continue. :} THANK YALL! 

 Reviewer: LunarAngel Signed [Report This]
Date: September 24 2013 06:04 am
Title: Prologue

Wow! I don't know where this story is going but I am hooked

 Reviewer: LB_22 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 24 2013 05:58 am
Title: Prologue

This is good. Keep going.

 Reviewer: Acdromance Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 24 2013 05:50 am
Title: Prologue

what?! you cant, not continue woman!! i need to know these tormented people!! its great, very intriguing!



Author's Response:

One and a half stars? Haha. Okay! I did not know how people would take it soooo I was like okay one shot. But if you all really want some more, I can give it! :}

 Reviewer: aleta Anonymous starhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 24 2013 05:35 am
Title: Prologue

Please Oh Please keep writing this.  I love the set up & the dialogue.  I really love this story, definitely looking for more.  Thank you for sharing.  



Author's Response:

just cause you said so. :}

 Reviewer: idriveavitz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 24 2013 05:33 am
Title: Prologue

I sincerely hope that you weren't going to end it there? That would be cruel and unusual punishment and I have been a good girl.

 Reviewer: DaSoulVicious Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 24 2013 05:28 am
Title: Prologue

OMG!! This is so good!! I need more!!! MORE!!!!!!!!! ヽ(^z90;^)ノ

 Reviewer: Treale Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 24 2013 05:24 am
Title: Prologue

Interesting please keep it coming!!!!

 Reviewer: jackson1973 Signed starhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 24 2013 05:23 am
Title: Prologue

Good start. More would be nice. :)

 Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 24 2013 05:15 am


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