Please, please, PLEASE continue this one.
Reviewer: Jaye Sims Signed
[Report This]Date: May 09 2015 08:35 pm
This is SO good. You've created a world that is SO engrossing. You have to finish this.
Reviewer: Jaye Sims Signed [Report This]Date: May 08 2015 06:14 pm
I am so confused.....
Reviewer: Qsmommy05 Signed [Report This]Date: May 08 2015 04:28 pm
I need a prequel and a sequel to this. Needless to say this my favourite so far
Reviewer: cocoverdad Signed [Report This]Date: May 08 2015 12:28 pm
I like a lot. You should explore further.
Reviewer: jahchannah Signed
[Report This]Date: May 08 2015 03:04 am
Like most of the readers I would like to see where Tinys and Taris stories will go. I think you've composed them beautifully but they have so much more potential. I hope you can see that one day and find the muse to continue. I get so worked up when re-reading them only to click next and be a tad disappointed each time. Thank you for sharing what you have.
Author's Response:
I'm not getting back into writing some and I see this. I'm a huge fan of The Big Kahuna and it is an honour to have you review my story and like it. I'm trying to flesh out these stories some but the muse is refusing to give up much.
Reviewer: SleepEasy Signed [Report This]Date: August 07 2014 01:10 pm
I love each and everyone of these shorts.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!
Reviewer: Cora Jay Signed [Report This]Date: July 15 2014 07:00 pm
I read all of your snippets submitted and could help but feel...
Author's Response:
It's a huge deal for me when I make people feel things so thanks.
Reviewer: Penelope52 Signed [Report This]Date: June 09 2014 04:17 am
Wow! That was intense! I hope Tamu isn't dead.
Author's Response:
She isn't. That would ruin all of the fun.
Reviewer: azzure1020 Signed [Report This]Date: June 08 2014 05:47 pm
I cry everytime I read this story to die knowing no one love you. I.wish she could survive her fall an found some one that love her. Keep up the great work!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
It would suck to die thinking no one loved you. Well her parents do but she isn't getting any love from the one person she desperately wants it from. Which sucks.
Reviewer: safetygirl Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 12 2014 08:46 pm
Fascinating. You've manged to keep my attention. ;)
Author's Response:
That's good to hear.
Reviewer: Sleek Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 05 2014 07:00 am
I am so confused, this seems to be a vastly different than the first story.
Author's Response:
It is. They're all different because they're snippets from random stories I've been writing or stuff that I needed out of my head.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: May 02 2014 02:17 am
I liked Seeke r please write a story for this one
Author's Response:
I'm trying but the muse fights me.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 17 2014 03:03 pm
update soon :)
Author's Response:
I'll try.
Reviewer: Amy Winehouse Signed [Report This]Date: March 17 2014 02:18 am
This was amazing! I hate that its only a snippet. I would love for this to be a full story.
Author's Response:
Thanks. I'm working on it.
Reviewer: M3l4n1_C4rt3r Signed [Report This]Date: March 16 2014 03:04 pm
Good Lord these stories!!! I loved this last one most of all. Maybe you would be willing to expand it? The first and second stories are awesome sauce as well. Keep them coming!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I'm aiming to expand it.
Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed [Report This]Date: March 16 2014 06:45 am
Please, please continue. I think these could become great stories, eve if they are short.
Author's Response:
Thanks. I'm thinking about continuing some of them.
Reviewer: Sleek Signed [Report This]Date: January 13 2014 07:36 am
i know thls is about different stories, but it sure be nice if you do a complete story on Tiny. I felt so.sorry for her and I want her to go out and found someone else. Let him see what he give up for a cheap affair. LOVE IT!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
I'm not sure if I'll continue this story but thanks for the comment.
Reviewer: safetygirl Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 05 2013 05:31 am
love it, I just keep reading this story. Are u going to continue it?
Author's Response:
I'm glad you enjoy it. I'm not sure if I'll continue it.
Reviewer: safetygirl Anonymous [Report This]Date: November 20 2013 02:09 am
Finally a women who stands up for herself :) keep it coming!!
Author's Response:
lol I will!
Reviewer: Sleek Anonymous [Report This]Date: November 15 2013 06:33 am
Good start- More please :)
Author's Response:
Your wish is my command.
Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous [Report This]Date: November 15 2013 06:00 am
Oh no! My heart hurts for Tiny! I can't wait to read more!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Reviewer: idiotendenial Signed [Report This]Date: November 15 2013 02:50 am
Good start. My heart was breaking with hers :( I really look forward to seeing where this goes.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you read it.
Reviewer: bhvana Signed [Report This]Date: November 14 2013 10:21 pm