Title: The Sting of Reality...

Girl please let Tess realize he didnt sleep with her ...did she forget she slept with her ex  ...Toni got  to go ....please no fake pregnancy......just my  Two cents lol.....

Reviewer: pokerdiva01 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 01 2013 02:04 pm

Title: The Sting of Reality...

I understand she is mad but she is being a bit of a hypocrite.... A little bit. 

Reviewer: Daddyprincess Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 01 2013 11:54 am

Title: Brown Eyes of Green...

Go girl I think she handled the situation just right he should have listened to her yeah she was jealous & a little insecure but that trifling assistant of his was step over all types of boundaries he had all types of clues that he chose to ignore b/c he didn't want to be wrong. She had to slap the taste out his mouth & band him from their bed so he wake the heck up 1 & 2 fix this put that B in her place which he shoulda done in the first place instead of talking to her about his wife in anyway. Getting him lunch he didn't ask 4 when she knows he has lunch with his wife, lying about paging him telling him his wife was there to see him,touching him in anyway was all signs he chose to ignore now he's paying the piper he needs to fire her 4 slander. Nahh that's to nice since he didn't take care of this problem in the beginning now it's up to her to step into business mode & use the power of partner @ her disposal to fire & teach this little tramp a lesson. He better grovel & start thinking of his wife b/4 he make decisions especially @ their job when it's gonna reflect & affect her.

Update

Reviewer: kvgurl Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 01 2013 10:50 am

Title: Arsonist...

Tess needs to pull herself together--mom can help her see whatToni is up to.  Perhaps they can teach Trifling Toni(TT) and Jay a lesson.  Hard to communicate when a partner holds back--imo, Jay allowed TT to get this foothold into their business.    

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 01 2013 07:28 am

Title: Arsonist...

I think this is good so far. I think that Tess needs to clear her head and and get away from Jay for a few days. Maybe then he would see all of the pain he's putting her through by ignoring the fact that that bitch wants him

Reviewer: Keys72095 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 01 2013 04:13 am

Title: Arsonist...

You can't stop writing and I can't stop reading!! Great update!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 01 2013 12:48 am

Title: Arsonist...

Ok I read the other story and let me say fantastic!!! I know jay didn't cheat but she knows how it feels. But please let Tess go off on her ass and dig in Jay's. I know Jay is not that stupid to do something. Please update soon!!!

Reviewer: Sharise Signed [Report This]
Date: November 30 2013 08:57 pm

Title: Arsonist...

Yes, I need for you to keep writing b/c this was all kinds of drama. 

 

Thank you!

Reviewer: AP Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 30 2013 08:54 pm

Title: Deja Vu and How Easy It Is to Lie...

Yep how do think Tess is going to react the same way he better tell Tess before Toni tells Tess

 

Reviewer: tcarey Signed [Report This]
Date: November 30 2013 05:02 pm

Title: Deja Vu and How Easy It Is to Lie...

Like I said. Simple. How many folks need to say something to Jay before his simple ass will listen. Or does that trick have to have him down her throat before the light bulb goes on. arrrghhh, he makes me want to knock him in the head with a sledgehammer.

This chick rubbing on him is all kinds of inappropriate. How could he be so damn clueless? On the one hand, I don't think it's as bad as what Tess did, but on the other, Tess was not MARRIED when she slept with Eric. His even letting that trick touch him is cheating. And if he didn't think there was something wrong with it, why not tell Tess. And he can't keep blaming Tess' reaction on why he hasn't told her. I hate to see Tes hurt, but if he doesn't tell her, I hope she finds out. Has he not learned nothing with the Eric episode? How quickly we forget. Jay has EVERYTHING that's coming to him if he continues to have his head stuck up his butt.

This chapter has me so heated. I can't imagine what my blood pressure will be in the coming chapters, but gurl, I'll be right here, reading, cussing and ready to whip his simple ass. I am loving the fact that the potential jump-off doesn't know that Tess is a partner. I hope she doesn't find out until it's too late. Yeah, I'm sadistic. :)

Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 30 2013 04:25 pm

Title: Deja Vu and How Easy It Is to Lie...

Tess had sex with Eric this hasn't gotten to that point yet. Toni wants her some Jay and he's to stupid too see it. This will break Tess, Jay needs to transfer that thirtlsty ho to another accountant.  Jay, I am still on your team but you are working my last nerve. It was highly inappropriate for that ho to touch you in that manner.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 30 2013 04:05 pm

Title: Brown Eyes of Green...

Jay better listen to Jasmine.

Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 30 2013 01:14 pm

Title: Deja Vu and How Easy It Is to Lie...

I've got my hands close to my eyes because I feel like the shit may soon hit the fan. Jay knows Toni giving him a massage was inappropriate, that's why he's delaying telling Tess. Jasmine not telling Tess what she saw might come back to bite her in the butt one day so she may want to rethink that decision. Thank you for the speedy update and u have my permission to do it again. :)

Reviewer: AP Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 30 2013 01:01 pm

Title: Brown Eyes of Green...

Toni is crushing on Jay and it will get ugly because that trallop doesn't know who Tess is in terms of that company,  Jay  is being stupid that skank is all up in his kool-aid don't know the flavor!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 30 2013 06:55 am

Title: Brown Eyes of Green...

I just want to say that I think you've grown from Tess and Jay. The sequel was well done and I feel like you're taking your time allowing both characters to have some breathing room. I can't stress enough how excited I am for you to update. I like how you played around with character reaction this time around. What about Jay's dad? When is the baby coming? It's been two years! They need a little Jada or Jason, maybe???? Can you also tell the story from "Ho-ni's" point of view? Is she gonna be like single white female and try to replace Tess? I saw that on lifetime today. Or maybe she could try to turn Jay against Tess I don't know I'm just throwing that out there no pressure lol.



Author's Response:

Thank You! I am really trying to make these all better than the last. And yes...you will be hearing from Toni aka "Ho-ni" lol...love that by the way! 

Reviewer: JacqueseGabrielle Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 30 2013 06:08 am

Title: Brown Eyes of Green...

I don't like the fact that Jay thinks and has stated that Tess' concern/jealousy means she's reverting back to her old insecure self. It looks like she might have reason to be concerned. But it's early days yet. And if this pans out the way I think it might please don't let Toni find out what kind of woman she's messing with until it's too late.

Hold on. It's gonna be a bumpy ride! 

Reviewer: londongirl Signed [Report This]
Date: November 30 2013 02:42 am

Title: Brown Eyes of Green...

When the shit hits the fan, I hope Mr. Jay remembers this conversation. Tess tried to warn his simple ass. Men can be so obtuse sometimes and before you know it, BAM! Wife is pissed and the trick thinks she's got rights. Jay needs to handle this or Tes will, but it will be handled. I know Tess has some insecurties, but game recognize game and Tess has the cajones to protect what's hers. Go Tess!

How in the hell could Jay think it was OK for that git to say how Tess was lucky to be married to Jay. She don't know Tess like that. And she damn sho don't know Jay like that. That was the first red flag. Is it that Jay doesn't WANT to see what's right in front of his face?

Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 30 2013 01:19 am

Title: Brown Eyes of Green...

Thank you, thank you for the new story! I think that Jay needs to trust Tess' instincts and not just dismiss her in this. I see trouble ahead and I can't wait for more. 

Reviewer: AP Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 30 2013 12:52 am



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