That was sexilicious!! I am so glad that Nina quit playing and admitted her feelings. Lance just gdets better and better with each chapter. Did they formulate Plan to deal with that nasty ass Frank yet? I want that to die, please?! So good!!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
[Report This]Date: August 31 2014 02:35 pm
I'm glad they finally were able to be together and I hope they are strong enough to weather the storm.
Reviewer: 1nadali Signed [Report This]Date: August 31 2014 10:36 am
I love Lance and Nina's relationship.
Reviewer: azzure1020 Signed [Report This]Date: August 31 2014 09:22 am
Poor Lance and Nina they've been through so much ! :(
Reviewer: Heleana503 Signed [Report This]Date: August 25 2014 07:38 am
UPDATE PUHLEEEEEEEASE!!!! I read through this story three times while at the nail salon. I know they have an emotional connection, but can't wait to Nina and Lance finally get to express it through the act of making love. I love then together. Frank better watch out because it's not the dance Lance a before. Nina should be careful at work as well. Please update soon!!
Reviewer: jj Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 24 2014 10:35 pm
Those two are finally on one accord; better get their heads together, after some loving, of course, on how to deal with Frank. When is Lance going to realize that Frank more than likely had something to do with him not finding a joba nd had to turn to him? When is Lance going to realize that Frank had him working long hrs to break up his marriage; Frank had a hand in killinghis own daughter and grandson, not Lance. Thanks for the update.
Reviewer: Penelope Signed [Report This]Date: August 17 2014 08:00 pm
I normally don't read things unless they have regular postings I noticed you have several. I am glad I started great start, love it. Thanks
Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed [Report This]Date: August 17 2014 03:11 pm
Yay, I'm so glad they finally got everything out the open. Frank's nefarious deeds will bite him in the butt. I'm excited that these two can move on in their relationship. I can't wait for the next update of when they get down to business in the bedroom, or living room or kitchen. Knowing lane though, he'll be a gentlemen and take it to the bedroom for the first round. Update soon.
Reviewer: jj Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 17 2014 02:53 pm
Yay!! Finally. But Frank is going to give them trouble.
Reviewer: shadow Signed [Report This]Date: August 17 2014 02:37 pm
Hello Jonara
Thank you for sharing this wonderful love story! I look forward to the next update.
Adriana
Author's Response:
Thank you so much Adriana.
Reviewer: Adriana Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 17 2014 10:28 am
I am glad that reciprocated with her story. Lance is my guy!! He has to get rid of Frank ans it ahould painful for Frank.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: August 17 2014 05:11 am
Contractions. They really make a story flow for readers that are English speakers. Not just American. Contractions: They're awesome! ( saw that on a poster in grade school)
Reviewer: I am not, will not, can not(cannot) ..... Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 17 2014 04:19 am
Enjoying this story. Please update soon
Reviewer: jomoli Signed [Report This]Date: August 16 2014 05:20 pm
No, Nina is not being childish. It is only natural for her to want to know about Lance and his past, especially if that past is in her face. For warned is for armed.
Reviewer: d3stin2l0v3 Signed [Report This]Date: August 16 2014 01:25 am
No. She is an adult. He could've told her.
Reviewer: bookbutterfly Signed [Report This]Date: August 15 2014 09:25 pm
This story is rather cute.
Reviewer: Anomy Anonymous
[Report This]Date: August 15 2014 05:50 pm
Yay! It's time they both knew the truth. I just hope they can appreciate the honesty and accept each other.Good update.
Reviewer: shadow Signed [Report This]Date: August 15 2014 01:33 pm
Straight up childish, it's not cool to force someone to tell you about something they are not ready to tell you about by using their feelings for you against them.
Reviewer: Luna Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 15 2014 12:18 pm
Nina is bring selfish and one sided with this secret thing with Lance. Lighten up.
Reviewer: Dreamingofalifetime Signed [Report This]Date: August 15 2014 11:56 am
Nina irrates me a little. I think Nina wasn't being fair to Lance. He said that he will tell her when he is ready. But Nina seems a little self-centered in a way because she should realize that Lance didn't want to talk about his secret at the moment but she continued to push him and twist things around. If she doesn't want secrets between them she should also be not withholding secrets either and to try to tust him more instead of doubting him everytime she doesn't get the answers when she wants them. Great work.
Reviewer: AvidReader28 Signed [Report This]Date: August 15 2014 06:28 am
Frank is evil and I want Lance to beat him! Why is she pushing him.? Lance obviously had troubles and pain in his life which was why he chose to be homeless. She is being childish, I hope that grows into her womanhood. I hope that she feels awful about forcing him to tell her and apologizes to Lance. How did Frank find out about Nina? What is he planning?
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: August 15 2014 05:49 am
Finally nina is going to find out about lance's past. i cant wait to read the next chapter.
Reviewer: lucky Signed [Report This]Date: August 15 2014 04:57 am
They were both being childish and speaking like teenagers. So to hurt Lance, crazy Frank will go through Nina.
Reviewer: Penelope Signed [Report This]Date: August 15 2014 04:50 am
Yaaaaaay! Awesome update ! :) Hopefully they get together soon ! :)
Reviewer: Heleana503 Signed [Report This]Date: July 25 2014 07:17 pm