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Title: Small World

Good update.  I'm glad Lance got his stuff together.  Now he just has to prove himself to Nina.  Hope it doesn't take too long!! 

 Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 24 2014 09:10 pm
Title: Characters

Good for Lance!  He has been to the bottom and is on the way up--grabbing our Girl on the way.  She is going to give him a hard time, until she gets a peek at Jessica Rabbit.  I think Lance needs to come clean and tell her everything, bc dear old Frank is still lurking in the background. 

 Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 23 2014 07:50 pm
Title: Small World

Ok now that he has his head on straight he needs to put his A game on b/c she's just not going to come to him anymore he's got to show her what he's working with.

 Reviewer: Kvgurl Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 23 2014 04:18 pm
Title: Small World

Great chapter.  Glad that Lance has been able to get another face to face with Nina again.  He does have a lot of work to do but like he said she will forgive him because she loves him to but they are going to have some negative outside forces I can already feel it.

Who is this Jessica tramp she is sleeping or trying to sleep her way through the company isn't she and Lances friends have already had her ewww yuck!

Thank you can't wait for another update.

 Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 23 2014 09:55 am
Title: Small World

Why can't Jessica take a hint?  That ho is trouble with a capital T!!  Nina, Lance had to get himself so don't be to hard on him.  Love him and let him love you.  Don't tell me that asshole Frank is coming back into the picture?  Why can't he just drop dead or at the very least go to jail?  More please!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 23 2014 05:46 am
Title: Small World

Good. I think once he explains himself she will understand especially since he is the opposite of her ex. 

 Reviewer: shadow Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 23 2014 04:14 am
Title: Unexpected Meetings

Holy cow their love story is perfection! Update soon please! 

 Reviewer: Gothic-Innocence16 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 10 2014 04:23 am
Title: Unexpected Meetings

Wow,  I just discovered this story and love it!! I love it when a man goes after what he wants. Nina, you can run and hide but Lance is coming from you. Can't wait to see how he wins her back

Please update soon. 

 Reviewer: Amaya Signed [Report This]
Date: June 23 2014 10:21 pm
Title: Unexpected Meetings

I'm glad to see this story back. Nina knows she better let that man in and listen to him.

 Reviewer: shadow Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 21 2014 02:31 am
Title: Unexpected Meetings

I like this. Good work.

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 20 2014 10:21 pm
Title: Unexpected Meetings

Yaaaaaaaaas ! I knew it ! I knew he was gonna be the one to come in late ! Awesome chapter ! I'm so happy Lance got cleaned up and has a better life :)

 Reviewer: Heleana503 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 20 2014 05:52 pm
Title: Unexpected Meetings

I'm glad you're back to writing.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

 Reviewer: 1nadali Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 20 2014 02:17 pm
Title: Unexpected Meetings

Did she walk or run? 

Just pulling your leg. Great to have you back.



Author's Response:

Lol Thank you!

 Reviewer: bookbutterfly Signed [Report This]
Date: June 20 2014 09:38 am
Title: Unexpected Meetings

Yeah great teaser so he's back in the game with a new firm that she's representing wow can't wait to see what's gonna happen with their spark I'm so glad he's back

 Reviewer: kvgurl Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 20 2014 09:25 am
Title: Unexpected Meetings

Please update the new chapters soon I missed this story. Great update!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

 Reviewer: PurpleLover23 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 20 2014 07:06 am
Title: Unexpected Meetings

Nina, aren't you the least bit curious about what Lance has to tell you?    Give the man a chance he is a keeper!!  I think that these characters have great chemistry, but now that he back in the world they should click even more.

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 20 2014 06:41 am
Title: Unexpected Meetings

Yay your back. I like how you did the time jump and summed up what she had been doing up till she meets Lance again. Although I am curious to know how he got back on his feet so fast. Jmo I like the chemistry between Lance and Nina.



Author's Response:

Thank you. All will be answered of course.

 Reviewer: kiavicmcp Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 20 2014 06:33 am
Title: Unexpected Meetings

I'm happy to see this back and I think jumping ahead in time was a good move as long as there is more to the story and not a rush to end it. It's good to see Lance got his sh*t together because I'm rooting for them. 



Author's Response:

Thank you !this story is far from finished

 Reviewer: AP Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 20 2014 05:40 am
Title: Leave

Thanks for a great update. It is to sad that his wife killed herself and their child. My goodness no wonder he is homeless and a little crazy. What his father in law said to him was despicable. What a creep.

 Reviewer: divisionred Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 04 2014 02:38 pm
Title: Leave

Omg this story is amazing!!! Sorry I didn't comment on the other chapters I just couldn't stop reading it lol



Author's Response:

Thank you so much.

 Reviewer: SherriCarter24 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 30 2014 09:53 pm
Title: Leave

Very emotional story.

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Date: April 28 2014 12:59 am
Title: Leave

wow his father inlaw is a dick. i'm glad he is trying to move on.

 Reviewer: lucky Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 27 2014 02:07 am
Title: Leave

Continue, I 've been waiting for you to come back for a while. You have me hooked again.

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 26 2014 11:11 pm
Title: Leave

I'm glad he's dealing with his pain & guilt in this healthy way & although he'll never forget his wife & son he has to move on & start to live again for himself & the new love in it. His father in law is a piece of work can't wait til the day karma comes back for him. Great job update soon

 Reviewer: Kvgurl Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 26 2014 11:05 pm
Title: Leave

Not what I expected but insiteful.

 Reviewer: 1nadali Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 26 2014 09:31 pm


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