Good update! clears up alot of things.good job!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous
[Report This]Date: April 26 2014 07:16 pm
Frank needs an ass whipping. He is the cause of his daughter and grand-son's death. He knew how unstable his daughter was and how much she needed and wanted Lance in her life but Frank just kept riding Lance cause he didn't approve of him.
I hope that Frank gets his just deserve and hell is just too good for him. He needs to suffer 10x 10x 10x more then Lance has ever suffered after losing his family, home and job which he was quiting anyway.
Enjoyed the update. I hope to see more soon.
Thank you
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: April 26 2014 08:26 am
That was so sad, I really hate Vanessa that was vindictive to kill the baby with her. Her father is an asshole supreme!! SO glad to read another chapter of this story. Lance deserves love and Frank deserves to loose his company!! Please make him go bankrupt!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: April 26 2014 08:17 am
I'm glad lance is moving on and getting his shit together so he can be with Nina. Thanks for lance' s back story. Good.
Reviewer: shadow Signed [Report This]Date: April 26 2014 07:01 am
Damn ! Poor thing ! I was not expecting that to be what happened !
Reviewer: Heleana503 Signed [Report This]Date: April 26 2014 06:42 am
These two chapters remind me of the tv show scandal how huck and Olivia met in the subway station. Cause he was homeless too in the beginning. Anyway I'm looking forward to this to see where it goes!
Reviewer: Lucy Anonymous [Report This]Date: February 04 2014 03:07 am
I am loving this read! I wonder what is holding Lance back besides his wife and child dying and who is this daughter Frank is talking about and what terms?
Reviewer: kimyso Signed [Report This]Date: February 04 2014 02:08 am
loving the story
Reviewer: readwonderfully Signed [Report This]Date: February 04 2014 01:24 am
She'll wait. She'll have "blue balls" (HA!), but she'll wait. Or she might just jump him if he takes too long or if he keeps saying things to make her all gooey inside. *I crease myself up*
"..but I am not ready but trust me when I am you will be mine." *faints*
[Report This]Date: February 03 2014 08:25 pm
She should give him some time and help, but he has to come clean on what happen to put him in this situation. So far she hasn't judged him and may help him get rid of Frank (who may well be her boss). I am just not feeling the chemistry here, but I am rooting for them and for him to ask her for time means he is feeling something for her.
Reviewer: Penelope Signed [Report This]Date: February 03 2014 08:24 pm
Love the update
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: February 03 2014 05:36 pm
Nina give Lance the time that he needs.
I can't to wait to find out more about Lance's past.
Reviewer: liberty lady Anonymous
[Report This]Date: February 03 2014 02:27 pm
Nina give the time as I know that you can sense the mans pain, Give him time he already changed you made move beyond his pain and help you. Love Lance!!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: February 03 2014 01:49 pm
She should be more patient.
He's still homeless and is trying to get his life in order.
Reviewer: 1nadali Signed [Report This]Date: February 03 2014 01:15 pm
She should be more patient.
He's still homeless and is trying to get his life in order.
Reviewer: 1nadali Signed [Report This]Date: February 03 2014 01:15 pm
Great chapter!
Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]Date: February 03 2014 12:42 pm
My hand just shot up: Of course she should wait.
She can't understand it, because she never had a real man tell her what is what before. She only had some punk*ss boys before. So totally new experience for her.
Man just up and stated his interest in no uncertain terms. How will they ever get to sleep?!
Reviewer: bookbutterfly Signed [Report This]Date: February 03 2014 08:53 am
Frank seems like scum on the bottom of a shoe. To bad he has reared his ugly head. It seems that he is going to be a problem for Lance. Thanks for a great update.
Reviewer: Divsionred Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 13 2014 01:42 am
I gather that his daughter was murdered or committed suicide so why does he owe this man anything? Since Lance is homeless and on the streets what can he give his father in law anyway? Obviously he must blame Lance for this daughter's death. Interesting...
Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]Date: January 12 2014 08:34 pm
great job
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: January 12 2014 06:10 pm
Yeah, I figured Lance had opted out because someone was holding something over his head. Great writing. You're really keeping us in suspense. Excited to see where you're taking us with these two. I hope Frank isn't Nina's boss, and I hOpe Lance can deal with Frank once and for all.
Reviewer: Bookbutterfly Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 12 2014 01:43 pm
I want to know if Frank is Nina's boss and this story just keeps getting better and better.
Reviewer: Penelope Signed [Report This]Date: January 12 2014 06:39 am
man i'm dying to know what the terms are.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 12 2014 06:37 am
I don't know why this man, whose daughter is deceased, can hold anything over Lance's head.
Reviewer: 1nadali Signed [Report This]Date: January 12 2014 05:19 am
What are Frank's terms? His daughter his dead so is he holding pressing charges against Lance over uis head? What was Lance's wife like? Was she evil like her father? Lance doesn't want that job back Frank hell he doesn't want to see your ass!! Thank you for this update! ! More please!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: January 12 2014 03:18 am