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Title: Nightly Visitiors

Oh my goodness, how did the evil men get in the house with all of the security.  Also why didn't Lance hear Nina screaming his name.  I know he thought that he was dreaming but really?????  Thanks for a great update. 

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Date: January 08 2015 06:33 am
Title: Photos

Oh, oh, the shit is about to hit the fan.  Go Lance take care of your perverted exfather in law.  Thanks for a great update.

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Date: January 08 2015 06:26 am
Title: E-mails

I hope that Lance can outsmart the devil.  But Frank has had years of practice being evil.  Thanks for a great update. 

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Date: January 08 2015 06:19 am
Title: In Ten

I liked the playfulness that they shared along with the love making.  Thanks for a great update. 

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Date: January 08 2015 06:13 am
Title: Home

Thanks for the great update.  No more secrets are between Lance and Nina.  Unfortunately the outside world like Frank is waiting to disrupt their HEA.

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Date: January 08 2015 06:07 am
Title: No Secrets

Thanks for a great update.  Thank goodness Nina's is very perceptive and picked up the fact that Frank is a creep.  So Frank must know about Lance and his new job and the fact that Lance is interested in Nina.  I am glad that he is going to tellher about his past. 

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Date: January 08 2015 05:59 am
Title: Small World

Thanks for a great update.  I understand why Nina is amd at Lance.  Six months is a long time not to contact someone that you say that you love.  He needs to grovel to win her trust and love. However, the blonde hooker may interrupt his winning of Nina though. She smells like trouble.

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Date: January 08 2015 05:51 am
Title: Unexpected Meetings

First, I thought that Nina worked for Lance's father in law.  Second, YEAH, I like the way that he returned as part of a business.  Thanks for a great update and I can't wait to read what happens next. 

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Date: January 08 2015 05:44 am
Title: Leave

I kind of knew that she was going to committ suicide but to kill their son too,  Just wow.  Very sad,,  Her father sounds like a devil, the way that he talked to Lance while he was grieving the loss of his son and wife was awful.  What a mean man the father in law is.  Thanks for a great update. It seems that dear old dad still holds Lance responsible for his daughters death.  The dirty dog.

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Date: January 08 2015 05:04 am
Title: Give Me Time

Nina is so hot for Lance that I was surprised that she could watch a movie with him without jumping his bones.  But it seems that Lance is suffering from the same affliction as Nina.  Thanks for a great update. 

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Date: January 08 2015 04:33 am
Title: Downtown Lunch

What did Frank mean you will still be paying for my daughter?  Sounds ominous.  Thanks for a great update.

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Date: January 08 2015 04:25 am
Title: Fooled me Once

Poor Nina just confused.  But after the loser that took her heart money and self esteem I can understand why she is cautious about Lance.   Thanks for a great update. 

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Date: January 08 2015 03:50 am
Title: Just a Friend

Thanks for a great update.  How much money can you make for selling cans?  My goodness or the food is very inexpensive.  AS for the older couple thinking that they are a couple it fits because they seem so capatable. Oh I can't wait to get Nina's POV on the kiss. 

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Date: January 08 2015 03:46 am
Title: Coffee Talk

Thanks for a great update.  I can't wait for him to reveal his past. 

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Date: January 08 2015 03:22 am
Title: Keep Warm

Oh, oh...this doesn't sound good, meaning the flash back of Lance's wife.  Was she addicted to prescription drugs? Wow. Thanks for a great update and at least Lance did apologize to Nina. 

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Date: January 08 2015 03:08 am
Title: Long Walk

Wow, Nina, liked the peep show of Lance.  I was surprised that Lance was so mean to her.  Well I hope that he gets over himself soon.  Thanks for a great update.

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Date: January 08 2015 02:49 am
Title: Meeting in the Ladies Room

The waitress was mean.  Great update.  I can't wait to learn more why Lance's family is dead and he is homeless.  Thanks

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Date: January 08 2015 02:30 am
Title: Meeting in the Ladies Room

The waitress was mean.  Great update.  I can't wait to learn more why Lance's family is dead and he is homeless.  Thanks

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Date: January 08 2015 02:30 am
Title: Dinner

Thank goodness Lance was there to save her.  Thanks for a great update.

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Date: January 08 2015 02:10 am
Title: Not Worth It

I think that it was Frank that got shot

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Date: December 28 2014 11:47 pm
Title: Not Worth It

Maaan listen. It better be Frank!!!

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Date: December 28 2014 10:56 pm
Title: Not Worth It

UU rolled my eyes a lot this chapter

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Date: December 28 2014 02:06 pm
Title: Routine

Great start to the story.  Thanks

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Date: December 28 2014 12:58 am
Title: Characters

Good looking cast. 

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Date: December 27 2014 10:24 pm
Title: Not Worth It

You truck my socks off. I shouldn't be shocked that Frank killed his daughter, but I am, even more that HE killed his grandson  because of his daughter choosing to marry Lance. He killed two innocent people, who were family. Of one of his henchmen didn't kill Frank, I hope then fun in Lance's hand at least accidentally went off and shot Frank in the knee cap and then he can rot in prison. Those on the inside don't like people who hurt women and children. I hope the story isn't coming to an end soon. If it does, I hope these two show up in Jameson and Elise's story. Is their other friend going to get a story? I can't recall his name at the moment.

 

Thank you for making part of this 17 hour road trip a little bit better only 3 hours in.



Author's Response:

Thank you! Clark is the other friend and I'm thinking about having his story next year. Hopefully.

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Date: December 27 2014 04:46 pm


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