Reviews For A New Home
Title: Not Worth It

You truck my socks off. I shouldn't be shocked that Frank killed his daughter, but I am, even more that HE killed his grandson  because of his daughter choosing to marry Lance. He killed two innocent people, who were family. Of one of his henchmen didn't kill Frank, I hope then fun in Lance's hand at least accidentally went off and shot Frank in the knee cap and then he can rot in prison. Those on the inside don't like people who hurt women and children. I hope the story isn't coming to an end soon. If it does, I hope these two show up in Jameson and Elise's story. Is their other friend going to get a story? I can't recall his name at the moment.

 

Thank you for making part of this 17 hour road trip a little bit better only 3 hours in.

Reviewer: Mavs0515 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 27 2014 04:46 pm

Title: Not Worth It

That had better be Frank who got shot as he is the most deserving!  I knew that he was evil but to kill his own daughter  and his grandson was evil in its purest form.  Nina you really should have let him shot Frank! Awesome  sauce!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 27 2014 01:58 pm

Title: Not Worth It

I think it was Frank that got shot and either Carl or one of his goons did it.

All this time Lance blamed himself for his wife and child's death but it was Frank I no where saw that coming. Frank needs to suffer and being shot was not it too quick but I guess where he is going he will have all eternity to suffer.

Thank you for the update.  It came quick and it much appreciated.

Happy Holidays

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 27 2014 11:45 am

Title: Not Worth It

Dan Frank

Reviewer: PurpleLover23 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 27 2014 08:32 am

Title: Not Worth It

Girl, I hope it was Frank or even better a guard that offed Frank. Maybe one of the guards is undercover FBI or a mercenary friend of lanes Lance's. Great update!!

Reviewer: Jonesy Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 27 2014 07:48 am

Title: Plan B

Cliffhanger! Thanks for the update! 

Reviewer: alee92 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 23 2014 03:34 pm

Title: Plan B

Frank is crazy, but Lance is a tad bit crazier since Nina has been taken. Once Nina is rescued, she will probably be extremely.pissed off that Lance didn't tell her about this side of himself and this secret room. If this is the.same Jameson from Sugar Baby, Elise should be wondering where Jameson is going Jamie is going all the time. Especially since they just started really delving into their feelings for.each other and a relationship. Frank blew that building up, so the cops and/or firefighters should be investigating the situation. Hopefully, Nina can stay strong and figure out a way that hurt Frank, even if it's temporary, unril Lance and his friends can come get her.

 

I bet Lance has some type of tracking device on Frank, so he will be able to find him quickly, but  I dont doubt that he will have a few bodyguards for protection,  but I'm sure Lance's friends will have a way to incapacitate them so Lance can get to.his.woman quickly. Update soon. Oh how.I love that Lance, but this makes me love him even more.

Reviewer: Mavs0515 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 23 2014 07:53 am

Title: Plan B

Wow, i love Lance.  He has so many layers and he loves Nina.  I hope he kills Frank and they can live their lives.  Great story.

Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 23 2014 07:32 am

Title: Plan B

Great update.  Hopefully, Frank won't sexully assault Nina, bc he is attracted to her--what a creep! 

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 23 2014 12:42 am

Title: Plan B

I want to see Frank have his ass handed to him not on a silver platter either, but in a rusty bucket.

I hope Nina is okay she is a strong woman but even strong women have their breaking point I wish it is over Frank's demented head.

 

Thank you for the update.

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 22 2014 01:42 pm

Title: Plan B

Great update

Reviewer: jomoli Signed [Report This]
Date: December 22 2014 11:13 am

Title: Plan B

This is going to be one helluva showdown! Hopefully lance will get his revenge, great story!

Reviewer: AstralSkies Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 22 2014 06:29 am

Title: Plan B

I want Lance to kill Frank and for his death to be painful. I love this story!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 22 2014 05:54 am

Title: Nightly Visitiors

Nooo. Not another cliffhanger this one was worst than the other one!!!

Reviewer: Dreamingofalifetime Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 29 2014 07:38 am

Title: Nightly Visitiors

how could lance sleep through that, i can't wait to find out how they are going to get out of that situation and what frank is going to do to them. 

Reviewer: sandradee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 23 2014 03:36 am

Title: Nightly Visitiors

I thought his home had a lot of extra security?

Reviewer: 1nadali Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 22 2014 09:53 pm

Title: Characters

Wow his ex father-in-law is really sick & out to harm him in any way he can. that was sweet and hot. They underestimated him can't wait to see what happens now.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 22 2014 05:01 pm

Title: Nightly Visitiors

Holy crap ! Ahhhhhhh! You come back with a bang ! Ahhhhhhhh! 

Reviewer: Heleana503 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 22 2014 04:09 pm

Title: Nightly Visitiors

That scumbag Frank is past a piece of work.  They have taken Nina and maybe even Lance.

I hope nothing happens to either of them and someone happens to come to their rescue.

Thank you for the update.

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 22 2014 08:30 am

Title: Nightly Visitiors

I hope he wake up soon or Nina in trouble

Reviewer: PurpleLover23 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 22 2014 06:46 am

Title: Nightly Visitiors

That asshole Frank is waht happened to Nina.  Why hasn't Lance gone to the police before now with the proof of Frank's ratchedness?  I don't want Nina to get hurt and would really love if Frank got killed. I want it be gruesome! !

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 22 2014 04:59 am

Title: Nightly Visitiors

WHAT???? COME. ON!!

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 22 2014 03:48 am

Title: Nightly Visitiors

Thank you for updating, but uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuugh!! You leave us with a cliffhanger. Now I don't even know what to do with myself. I think this could go two ways. Lance set this whole thing up or Frank's Plan B came to fruition. If Frank got her, I fear for Nina if Lance or his friends can't get to her in time. Ummm, I know it's Thanksgiving Break, so I'm going to need you to update frequently and ASAP. Thanks. Keep up the great work!!

Reviewer: Jonesy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 22 2014 02:59 am

Title: Photos

Puuuuuuuuuuuuuhleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease update!! I'm missing Nina and Lance greatly!!

Reviewer: Jonesy Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 22 2014 12:21 am

Title: Photos

So I just read this whole thing, too. Sweet!! I hope Lance beats the crap out of Frank!

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 18 2014 12:16 am



Enter the security code shown below:
Note: You may submit either a rating or a review or both.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.