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Reviewer: Bookbutterfly Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 23 2014 06:59 pm
I glad you are back...nice update
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Than you thank you
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed




Date: April 23 2014 06:06 am
I am intrigued and they are having this chemistry, well at least she is...hopefully she won't just be a toy to him, bc from her scars and fragile emotions, she can easily be tipped over the edge--and all this in just two chapters. Good job!
Author's Response:
Oh yes these two are gonna make something happen and not all of it is gonna be nice there with be hurt feelings and neither is going down without a fight
Reviewer: Penelope52 Signed




Date: April 23 2014 05:40 am
Thank you so much for your input it means a lot it's been forever since I've written and writing with a phone suck balls but I promise stick around and ill make it betta :) thanks again
Reviewer: toni174ever Signed [Report This]Date: January 31 2014 08:13 am
Loved the start! More please.
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Thanks much,it means alot :)
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed




Date: January 31 2014 05:27 am
Once you have written more and I can understand who she is, why she must relax and get an overall feel for the story I can provide a better review but you do have me intrigued with the guy on the elevator and her next meeting with him. If nothing else, he knows what floor she stays on.
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Lajack1 thanks for that I won't disappoint
Reviewer: lajack1 Signed [Report This]Date: January 31 2014 04:05 am
I like this start but the first chapter is a little rough. The formatting is off and there were some editing issues but I am intrigued and looking forward to more.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the input and the lady is working on it only had a iPhone to use and it just wasn't cutting it trying to do betta now :)
Reviewer: AP Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 30 2014 12:35 pm
What I think is that I want to know what this story is about, so more please lol.
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Just bear with me and you'll get you questions answered.
Reviewer: skriver Signed [Report This]Date: January 30 2014 10:34 am