So far so good. To drag out the opening to two chapters is perhaps a bit much. You could have happily condensed them into one chapter.
Also, please check your spelling and grammar. For example 'foster care' rather than 'froster care'. Those are things a spell-check won't catch. And 'don't' rather than 'dont'.
All the same, thanks for posting, and I'm looking forward to the conclusion.Reviewer: bookbutterfly Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 18 2018 08:23 am
I thought the detail the author used was vivid & incredible. I'm def a fan. I look forward to more of her work. Especially interrational love storiesReviewer: Anthony Love Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 12 2014 03:35 am
Goodlooking cast. Now you need to write more that 3 chapters. Why? The brothers needs mate too. Lovely dark skin mates just like Lana. The adventures these brothers could have finding, fighting others for their mates. So more than 3 chapters please.Reviewer: skriver Signed [Report This]
Date: January 30 2014 11:00 am