Reviews For Reverie
Title: Chapter 2- Educate me.

I am hooked, intrigued, and hooked some more. I can't wait for the next chapter. 

*Sidenote: Haseem sounds super hot lol.

Reviewer: Alle Xandra Signed [Report This]
Date: April 02 2014 07:23 am

Title: Chapter 2- Educate me.

I like how they are both flirting with fire.

Reviewer: 1nadali Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 29 2014 03:21 pm

Title: Chapter 1- Save me.

That was a great opening chapter.

I'm at a loss for words because you can go so many directions with that opening.

Reviewer: 1nadali Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 29 2014 02:58 pm

Title: Chapter 2- Educate me.

CALL HIM RYA!  

I'm loving these characters & their chemistry. As always, this is a great chapter to another excellent story. I can't wait for an update. 



Author's Response:

Thanks Caramelgal! I'm so glad you're liking this story so far. Update is coming soon.

Reviewer: CaramelGal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 22 2014 05:41 pm

Title: Chapter 1- Save me.

Heck yeah I'd call if I were her just to see if it was the right one & not a fake b/c he intrigued me so much. Update

Author's Response:

I'd probably call his fine self too! We'll see what Rya does. :) Thank you so much for your review!

Reviewer: Kvgurl Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 21 2014 05:12 pm

Title: Chapter 2- Educate me.

He's hot, dangerous, intriguing, and interested.  Rya better call that man... :-)



Author's Response:

Lol You want me to give you his number? hahaha jk Yeah I don't know if Rya will get over her shyness and call, she might! Stay tuned. Thanks for your review! 

Reviewer: dcphoenix1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 18 2014 05:38 pm

Title: Chapter 2- Educate me.

Would I call? TOTALLY! Thanks for the new chapter.

This is a very nice original story. At first I was doubtful about the way the all Muslim Pakistani ex terrorist thing wold be handled, but you writer, are doing a very nuanced and subtle work up until now, so I can really enjoy the story. I like "profesisonal bullshitter" Rya very much, she has a funny vivid imagination. And I like how upfront Haseem is. And their may be flirting was so sweet and kind of hot. I bet they are going to have sweet hot sex too ! Can't. Wait.



Author's Response:

Hey! Thanks for your review. I admit at first I was like what in the hell did I get myself into? No one is going to root for someone like Haseem, but then I had to try and convince you guys right? Lol Getting into his psyche is going to be fun. I'm so glad you like Rya, she's a sweetie pie. 

Reviewer: RedHobo Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 17 2014 08:41 pm

Title: Chapter 2- Educate me.

Ahhhh I love these two.  I can't believe I'm rooting for him but I am. He won't let his past define him. I love getting lost in those little stories in Ryas head. It's completely relatable to me as I was always called a daydreamer. But when she got caught even I was hoping the floor would swallow her up.keep going I am loving this story so far. The chemistry is obvious but not over the top.



Author's Response:

:) I'm glad you like them. Yeah I kinda struggled with Haseem because he was such a bad guy, like the worst, but I guess everyone deserves a chance. And Rya is funny we'll see how this all plays out. Thanks for all your encouragement!

Reviewer: Acdromance Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 17 2014 08:09 pm

Title: Chapter 2- Educate me.

No I wouldn't call, lol! As fine as he is. Trust, they will meet up again somehow. I think since Rya has been the one pursuing Haseem she should let him do it now and I think by the way she is acting she might. She seems a little nervous what he is making her feel and she is probably going to try to make sense of it somehow. More please!!!



Author's Response:

Lol yeah it's a tricky situation. Rya is way too shy though, but we'll see if she gets over her shyness for him. 

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 17 2014 02:29 pm

Title: Chapter 2- Educate me.

Hell to the NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This is insane, I mean I think I would piss myself if I was in her situation. I mean the amount of rubbish you see on the train and you find one piece of gold and he happens to have been America's 21st century taboo word of forever and into the future. Where are the applications to become a nun???



Author's Response:

I cracked up with your comment. Lol Yeah we need some applications to become nuns all around. We'll see how his past plays out in their budding relationship. 

Reviewer: HMe Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 17 2014 07:41 am

Title: Chapter 1- Save me.

Wow, this is raw! I wonder how her inventive mind will cope with his story. I can't wait to witness their next encounter!! Love your story, it's refreching to read about a character whose often in her own world making up people's life!!



Author's Response:

Aww I'm so glad you like! Let me know what you think of the next chapter. :)

Reviewer: Peanut Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 16 2014 05:54 pm

Title: Chapter 1- Save me.

I don't know why this doesn't have more reviews, I've literally read this three times and I am anxiously awaiting an update. Your writing is awesome! 



Author's Response:

Aww thanks! I'm really glad you like it. I'm still working on the next chapter. Been crazy busy lately but hope to update soon. :)

Reviewer: Idiotendenial Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 11 2014 11:23 pm

Title: Cast

Rya isn't going to be scared off. She already finds Haseem intriguing so his confession won't change her feelings.



Author's Response:

Yep, she might be shy but she's not a scared easily. We'll see how it all plays out. Thanks for your comment!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 07 2014 02:34 am

Title: Chapter 1- Save me.

Very interesting start. Nothing heavy but light and original. Her personality is what caught my attention...her curiousity became mine....I want to know more about him. How does someone like him deal with a recent history like that? Cant wait for the next installment.



Author's Response:

Umm. I love your comment! Her curiousity became yours. Love it. Yeah this story won't be heavy (I hope not too heavy) I'm gonna just enjoy the ride. Thank you so much for your comment and support!

Reviewer: amlaamar Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 05 2014 06:06 am

Title: Chapter 1- Save me.

This is so good you have to continue. I already love Rya and Haseem. Like that even though he has that element if danger she doesn't back down. She might be crazy but I like it . As usual great job. 



Author's Response:

Thanks ACD! Yep she's got a little crazy in her, but you're right she's not going to back down. Lol thanks for all your support!

Reviewer: Acdromance Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 05 2014 04:52 am

Title: Chapter 1- Save me.

Very interesting concept! I can't wait to learn more. Especially what he said to the guy on the train. This is great!



Author's Response:

Thanks girl, I'm glad you like! Ooo what he said to the guy? That we'll find out waaaay later. Lol it's a secret.

Reviewer: GeorgiaP Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 05 2014 03:23 am

Title: Chapter 1- Save me.

FANTASTIC!  I feel like I already know this characters personally.  You've really grown in your writing.  That does mean you were a poor writer to begin w/.  I mean exactly what I said - you've truly grown as a writer.

I'm so glad that Duplicity is over.  In Duplicity, I felt there was a lot of stumbling and lumbering around figuratively w/characters and charaterizations.

I super-looking forward to more from Rya and Hassem.

Thanks for the hours of reading pleasure.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you approve. :) I'm looking to this couple as well. We'll see how it goes. Thanks for the encouragement.

Reviewer: willieriley Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 04 2014 08:33 pm

Title: Cast

Love the cast! Haseem is sexy as hell lol.

Author's Response:

He sure is! Thanks I'm so glad you like!

Reviewer: hazelbazel92 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 04 2014 08:15 pm

Title: Chapter 1- Save me.

Interesting an ex-terrorist with issues, looking forward to more



Author's Response:

Thanks for your comment! Yep he's got issues alright, hopefully he can work them out. 

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 04 2014 08:05 pm

Title: Chapter 1- Save me.

She's annoying but he's cool.



Author's Response:

Lol yeah she can be a bit annoying I guess, we'll see if you warm up to her in the next chapters. :P

Reviewer: kiavicmcp Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 04 2014 07:36 pm

Title: Cast

He's a keeper!!



Author's Response:

Isn't he though? :)

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 04 2014 07:14 pm

Title: Chapter 1- Save me.

Me likey!!  Hassem has dimples love him!!



Author's Response:

I'm a sucker for dimples too! Lol

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 04 2014 07:13 pm

Title: Cast

LOOOOOVEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE IT!



Author's Response:

:) thanks! I'm glad you approve.

Reviewer: idiotendenial Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 04 2014 06:57 pm



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