Dang! I don't like timberlake so this story didn't bother me. It's good and well written. It drew me in and I finished it in minutes. Great job!Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 05 2015 11:36 am
I was talking to a friend of mine (a fellow VC writer) about how I wished someone would write some out of the box, twisted dark shit. Not too many on here do, because of stupid backlash and other crap. Me? I love this type of fiction, now I'm not saying I don't love a good sappy love story, I do but I also love dark things...this is a dark thing I will mark as a favorite of mine. You knocked me off my seat with this first chapter.
Keep writing, do as your muse tells you.
I love the relationship of Jay & Celia, you can see the deep intense love they share. Just how much love can one person heart hold for another, when that person happens to be a serial killer? Well, I think this story will answer that.
I love the friendship of Jay & JC. With JC being a shrink and all, I know he thinks he's got the best of wet dreams of anyone in his profession...he got a front row sit in the mind of a killer...who is also his best fuckin friend!
I couldn't help but chuckle at Celia. Homegirl gave two shits about her man killing women, just don't screw them behind her back. She's scared that he would find someone new. I believe he will never leave his "light". But I can understand her fear.
I love it. Write more.
Thank you for the review, I enjoyed your comments, especially about Celia. She's a very strong woman to be able to deal with the situation she's in but it's affected her, obviously. She irrational because of her love for him, so she allows him to be who he is but she still wants a "normal" relationship with him. She's content with him, but torn about the details of what's involved.
Thank you you again for the read and review, glad you like it so far :)Reviewer: Elizablu Signed [Report This]
Date: February 19 2014 11:12 pm
Wow that was dark & unexpected
This is something new for me so I hope you guys are liking it. Thanks for the read and review!Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 19 2014 06:27 pm