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Author's Response:
Thank you. I'm writing the next chapter right now.
Reviewer: Vonniiiboo Signed
[Report This]Date: March 16 2014 11:51 am
Gurl...so much emotion is going on this last two chapters had me like...(in my best beyoncé voice) God Damn! okay but on the real, (deep breath then exale), Christopher...Christopher...Christopher, on the last chapter (8) i was about to write a rewiew about how chris's attuide did a 180° had me like...BISH WHET,BISH WHET! But then something told me wait until the next update and give him the benefit of the doubt. Gurl u save him from get cuss out yes you did lol. Now i see why he acted the way he did (do i think he should of handle it a better way? Hell yeah but i understand). Between the drug problem, the death of his mother (feeling like he help in her death from her stressing herself out worring about him...that hard to live with), and the abandonment of his father. He felt like a comeplete screw up and anything or anyone he knows or touches turns into crap. So the fact that kat was pure he didn't what to screw her life up because he believed he was a screw up. That was a being thoughtful but in a selfish way (if that make any sense lol). He can't just make choices for Kat or people period. Just because you feel like you are not good enough for someone doesn't mean you are in that person's eyes and heart (look at me getting deep dont get lost girl stay with me lol). Yeah he fuck up, but he can change that by meaning 100% with Kat. Not just put it all out on the table for her to know, they both are emotionally sensitive at the moment for that, but baby steps. He wouldn't have go though what he's going through alone if he gave a chance.
As for Kat, babygirl is a like bruise at the moment. It hard to trust people period. But trust someone with your body, heart, mind, and soul is on a whole other cosmic level. So the fact that that she just meant him and have this type of feeling is scary as hell but exciting. So that rejection is not just a bruise ego thats like a round house mortal kombat move to the face. That hurts :-(. I think that she deserves a explain to Chris's actions for that night. Now, I don't expect her jump back to feelings because that's not how baby girl rolls. Cold, sassy, a bit bitchy I can totally understand. But not for too long, they both need to hear each other out and work it out be comfortable towards one another again. I believe they'll bounce back. :-) alright, gurl keep doing what you do and UPDATES!!! because shit is getting to good lol. Update soon please.
Author's Response:
fucking loved your analysis. Thank you soo much. Chris keeps alot of things bottled up inside. he's not too good at expressing his feelings or dealing with his emotions. He usually finds other outlets( drugs/sex) to deal with his pain instead of dealing with his real issues. so, I don't think he knew how to properly react to his feelings for Kat after her confession. running away was easiest for him. As far as Kat goes, she is a strong woman and am pretty sure she'll be able to deal with Chris and get her explanation. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous
[Report This]Date: March 15 2014 11:54 am
Ok, it doesn't really track for me why she would have this reaction at being turned down. They were both messing around, but theyreally don't even know each that well or for very long. She still has her virginity so I say no harm no foul! The worst it looks like is her pride maybe a little bruised, but to be carrying on like this...I just don't see it. This is the kind of reaction I would expect if he took her virginity and then treated her like this! Now, does she deserve an explanation? Yes, she does and he needs to be about giving it to her sooner rather than later.
Author's Response:
Too much, huh? I think her reaction was due alot to her unable to assess the situation. She was confused and hurt. Kat is a person that does not get involved emotionally in relationships with men. She is involved in superficial relationships. She just flirts and fools around. So when she spent time with Chris at the bowling alley and in her car talking and on the hood making out, she realized she really liked him. She let herself get involved emotionally. So, how to handle being rejected by someone who you finally let yourself connect with emotionally as well as physically? Kat cries her eyes out for 30 min., tells her friends, and probably will be good by the morning. That you for you feedback. I appreciate it.
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: March 15 2014 12:22 am
Just caught up with this story, and its very good, love all the characters.
OK Chris needs to let go of the past so he can move forward with his future, and it seems that Kat maybe just the one to help him get thought this.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review. I really appreciate you reading it.
Reviewer: liberty lady Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 14 2014 09:59 pm
Chris is carrying a lot of guilt, your left his famiky because he's a asshole! Your mom died because she was sick your choices stressed her out but she was mom and that is what mom's do. My heart goes out Chris but that was still a douche move. Kat is really feeling Chris and was hurt enough to cry. Kat is mighty free with body to still virgin, she has done everything else but ride the wave. Interesting?
Author's Response:
Pmgayles!! Yes, Kat is one of those everything but that girls. Maybe if Chris would talk to someone about how he felt instead of acting out, he could get rid of that guilt. Thanks for your review.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: March 14 2014 01:10 pm