Awesome. I can't wait to see what you have in mind for Chase. I loved it too that he has a sense of humor and did not take offense when Kat did the old southern slave bit. I was laughing my butt off. I love Chico too.
Waiting patiently (somewhat) for the next update. *SMILE*
Author's Response:
Thank you for waiting patiently and for reading and reviewing. I'm enjoying writing this.
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed
[Report This]Date: March 30 2014 01:49 am
I'm really enjoying your story. Kat and Chris are great together.
Author's Response:
Thank you Tootall. When I write something I know I like it but am never sure if someone else would. Soo thank you so much for your review.
Reviewer: Tootall Signed [Report This]Date: March 29 2014 06:04 pm
That is awesome. I wonder if Chris will be upset when he finds out that her father is the president of the international company he has an interview with. I also think that Kat's dad will like him but I could be wrong.
I like Chase with his crazy self. Angie still sounds like a piece of work and needs to be gotten rid of ASAP. The sooner the better then Chase can be with a woman that appreciates all his fineness.
Thank you for the update. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review. Thundakat is a kick ass name. I am going to write a separate story on Chase when I finish this one. I am loving his fine ass too. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: March 29 2014 09:32 am
Very fun chapter. I can't wait for the next.
Great Job & please post soon :D
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and appreciating it.
Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed [Report This]Date: March 29 2014 09:19 am
I really think that your story could benefit from an editor and better formatting. The large text blocks that are a mix of description and dialogue are hard to follow. Your ideas are great though and I look forward to seeing them fleshed out more.
Author's Response:
Thank you ,I really appreciate the advice and will definitely work on the formatting. This something I'm new at so I appreciate any input. Thank you for taking the time to read and review.
Reviewer: lt Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 29 2014 03:37 am
Chris is such a sweetheart!! More Chris and Kat!!
Author's Response:
Pmgayles!!! Thanks for the review. I'm working on the next chapter already.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: March 29 2014 02:12 am