Why didn't you write the scene whete Chris and Kat were breaking up?
Author's Response:
Pmgayles!! I think you missed Chapter 21 ? Check that one out.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: August 20 2014 05:02 pm
How is daddy going to make that up to Kat?
Author's Response:
Chapter 23 when he invites Chris over early for Thanksgiving so they could spend time together.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: August 20 2014 04:54 pm
This was such an awesome story!!! I'm so glad everything turned out well and do hope you revisit these characters again in another story aside from Chase's
Author's Response:
MissCo it's not over yet. Working on the next chapter right now. I hope you come back to visit. Thank you for your review.
Reviewer: MissCO Signed [Report This]Date: August 14 2014 08:46 am
The moment you took the Lord's name in vain in such a vile way is the moment I stopped reading.... Was there really no other way to say that??? I'm dissappointed.
Author's Response:
I am sorry I offended you PearlsofWisdom, that was not my intention. But, in real life there are some people who really do act like my characters taking the Lord's name in vain. Anyway, I appreciate you reading up to this point and thank you for your review. I will keep it in mind for my future stories.
Reviewer: PearlsofWisdom Signed [Report This]Date: August 01 2014 04:19 am
Thanks for the new chapter. Been following this story for some time and I reallylike it. I would like to see Chris and Kat story wrapped up before Chase's though. I like that Kat is so free about her sexual needs and fantasies, it's quite refreshing. But I don't think I want Kat and Chase going at it while Kat is not with Chris. It just feels icky. I hate triangles, and usually I am all for and threesome (mostly not the "sharing one woman" but the three love eache other kingd) but I can't see it with Chase and Chris "sharing" Kat (I really hate the "sharing" a woman thing...UGH!). Chase just feels like a secondary character in Chirs and Kat's story, and he deserves his own, whether it is with one or two other partners as long as the two others are not Chris and Kat. I just...really like Chris and Kat and hope after the six month hiatus, even thouh each of them is having fun with other people (expect Chase), they can build a new relationship...
Author's Response:
RedHobo, I love Chris and Kat together too. I've had people ask me about the threesome thing. And although I love a threesome, ( this is probaably a huge writing no-no) Kat- Chris-Chase will not have a threesome and I'm starting on Chase's separate story next. His story just happens to take place during Chris and Kat's 6 month break. Thank you for following this story and your review.
Reviewer: RedHobo Signed [Report This]Date: July 31 2014 11:07 pm