I like the stroy's pace! Akira and Kassidy should have the talk because right it seems that if He does not act fast, Michael will step in!
Author's Response:
I think you're right. Kassidy seems to have sparked something in Malcolm. Akira definitely needs to man up if he wants Kass. Thank you for reading and reviewing KATT.
Reviewer: KATT Anonymous
[Report This]Date: October 05 2014 04:30 pm
Great update! I can't wait to read more.
Author's Response:
Ahhh! azzure1020! Thank you for reading and reviewing it and liking it.
Reviewer: azzure1020 Anonymous [Report This]Date: June 18 2014 08:12 pm
Akira is teenage boy and when a girl offers up free services they cease to think with the big head. He was stupid and will have a lot explaining to do when he finally talk to Kass. Will she believe him when he tells her how he feels about is the question especially after all of his recent activity?
Author's Response:
Pmgayles!!! Yes!! you are absolutely right!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: June 18 2014 03:39 pm
When she sobers up Akira can talk to her. Her mother is abusive and should be shot point blank right between her eyes. She needs to be able to be able to get away, like a track scholarship to go to college or something. I feel bad for this kids, they grew up with parents who didn't love them. More please.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for continuing to read and review. They will grow up and we'll get to see how they turn out.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: June 18 2014 03:34 pm
I am confused by Akira, what did he expect her to do. He never claimed he liked her in a non friendship way, she obviously feel if he could sleep with a girl in Japan and then get a blowjob while she is in the house that this screams I like you. Ummm, no, it screams the opposite. Was really getting that head job worth losing out on her. Kinda disappointed in Akira. Let's see what the next chapter brings.
Author's Response:
I think Akira is really disapointed in himself. Next chapter will be explanations and confessions, we'll see what comes out of it. Thank you for reading it and reviewing.
Reviewer: lajack1 Signed [Report This]Date: June 18 2014 09:05 am
Really enjoying your story so far, shadow! Will you put me out of my misery and update soon? :)
Author's Response:
Aww! you're so sweet. Thank you. I'm working on updating one of my other stories, but this one is getting updated right after.
Reviewer: Twelve20One Anonymous [Report This]Date: June 11 2014 04:40 pm
I'm really liking this story , can't wait to see where it's heading ! :)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading it and reviewing.
Reviewer: Jesslove3205 Signed [Report This]Date: June 11 2014 03:49 pm
Why don't they just tell each how they feel? Why is Kassidy still in high school and not a freshmen in college? Malcolm is too fine, Akira is too fine I am in fine man heaven!!!
Author's Response:
pmgayles!! Next chapter we'll find out why Kassidy is 19 and still in High School. Why have'nt they told each how they feel? Well a 16 year old immature Akira basically told Kassidy that he didn't like being kissed by her and acted like he wasn't attracted to her because well he was ( that's the logic Akira was working with at that age). - that's from the first chapter. Later it became insecurity and fear of his feelings not being reciprocated. But, that's about to change real soon! Girl, you ain't lying, those men are sexy as hell.
Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: June 11 2014 03:02 pm
Interesting start. I like Kassidy's outgoing nature. Sometimes it's refreshing to read the reversed situation where the man has hidden feelings for the clueless woman since teenagehood ! I can't wait to read more about their interaction !
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for you review. I hope to keep it interesting for you.
Reviewer: Peanut Signed [Report This]Date: June 11 2014 03:23 am
Okay, so far Kassidy comes across as kind of a racist ass, and she should know better considering... not sure I like the character but interesting story premise.
Author's Response:
I don't think Kassidy is racist just immature. We all have stereotypes about certain races but are mature enough to know that they are not always true and people are individuals. But, Kassidy still being a teenager has not reached that degree of maturity or life experience. I appreciate you reading and reviewing it. Thank you.
Reviewer: Eren Anonymous [Report This]Date: June 06 2014 03:54 pm
Don't like Kassidy's momma at all, and where is her father's spine? Allowing his wife to treat his daughther that way. Her mom is bitch and her dad is only a donor. So sad, she needs Akira in her life. Akira is fine!!!
Author's Response:
pmgayles!! Thank you so much for always reading and reviewing my stories. I really appreciate it. We will meet her father soon. And heck yes! Akira IS Fine!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: June 06 2014 02:52 am