Darn spell check. I meant sociopathical. I really look forward to your updates and whatever you plan for Sap I will be popping a bag of popcorn because that will be epic reading;D
Reviewer: Charly43 Anonymous
[Report This]Date: July 14 2014 05:15 am
This was really good but I feel a double cross coming up. Kladon is cray-cray, his hate for Keitou is sociological. It's like no one else feelings exist but his. As for Sap they ought to sell tickets. Raad and Kira are adorable together and I can't believe she is still fighting her feelings for Raad. I can't see peace between the two nations if Kladon is in charge. Keitou is a question mark. Merikki may be able to bring order to wherever the chips fall in Nubia if Kladon isn't around. This story is so good and has so many layers that it leaves me anxious for the next update. Thank you for your response to my previous review and as always I wish you inspiration in all that you do.
Author's Response:
Lol your welcome!
Reviewer: Charly43 Signed [Report This]Date: July 13 2014 11:43 pm
Yes n I can't wait til tonight for the update
Reviewer: PurpleLover23 Signed [Report This]Date: July 13 2014 03:43 pm
Thank you for the update.
You need to get rid of Sap...does he think the Nubian King will give him his daughter.
Author's Response:
We shall see my friend!
Reviewer: Moni Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 13 2014 06:10 am
Remind me again why didn't she cut off his balls... Do me a favor make her brother cut off his balls and behead sap.... Now onto her herself.... Why didn't she ask for marriage I mean this is the problem....
nubian+Egyptian*love=marriage
marriage=freedom
but no she wanna
nubian-Egyptian*love=stupity
stupity=nothing but having a disease called Itoodyousosyndrome and boundtogethurtbutnotinabadwaysyndrome
Imdone
Author's Response:
Welp I dont want her to give up to easily because she is a warrior and shes never felt it before........if anything shes confused
Reviewer: Keyajackson Signed [Report This]Date: July 13 2014 05:36 am
Loved the update! Glad he found her.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: July 13 2014 01:15 am
Sap is a fool and a tool! I can't believe he is going to go offer his services to the Nubians to bring Kira back or incite a war. I hope he stays alive long enough to have his butt handed to him 2 times! Kira needs to listen to her heart and what Raad is saying to her. He has told her she will never be a whore. He's told her she is his but more importantly he is hers. Uggh! I hope she listens to Raad before she inadvertently helps in her own kidnapping back to Nubia. Thanks for two great updates and I can't wait to read more from you soon:)))
Author's Response:
Ill be writing some tonight! :3
Reviewer: Charly43 Signed [Report This]Date: July 12 2014 09:52 pm
Awwwww Kira thing will get better
Reviewer: PurpleLover23 Signed [Report This]Date: July 12 2014 03:24 pm
Seriously disappointed with both Nubian right now. This chapter left me sad.
Author's Response: Keep reading for more :3
Author's Response: Keep reading for more :3
Date: July 12 2014 11:58 am
YESSSS!! This is the chapter I have been waiting for....Kira and Raad are both strong-willed and are meant for one another!! I absolutely love this story!!!
Author's Response:
THANK YOU!
Reviewer: Leogina Signed [Report This]Date: July 11 2014 03:51 am
Wow. Kira reminds me of Whitney Houston's Im EverY woman. Strength honor and vulnerability. Ive tried to raise my daughters with these qualities. Excellent excellent. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Very interesting thought thanks for sharing! Reviewer: Astrid Signed [Report This]
Date: July 06 2014 12:35 pm
Thank you thank you you came good but the shit is about to hit the fan bring it
Reviewer: jadadominque Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 04 2014 05:03 am
Great chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank. You!
Reviewer: SandyBrownEyes Signed [Report This]Date: July 03 2014 06:07 am
Boom chicka wow wow! I am so glad that Kira and Raad came to their senses. Now, it's on and for Nasty Helena Buzzzzinga! Kira will be Queen, she and Raad will be a force to be reckonewith. I can't wait to read how Sap and Helena react. That will be great reading. This was so worth the wait! I'm curious to see how her crazy daddy reacts when he finds out about the soon to be Queen of Egypt. Thank you for an awesome update! I'll keep checking in tomorrow to see if you have uploaded the next chapter.
Author's Response:
LOLOLOLOL
Reviewer: Charly43 Signed [Report This]Date: July 03 2014 03:55 am
Wow, interesting update! Hope there's no fall out from their actions.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: July 03 2014 03:30 am
Loved the update! Can't wait to see how Raad makes his moves on Kira with those ladies around.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: July 03 2014 02:56 am
Great update Kira better watch out she has an enemy of one of the sisters b/c she wants the Pharoah all to herself. So she finally admits her feeling outloud her true reason of wanting to leave. Now she's given not only her heart but her body what's next will she still leave or stay & will the Pharoah get what he really wants her as his wife & if so how
Author's Response: Keep reading ! :3
[Report This]Date: July 03 2014 02:40 am
Wow! Now, what is going to happen?
He can't make her a mistress... don't let him marry that hussy.
Author's Response: Lol we shall see Reviewer: Moni Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 03 2014 02:36 am
again you leave me hanging please let the wait not be long
Reviewer: jadadominique Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 03 2014 01:33 am
Great update. I have missed this story.
Raad is dreaming - he has one vicious woman Helena who wants him and his body is responding. He needs to get himself together.
Kira - will be in trouble if he marries those women.
Thanks for the update.
Reviewer: Moni Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 02 2014 11:30 pm
Wow! As always thank you for the quick update. I think Kira is going to ask for her freedom and to take her servant/bestie Merit with her. Poor Raad, he will probably grant it. I hope something comes up that it's delayed. Helena is a joke but not a funny one. I noticed Sap wasn't mentioned, I wonder what that turd is up to? Hopefully Raad tells Kira how he truly feels and she does the same, then the real fun can begin. Kira having to prove herself to a nation, dealing with Sap, helping to unite Egypt and Nubia, and have time for herself and Raad. That is a lot even for a mighty lioness:)
Reviewer: Charly43 Signed [Report This]Date: July 02 2014 10:54 pm
WARNING:Many exclamation points ahead;) Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! What a wonderful surprise to see an update on an awesome story! Your writing lets you feel Kira' s joy and then pain of realizing the feelings she has for Raad. I hope Raad sticks to his guns and sends the hooker Helena and her Pimp Daddy Hunai to hell (which is probably home for them). As for Sap, whatever you have planned for him can't be enough for him. I can't wait to read that. Just a suggestion maybe some lemon juice, rock salt and broken dirty glass for starters:) Well, again very appreciative for the update, and I can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: Charly43 Signed
[Report This]Date: July 02 2014 07:49 pm
I had sap with a passion!!!! Why didn't they let her cut off his little d!€k!!!!!
Reviewer: Keyajackson Signed [Report This]Date: July 02 2014 06:00 pm
Great chapter, Kira is about to smack fire out raad's ass. This is going to be amazing.
Author's Response: That made me laugh so hard haha Reviewer: SandyBrownEyes Signed
[Report This]Date: July 02 2014 05:17 pm