Title: Chapter 36 Growing Pains

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Reviewer: dreamama Signed [Report This]
Date: September 02 2014 10:39 pm

Title: Chapter 19 Moment of Truth

im enjoying this story very much! thanks for bringing it over brenda!

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Date: July 27 2014 02:06 pm

Title: Chapter 36 Growing Pains

Enjoy, your vacsy Brenda!! 

Bobby messed up and hurt Juju while his son making out with that fast tail girl Theresa!  Get that child some therapy so that dhe doesn't become promiscuous.  I like Bae, he's good egg.  Justin and Tee shouldn't be allowed to be alone.

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Date: July 24 2014 06:14 pm

Title: Chapter 36 Growing Pains

Enjoy your Vacation friend. Now Bobby  boy he doesn't play and get why he looking out for his baby girl but trust Bae not going to try anything because the fear of his father lol. Justin needs to cool it before he do something that he will regreat  big time. thankss for the update.

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Date: July 24 2014 04:27 pm

Title: Chapter 35 Puppy Love and Parenting

I'm glad that Jerry and the rest of her family looking out for her making sure she is safe and loved.  To bad her father doesn't want to be in her life  but it is his lost. JuJu got it bad for that boy I bet she wants some spicy shrimp real soon lol. 

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Date: July 23 2014 05:27 pm

Title: Chapter 35 Puppy Love and Parenting

That was sweet!! Tee was raped,  I hope that Jerry tells her grandmother.  She needs help and I am glad that she realizes that Justin is different. Jerry is good for Tee he will show how a man loves his children. All the the brothers will be protective of their neices and nephews. 

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Date: July 23 2014 03:53 pm

Title: Chapter 35 Puppy Love and Parenting

Thanks for the update...hope Juju's invitation to Bae is taken well and she'd not seen as being too forward; that would crush her...

Love the fact that Jerry is so determined to be a positive influence in Teresa's life and the father-figure she so desperately needs!  It's so sad that experience made her doubt his intentions initially; she is too young to have that kind of baggage, but alas things like that happen every day to young girls and it's so sad.  I'm glad they are getting to bond though, and spend some quality time together.  I still think Teresa should tell her grandmother though, so she knows what happened and can take steps to make sure those two are not left alone unsupervised.

 

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Date: July 23 2014 02:31 pm

Title: Chapter 34 The Dance

Ok nice save sister. Good thing she had her brother back even tho it was because of her he had to dance with the devil lol. Bobby ha pacing those floors not feeling his little girl dancing with a boy.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 22 2014 10:33 pm

Title: Chapter 33 Culture and Roadblocks

Well I know JuJu not feeling no holding hands kissing etc but it is a good thing. He can truly get to know you  the person before any of that happens.  So I say let the boy court you.

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Date: July 22 2014 10:21 pm

Title: Chapter 34 The Dance

wow! who knew pre-highschool dances had so much politics!

Reviewer: bookbutterfly Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 22 2014 09:21 pm

Title: Chapter 34 The Dance

Don't like Marilyn or any of her little crew.  Juju that was bogus, throwing  your brother and your bestie under the bus because that ho pissed you off.  Bobby is going have stroke over Juju growing up. I really hope that Theresa doesn't talk her way  into riding Justin like a pony! Bobby is hilarious!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 22 2014 06:37 pm

Title: Chapter 34 The Dance

Poor Justin; if I were him I would murder Juju when we got home...she orchestrated that whole fiasco with Marilyn just to put her in her place, not thinking about how it could possibly affect Justin.  Glad she was able to make it up to him somewhat towards the end though...

Bobby is too funny; love how protective he is of Juliana and how easily he has slipped into "daddy mode".

Loving this story!

Reviewer: Amiefuzzy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 22 2014 05:28 pm

Title: Chapter 33 Culture and Roadblocks

Ooh! 

Reviewer: bookbutterfly Signed [Report This]
Date: July 22 2014 10:21 am

Title: Chapter 33 Culture and Roadblocks

Juju keep up the work, at least Theresa won't be getting any in his momma's house! I love Bae and JuJu reaction was priceless. Good writing Brenda!!

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Date: July 21 2014 07:51 pm

Title: Chapter 32 Homecoming

Brenda, you've done it again!  Love everything you write, and the way you manage to inject spirituality into your writing, while maintaining mainstream interest is pretty awesome!

Love all the different roads the Mercer brothers have taken and the strong mother that unifies them all.  I never saw the movie, but you make me want to go rent it:)

Anywho, looking forward to the next update!

 

Reviewer: Amiefuzzy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 21 2014 03:57 pm

Title: Chapter 32 Homecoming

It won't be pretty when JuJu realizes that Justin and Theresa are talking. I am so glad that Justin said that he wasn't ready for sex but I hope that Theresa doesn't throw her kat at him.

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Date: July 19 2014 05:16 am

Title: Chapter 32 Homecoming

Well I hope JuJu man knows how to fight because Bobby might try to kick his ass just for looking at his daughter lol. But he needs to know they are growing up and trust that they will make the right choice. 

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Date: July 19 2014 02:23 am

Title: Chapter 31 The Revelation

JuJu got a boy friend. JuJu got a boy friend boyyyyyyyyyyyyyy is daddy going to flip his mind when he finds out. 

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Date: July 19 2014 01:26 am

Title: Chapter 30 Irrational Behavior

I don't know why but I am not feeling the pairing of Justin and Theresa but both wrong for keeping it a secret because that smells like betrayal.  I wonder what Justin is going to do when she finds a boy she likes and starts having those feelings.  Will we hear the you need to wait and you are too young for a boyfriend if the shoe was on the other foot.  Theresa needs some counseling and I think JuJu is just a strong willed girl and Justin has always been laid back.  I think seeing her mom work to take care of them and then sounds like marrying a non dominant male will be hard to see Justin in a new light.  It sounds like they have always been a core of three and now that is changing.  Must be difficult during hormones and life changes.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 18 2014 03:00 am

Title: Chapter 30 Irrational Behavior

JuJu I love you girl but get a clue like soon lol. If not she going to lose out on her brother.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 18 2014 02:59 am

Title: Chapter 29 Theresa Comes Clean

OH boy she knows. I wonder if she going to make her brother sweat???  I hope so lol.

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Date: July 18 2014 02:36 am

Title: Chapter 28 Justin's Secret

They should tell her right off the bat that they are an Item. Yes she would have been upset but hell she is a big girl and get over it.

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Date: July 18 2014 02:23 am

Title: Chapter 27 Jillian's Concern

Dam I couldn't image  hearing from your birth mother and she going to die. But Jack is right  she has to forgive her father to move on with her life. 

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Date: July 18 2014 02:10 am

Title: Chapter 26 Jeremiah's Decision

I do hope they help the girl. It is sad that she doesn't have anyone her mother dead, father don't care and had best friend now that is gone. She lost and I know that feeling. Thanks for the update.

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Date: July 18 2014 02:02 am

Title: Chapter 25 New Beginnings

Glad that he handle it and talk to both girls with ease and care. I hope  she listen to him and wake up.

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Date: July 18 2014 01:54 am



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