Title: Chapter 18 Decisions

Excellent story!  Those Mercer boys need therapy especially Bobby and Jack.  Although Jillian has helped Jack somewhat since they both had similar experiences. 

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 10 2014 08:17 pm

Title: Chapter 14 Jack Makes a Stand

Gosh darn it!!  I was really getting into this story.  I like all of the brothers and I like how Evelyn told them its time to grow the f*ck up.  I can't wait for your next update.

Reviewer: dcphoenix1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 09 2014 10:10 pm

Title: Chapter 14 Jack Makes a Stand

Oh man! That,was awesome!

Reviewer: Bookbutterfly Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 09 2014 06:41 pm

Title: Chapter 12 The Truth According to Jeremiah

I can't veliebe you kept this story to yourself so long!

Reviewer: Bookbutterfly Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 09 2014 06:24 pm

Title: Chapter 6 Camille's Revelation

I like this story.  I wonder why Camille doesn't like Bobby and its more than because he's a roughneck...  I can't wait for the next update(s)

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Date: July 09 2014 03:44 am

Title: Chapter 6 Camille's Revelation

Ohmy, you never fail to disappoint Brenda. Loving Bobby and Charity's character mainly, can't wait for more! :)

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Date: July 09 2014 12:29 am

Title: Chapter 6 Camille's Revelation

Now everybody knows but Bobby. Yeah cookout going to be something for sure.  Can't wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 09 2014 12:00 am

Title: Chapter 5 Charity's Secret

He has not one but two kids that he doesn't have a clue about? Oh dam stuff is going to hit the fan once he finds out. Thanks for the update.

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Date: July 08 2014 11:48 pm

Title: Chapter 5 Charity's Secret

OH dam  he has not one but two kids that he doesn't have a clue about?  Once he finds out he going to flip his mind big time. Thanks for the update.

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Date: July 08 2014 11:47 pm

Title: Chapter 4 Jack's Homecoming

If mom respond that way towards his girl boyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy I can't wait to see how bobby going to react lol. Thanks for the updated.

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Date: July 08 2014 11:37 pm

Title: Chapter 3 No Escape for Angel

One word to  Angel  run man run lol. See that what happens when you  date a wild child lol. Thanks for the update.

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Date: July 08 2014 11:24 pm

Title: Chapter 2 Jerry the Provider

Jerry kids lol she is a little bold one. So when are you getting married so we can have some cousins to play around with? Lol.  Bobby feels strong about his family his brothers and it is nice to see. Thanks for the update.

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Date: July 08 2014 11:17 pm

Title: Chapter 1 Bobby's Catching a Feeling

Oooooohhhhhhh.......Bobby gonna trip off this, keep going can't wait to see where this goes.

Reviewer: Kyky2019 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 08 2014 11:17 pm

Title: Chapter 1 Bobby's Catching a Feeling

I love the bond that Bobby has with his mother. She understand hims and love him no matter what.  But dude need to grow a pair and get his woman back lol. Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 08 2014 10:50 pm

Title: Chapter 6 Camille's Revelation

please continue better than original

Reviewer: jadadominique Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 08 2014 07:46 pm

Title: Chapter 6 Camille's Revelation

I love love love this story!!! Keepwriting this is great, yyou'rea wonderful writer.

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Date: July 08 2014 04:42 pm



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