I must confess that I didn't read the previous stories because of the cast. That says a lot more aobut me than you as a writer.
You have held a mirror up to me and I'm not happy with what I see. Instead of reading the story and enjoying it for what it is, I made some assumptions and discarded it. Thank you for giving me something to think about and coming to grips with some of my own prejudices.
I will now go back and read the prior installments. It's necessary if I want to know who Indy is and why he comes to be the person he eventually becomes.
Once again, thank you.
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed [Report This]Date: July 17 2014 10:37 am
I like them so far, keep 'em coming!
Reviewer: cocoverdad Signed [Report This]Date: July 16 2014 02:29 am
Great Start!....Excited about characters
Reviewer: islametropoles Signed [Report This]Date: July 16 2014 12:55 am
Your summary states "No bother left behind". I think you meant, no brother left behind.
Much improved over the other 2 drabbles and thanks for the lack of a crazy author's note that could turn people away.
Author's Response:
Thank you! The summary is always the last thing I do and I end up slacking!
Thank you again, I'll keep the crazy authors notes to a minimum and begin letting the work speak for itself haha
Reviewer: Chocolate1Lover Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 16 2014 12:27 am
I honestly want to find out what is going to happen btw shea and peri
Reviewer: tiffany37 Signed [Report This]Date: July 15 2014 11:25 pm
In love with this story already...you got my favorite villain in this story too!!! Lol but on the responsible side he needs to stop moping and figure out how to win her back and well start over. Let her do something to him back. That's what I'd do. I'm glad it's not a continuous affair that he continued to do after he got caught he reflects on it and he should let her punish him for it and earn her respect back. But I'm getting a hang of the story now so I know it wont be easy. But love it regardless
Reviewer: Keyajackson Signed [Report This]
Date: July 15 2014 11:10 pm
Nice. More please.
Reviewer: bookbutterfly Signed [Report This]Date: July 15 2014 11:06 pm
I like this a lot. This is said as I hang my head in shame for not reading the others yet.
Reviewer: AP Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 15 2014 11:02 pm
I really like this story and would love for it to be continued!
Reviewer: cheetahgrl07 Signed [Report This]Date: July 15 2014 07:57 pm