Maya had me cracking up. She is a submissive and if she would not have left to catch a breather she would've orgasmed right there in front of Chico and Chase.
Author's Response:
You are soo right. I don't think she's fully realized that she is a submissive yet. It's all new to her. Thank you for reading and reviewing
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous
[Report This]Date: September 02 2014 03:26 am
Yay! I was ready for this update. I really am interested in this story.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I am loving writing this story, I hope I can keep it interesting for you. Thank you for reading and reviewing it.
Reviewer: alee92 Signed [Report This]Date: August 28 2014 04:32 pm
Loved the update! Hope Chase can protect her.
Author's Response:
I think between Chase and Chico they'll hopefully keep her safe. Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: August 28 2014 04:40 am
Great update!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous
[Report This]Date: August 28 2014 01:40 am
love love love it!
Author's Response:
I'm sooo GLAD you loved it. Thank you for taking the time to read it and review it.
Reviewer: Sundayborn Signed [Report This]Date: August 28 2014 01:26 am
Please update soon =)
Author's Response:
Working on it right now, planning to have it up by next week. Thank you for reading.
Reviewer: SeekingVirtue17 Signed [Report This]Date: August 28 2014 12:01 am
YAAAAAY! An update! Omg I'm really lovin this story and it's only chapter 2! What's gonna happen now that Domingo dude is creepy as hell. I know maya is shy and that's what I like about her but it's gonna get her killed! I wish she said something sooner instead of the man showing up out if nowhere, he could have done something awful to her ages ago thank god nothing happened. And Chase is something else I wasn't expecting him to kiss her so thoroughly like that lmao so steamy. I think he really likes her but knowing maya she doesn't see it... Yet. Omg I can't wait for next chapter so pumped love this story!
Author's Response:
OMG, Heartless 808 you are too kind. I think Chase was dying to kiss her anyway and once he got started he really wanted to keep kissing her. I guess she didn't tell anyone because she's not use to having people care about her. I think she's going to have a hard time accepting Chase actually likes her especially with his southern flirting ass. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: Heartless808 Signed [Report This]Date: August 27 2014 11:44 pm
Chase is all kinds of hot. I tell you I've always had a thing for Mat M. You've captured his essence in this story. Maya is full of surprises, isn't she? I hope Chase encourages her to go to school. Maya and Chase are going to be so hot together. Now this Domingo character. I don't like him, but I suspect that's the point. He's going to cause trouble for these too. Can you kill Domingo quickly, please? Lol I am really loving this story. Thanks for sharing!
Author's Response:
I know what you mean about Chase, man is HOT! O yeah Maya definitely has more surprises to come. Domingo will be an obstacle for these two. How soon will the Domingo problem be solved? Not sure but not too quickly. sorry. :-( Thank you for the compliments azzure1020, it means alot.
Reviewer: azzure1020 Signed [Report This]Date: August 27 2014 10:23 pm
Damn!! That was a good one and can't wait to see what happens.
Author's Response:
Thank you Sharise! Me too, I really excited about working on the next chapter. I'm hoping to have it up by next week. Thanks for the review :-)
Reviewer: Sharise Signed [Report This]Date: August 27 2014 10:10 pm
This is really good. I love how Chase went all alpha!!
Author's Response:
Hi Khamalani! yeah that alpha dominant type is all kinds of sexy. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: Khamalani Signed [Report This]Date: August 27 2014 09:06 pm
Things just became very interesting! Could this guy and hiss insane obsession be another part of the reason that Maya is so shy? I enjoyed this update but I am a little fearful that incorporating the holidays may speed the story up and detract from character building and plot development. I am sure I am wrong but I love your stories too much not to voice a possible concern. Thank you so much for the wonderful update!!!!!
Author's Response:
No problem at all, please voice all your concerns. It makes me more conscious when I'm writing so I make sure not to take away from the story. It's going to be interesting to get the background story to Domingo and also to find out why Maya ended up so reserved and shy. Thank you MissCO for taking the time to voice your opinion.
Reviewer: MissCO Signed [Report This]Date: August 27 2014 09:01 pm
WoW! Love where this story is going. I didn't see Domingo coming but I love the added danger, suspense, protective feel. Love how Chase stepped in, 'actions speak louder than words' kinda way and shut Domingo down.
I'm very happy to see that Maya is able to help Chase out with the computer software and the overall running of the shop.
Great chapter! Thanks!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the awesome review read a lot. Even though she didn't graduate high school she's still pretty smart. I think Chase wanted to kiss Maya anyway so he jumped at the chance too. LOl! Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: read a lot Signed [Report This]Date: August 27 2014 07:33 pm
OK, so that is what's going on with Maya. Wow.....dangerous stuff!
Author's Response:
Yes indeed! Thanks for reading flickchick.
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: August 27 2014 07:21 pm
I love Chase! ! Is it wrong ti ask that kill Domingo? Please don't make it quick, I want him to suffer!! Maya is feeling her some Chase and Chase is deelimg her right back. Me likey!!
Author's Response:
pmgayles!! I love me some Chase and Maya too. It is going to be interesting to find out what's going to happen with Domingo. Thank you for the input, it's not wrong to ask for anything. You just might get it. Thank you as always for reading and reviewing.
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Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: August 27 2014 06:52 pm