I'm catching up with Chase's story. It looks promising. I like Maya ok. She is suite different from Kat, if not for the virgin status situation. The sexual dynamic is a bit much and crude though . Also I would have done with this whole "Why does it drive men to rape and some woman to become sluts?". Rape has little to nothing to do with sex or sexual attraction and "slut" shaming is so...UGH.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading, I appreciate the review. Kat and Maya are two very different characters. The sexual dynamic is my favorite part of writing. Maya does not reflect my particular beliefs, she is a character and as a 21 year old naive woman her curiosity about sex was peaked because her understanding of rape was that it is a forced sexual act ( I kow it is about control, but I'm not Maya), same thing about her curiosity about why women become so driven by sexual pleasure that they constantly seek it out ( shit I'd probably would be considered slutty if I wasn't married, ain't no shame in enjoying sex but again not my belief but my character Maya). Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: RedHobo Signed
[Report This]Date: October 11 2014 01:33 am
I'm really enjoying this. It was nice seeing Maya relax and have a good time.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm glad you like it. Yes, she's getting more comfortable with Chase and herself. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: LadyeT Signed [Report This]Date: September 07 2014 08:57 am
This is an awesomely entertaining story. You are doing an excellent job with character development. Their Sunday together was great. If their inner thoughts and outward interactions is any indication these two will be explosive when they finally make it official. Love it! Thanks.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review. I'm so happy you are enjoying it. The characters as well as their relationship is developing and you're right, they are going to make an explosive couple. Thank you for reading.
Reviewer: read a lot Signed [Report This]Date: September 07 2014 05:55 am
Oh my gosh! Maya is my kind of girl.
Author's Response:
Lol!! That's cool! Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: Dreamingofalifetime Signed [Report This]Date: September 06 2014 08:55 am
Loved the update! Glad they're all getting along.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing. I think they all have a good dynamic together. This was a good getting along happy chapter, there will be more drama in the next one. Thanks again.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: September 06 2014 05:18 am
So awesome, love Chase. Maya is such sweetheart and in lust with Chase. He has woken up her libido.
Author's Response:
pmgayles!!!! You are soo right, Chase has definitely let her body know it can get aroused. lol! and what girl wouldn't with Chase. Thank you always for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: September 06 2014 02:22 am
Wonderful update as always. I really hope Chase doesnt use Maya to fill his loneliness void, but i guess it wouldnt be realistic otherwise. Thank you and i cant wait for the update 😄
Author's Response:
Hi MissCo! Thank you for reading. I think Chase needs to figure out what he's really feeling for her because you're right, right now he's just horny. Thank you for your review.
Reviewer: MissCO Signed [Report This]Date: September 06 2014 12:25 am
I love how sweet Chase is to Maya. He's so patient and caring. I can't wait to see how their love progresses. Share a bed, he says. Maya is better than me. I would have had my pillow and blankie ready before he finished that sentence. Just sayin...Great update!
Author's Response:
Hey azzure1020! LOl! You ain't lying, my ass would have been in there too. Chase is a good man. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: azzure1020 Signed [Report This]Date: September 05 2014 11:34 pm
I'm enjoying this. I hope Domino's plane goes down over the ocean on his way back. LOL
Author's Response:
Ha! Ha! That would really make things alot easier on everybody. Thank you for reading and reviewing Brenda1257.
Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]Date: September 05 2014 07:01 pm
Awww that was so cute!!! I want to rush them Into being together but it's fun watching them be friends first!
Author's Response:
I know what you mean! I want them to be together and happy already but the journey there is going to make it soo much better when they get there. Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed [Report This]Date: September 05 2014 07:00 pm
"Come on darlin, let's go fill ourselves up with Christmas cheer till we puke and shit candy canes and tinsel."
This had me howling. I swear I can hear MM saying this. He's the perfect Chase.
I'm in love with this story. And Maya has a lot of book learning about sex, but she has not yet experienced Chase! Her eyes will be wide open, amongst other thangs.
I simply adore her Aunt Glenda. And she's right, Maya's gonna have to shoot that mofo. Aunt Glenda is one for practical advice.
You actually have me feenin' for this story. Really looking forward to the next update.
Great update, Chica.
Author's Response:
Wow! BellaChica Thank you soo much for the this review. You're right Maya knows the book smarts on sex thanks to her Aunt Glenda but wait till she gets a taste of the real thing. I'm really looking forward to introducing Aunt Glenda in person, I'm thinking she's due to pop up in one of the upcoming chapters. I'm working on the next chapter right now. I give you a heart felt thank you for reading this and liking it, it means alot to me.
Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous [Report This]Date: September 05 2014 06:55 pm
Awww!! They are so cute!! I wonder if Chase is gonna call that girl that tries too hard? Hmmm.....
Author's Response:
Hi khamalani! Things that make you go hmmm... We'll find out next chapter. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: Khamalani Signed [Report This]Date: September 05 2014 02:49 pm
I wonder do they have any clue that Chase is just as attracted to her as she is to him and if not what gonna. Happen when he finds out. She's coming out of her shell she works for him is good with computers and fixing cars plus now she also stays at his house. Has went shopping and seems to be getting more comfortable with
Him chris and chico
Author's Response:
Yes, she's definitely becoming comfortable with Chase and losing some of her shyness. I think Chase knows she's attracted to him but just maybe he thinks it's just physical. Maya is just confused by he's affections because he's a flirty person by nature. That coupled with her lack of self-esteem she has no clue he can find her attractive. She thinks he's just a good person. I think soon they are going to realize they both have feelings for each other.
Reviewer: kvgurl Signed [Report This]Date: September 05 2014 02:16 pm