Title: Chapter 1- November

I guess Maya is used to being around people? So, what...she just quit school and hung out fixing cars with her dad at the garage? But she's responding to Chase in a sexual way..and seems to know what she's talking about. She can't be that inept socially, right?



Author's Response:

Flikchick, you're getting way  ahead of me. She did go to school till 8th grade so there's that social experience and she did have to deal with customers at the shop so there's that too. I think she probably feels more socially awkward than she actually really is. As far as sexually knowledge, wait till you meet her Aunt Glenda!

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 11 2014 10:52 pm

Title: Chapter 1- November

Awesome



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for taking the time to read it and review it.

Reviewer: kvgurl Signed [Report This]
Date: August 11 2014 09:20 pm

Title: Chapter 1- November

Oh Yeah!! You got me!!



Author's Response:

Good! LOL! Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: Khamalani Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 11 2014 08:17 pm

Title: Chapter 1- November

A female mechanic? I love it. Great choice for the cast.  I wish Maya wasn't so shy, but I'm sure you'll work that out of her soon enough. 



Author's Response:

azzure1020. Everytime I see your name I want to say "azzure/ blue". I love when a woman can do a traditionally male job well. It's sexy. Yeah, I'm sure Chase will help work some of that shyness out of her soon enough. Thank you for reading and reviewing it. I appreciate it.

Reviewer: azzure1020 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 11 2014 07:47 pm

Title: Chapter 1- November

This is a great start! Chase and Maya are going to be good together. I can't wait to read about Maya' s mother. She sounds like a piece of work. Please update soon:))))



Author's Response:

Thank you Charly43. Yes, Maya's mother is something else. I will be starting the next chapter soon. Thank you for reading.

Reviewer: Charly43 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 11 2014 07:29 pm



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