Title: Chapter 4- December Part 3

Aw.. What a kind of mother tries to kill her child.. SMH! I hope Maya learns to love her self and Chase makes Maya his. They are so wonderful together, I hope they both make a move.

 

Great update, I knew something terrifying had to happend for Maya to be so shy. And please get Kat to help her out with clothes, girlfriend need a Girlfriend Intervention, LOL!!!  Please post soon again :D



Author's Response:

Next chapter, Spoiler- you'll get what you're looking for. She definitely needs some kind of makeover but I wanted Chase to fall in love with her as she is first. I'm working on the next chapter and hopefully will post by next week. Thank you for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 15 2014 04:33 am

Title: Chapter 3- December Part 2

I'm really enjoying this.  It was nice seeing Maya relax and have a good time.



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm glad you like it. Yes, she's getting more comfortable with Chase and herself. Thank you for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: LadyeT Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 07 2014 08:57 am

Title: Chapter 3- December Part 2

This is an awesomely entertaining story.  You are doing an excellent job with character development.  Their Sunday together was great.  If their inner thoughts and outward interactions is any indication these two will be explosive when they finally make it official.  Love it!  Thanks.



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review. I'm so happy you are enjoying it. The characters as well as their relationship is developing and you're right, they are going to make an explosive couple. Thank you for reading.

Reviewer: read a lot Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 07 2014 05:55 am

Title: Chapter 3- December Part 2

Oh my gosh! Maya is my kind of girl.

Author's Response:

Lol!! That's cool! Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: Dreamingofalifetime Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 06 2014 08:55 am

Title: Chapter 3- December Part 2

Loved the update! Glad they're all getting along.

Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing. I think they all have a good dynamic together. This was a good getting along happy chapter, there will be more drama in the next one. Thanks again.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 06 2014 05:18 am

Title: Chapter 3- December Part 2

So awesome,  love Chase. Maya is such sweetheart and in lust with Chase. He has woken up her libido. 



Author's Response:

pmgayles!!!! You are soo right, Chase has definitely let her body know it can get aroused. lol! and what girl wouldn't with Chase. Thank you always for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 06 2014 02:22 am

Title: Chapter 3- December Part 2

Wonderful update as always. I really hope Chase doesnt use Maya to fill his loneliness void, but i guess it wouldnt be realistic otherwise. Thank you and i cant wait for the update 😄 



Author's Response:

Hi MissCo!  Thank you for reading. I think Chase needs to figure out what he's really feeling for her because you're right, right now he's just horny. Thank you for your review.

Reviewer: MissCO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 06 2014 12:25 am

Title: Chapter 3- December Part 2

I love how sweet Chase is to Maya. He's so patient and caring. I can't wait to see how their love progresses. Share a bed, he says.  Maya is better than me. I would have had my pillow and blankie ready before he finished that sentence. Just sayin...Great update! 



Author's Response:

Hey azzure1020!  LOl! You ain't lying, my ass would have been in there too. Chase is a good man. Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: azzure1020 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 05 2014 11:34 pm

Title: Chapter 3- December Part 2

I'm enjoying this.  I hope Domino's plane goes down over the ocean on his way back.  LOL



Author's Response:

Ha! Ha! That would really make things alot easier on everybody. Thank you for reading and reviewing Brenda1257.

Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 05 2014 07:01 pm

Title: Chapter 3- December Part 2

Awww that was so cute!!! I want to rush them Into being together but it's fun watching them be friends first!



Author's Response:

I know what you mean! I want them to be together and happy already but the journey there is going to make it soo much better when they get there. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 05 2014 07:00 pm

Title: Chapter 3- December Part 2

"Come on darlin, let's go fill ourselves up with Christmas cheer till we puke and shit candy canes and tinsel."

This had me howling. I swear I can hear MM saying this. He's the perfect Chase.

I'm in love with this story. And Maya has a lot of book learning about sex, but she has not yet experienced Chase! Her eyes will be wide open, amongst other thangs.

I simply adore her Aunt Glenda. And she's right, Maya's gonna have to shoot that mofo. Aunt Glenda is one for practical advice.

You actually have me feenin' for this story. Really looking forward to the next update.

Great update, Chica.



Author's Response:

Wow! BellaChica Thank you soo much for the this review. You're right Maya knows the book smarts on sex thanks to her Aunt Glenda but wait till she gets a taste of the real thing. I'm really looking forward to introducing Aunt Glenda in person, I'm thinking she's due to pop up in one of the upcoming chapters. I'm working on the next chapter right now. I give you a heart felt thank you for reading this and liking it, it means alot to me.

Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 05 2014 06:55 pm

Title: Chapter 1- November

I loved your first story making it hard for me your characters are believable and utterly consuming! Please finish the storiesnof these two amazing men and their enchanting lady loves you've got me on here everyday eager for updates!



Author's Response:

You just made my day darkcaprica35! Thank you. I will finish these stories. They are the only two stories I'm working on right now.  I plan to update at least one of them weekly. Chase's story is suppose to be short and happen during Chris' 6 month internship. THANK YOU for reading my stories, I appreciate your review.

Reviewer: darkcaprica35 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 05 2014 04:25 pm

Title: Chapter 3- December Part 2

Awww!! They are so cute!! I wonder if Chase is gonna call that girl that tries too hard? Hmmm.....



Author's Response:

Hi khamalani! Things that make you go hmmm...   We'll find out next chapter. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: Khamalani Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 05 2014 02:49 pm

Title: Chapter 3- December Part 2

I wonder do they have any clue that Chase is just as attracted to her as she is to him and if not what gonna. Happen when he finds out. She's coming out of her shell she works for him is good with computers and fixing cars plus now she also stays at his house. Has went shopping and seems to be getting more comfortable with 

 Him chris and chico



Author's Response:

Yes, she's definitely becoming comfortable with Chase and losing some of her shyness. I think Chase knows she's attracted to him but just maybe he thinks it's just physical. Maya is just confused by he's affections because he's a flirty person by nature. That coupled with her lack of self-esteem she has no clue he can find her attractive. She thinks he's just a good person. I think soon they are going to realize they both have feelings for each other.

Reviewer: kvgurl Signed [Report This]
Date: September 05 2014 02:16 pm

Title: Chapter 2- December Part 1

Maya had me cracking up.  She is a submissive and if she would not have left to catch a breather she would've orgasmed right there in front of Chico and Chase. 



Author's Response:

You are soo right. I don't think she's fully realized that she is a submissive yet. It's all new to her. Thank you for reading and reviewing

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 02 2014 03:26 am

Title: Chapter 1- November

i think the story is going at just the right pace, not dragging too much and not definitely not running. Certainly a one of a kind. :)  hope you keep this pace,

but after all it's your story :)

Does Maya seem a bit more 'open' in this chapter? She ceratinly seems less shy.

Can't wait for the third chapter :D 



Author's Response:

Thank you, I do like the pace of this story, I appreciate you bringing that up. I hope to keep it up and maintain it interesting. I think in this chapter Maya has become more comfortable with Chase and Chico after spending a month working with them. I'm writing the third chapter right now and will hopefully post it at the end of this week. Thank you for reading and your review.

Reviewer: Tannistha Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 31 2014 05:52 pm

Title: Chapter 2- December Part 1

Yay! I was ready for this update. I really am interested in this story.



Author's Response:

Thank you! I am loving writing this story, I hope I can keep it interesting for you. Thank you for reading and reviewing it.

Reviewer: alee92 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 28 2014 04:32 pm

Title: Chapter 1- November

I already love chase and Maya! Please update soon! Hope I get some steamy chapters too;-)



Author's Response:

O Hells Yeah! You gonna get some steamy chapters! Working on an update for next week. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: lwxie Signed [Report This]
Date: August 28 2014 02:39 pm

Title: Chapter 1- November

Love this story already....  Keep up the good work!!!! 



Author's Response:

Thank so much for taking the time to read it and review it. I appreciate it.

Reviewer: PurpleLover23 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 28 2014 07:05 am

Title: Chapter 2- December Part 1

Loved the update! Hope Chase can protect her.

Author's Response:

I think between Chase and Chico they'll hopefully keep her safe. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 28 2014 04:40 am

Title: Chapter 2- December Part 1

Great update!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 28 2014 01:40 am

Title: Chapter 1- November

Okay, so loving it so far although missing Chris and Kat's story. :-D



Author's Response:

Thank you! I promise this story isn't going to be long. Everything happens in the 6 months Kat and Chris are apart. although I'll probably squeeze in a Kat and Chris update in between like the Thanksgiving chapter. Thank you for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: d3stin2l0v3 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 28 2014 01:29 am

Title: Chapter 2- December Part 1

love love love it!



Author's Response:

I'm sooo GLAD you loved it. Thank you for taking the time to read it and review it.

Reviewer: Sundayborn Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 28 2014 01:26 am

Title: Chapter 2- December Part 1

Please update soon =)



Author's Response:

Working on it right now, planning to have it up by next week. Thank you for reading.

Reviewer: SeekingVirtue17 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 28 2014 12:01 am

Title: Chapter 2- December Part 1

YAAAAAY! An update! Omg I'm really lovin this story and it's only chapter 2! What's gonna happen now that Domingo dude is creepy as hell. I know maya is shy and that's what I like about her but it's gonna get her killed! I wish she said something sooner instead of the man showing up out if nowhere, he could have done something awful to her ages ago thank god nothing happened. And Chase is something else I wasn't expecting him to kiss her so thoroughly like that lmao so steamy. I think he really likes her but knowing maya she doesn't see it... Yet. Omg I can't wait for next chapter so pumped love this story!



Author's Response:

OMG, Heartless 808 you are too kind. I think Chase was dying to kiss her anyway and once he got started he really wanted to keep kissing her. I guess she didn't tell anyone because she's not use to having people care about her. I think she's going to have a hard time accepting Chase actually likes her especially with his southern flirting ass. Thank you for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: Heartless808 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 27 2014 11:44 pm



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