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Title: Chapter 2

Good start. You've peaked my interest.

 Reviewer: jahchannah Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 19 2015 03:08 am
Title: Chapter 2

Really really good. A mixture of  mystery, murder and romance. Looking forward to the next chapter.

 Reviewer: Loop Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 07 2014 08:56 am
Title: Chapter 2

insane and so good! keep it up! & thanks for the update!

 Reviewer: Yuukiyanagi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 25 2014 12:05 pm
Title: Chapter 2

very interesting cant wit to read more

 Reviewer: Chicken Signed [Report This]
Date: September 23 2014 01:40 pm
Title: Chapter 2

What in the world is going on? First the girl in the road and now a body hanging in the trees?!I smell something either evil or supernatural/paranormal going on in this town.

 Reviewer: Dreamingofalifetime Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 22 2014 10:03 pm
Title: Chapter 2

How could end it right there with the body hanging from the tree??  I need to know who it is a and DC why they chose the schoolyard? So good!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 22 2014 01:00 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Welcome back! :D I missed you and your stories! I love the beginning! SO intriguing! Can't wait to read more! <3

 Reviewer: DarkandLovely Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 21 2014 09:32 am
Title: Chapter 1

this is an amazing start. the characters are fantastic already, really well realized. i'm excited for more!

 Reviewer: intellectual titmouse Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 16 2014 05:55 pm
Title: Chapter 1

love it, very intrigued 

 Reviewer: crayola10 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 09 2014 11:38 pm
Title: Chapter 1

I love the title first off. You did a good job of slowly bringing up the tension.  I want to know who that girl is. Awesome start. 

 Reviewer: azzure1020 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 09 2014 01:34 am
Title: Chapter 1

Wow, what a great beginning and a cliffhanger already. More please!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 08 2014 01:48 pm
Title: Chapter 1

great start - welcome back!!

 Reviewer: Yuukiyanagi Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 08 2014 10:08 am
Title: Chapter 1

This was an amazing first chapter. Hmm, the girl seemed a bit mysterious and creepy at the same time. And blood, oh boy.

 Reviewer: Dreamingofalifetime Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 08 2014 08:07 am
Title: Chapter 1

Interesting start!

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 08 2014 06:39 am
Title: Chapter 1

Are you back? Wow!

 Reviewer: Sleek Signed [Report This]
Date: September 08 2014 06:06 am
Title: Chapter 1

Ooo! Nice start and cliffhanger. You got me!!!

 Reviewer: Khamalani Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 08 2014 05:18 am
Title: Chapter 1

Interesting

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Date: September 08 2014 04:55 am
Title: Chapter 1

Caught my attention.  Please update

 Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 08 2014 04:38 am
Title: Chapter 1

Welcome back. Grear start, very interesting.

 Reviewer: Drea Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 08 2014 04:31 am


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