Reviews For Trust - Revision
Title: A Chance Meeting
Date: August 03 2016 07:27 am
Ch. 2
Good chapter, but your characters could have more physical descriptions. Walnut complexion... pretty good. I don't recall Storm getting described, if u did, my bad, sorry.
Reviewer: swirly_girl Signed [Report This]Date: August 03 2016 07:27 am
Title: A Chance Meeting
Date: September 30 2014 01:06 pm
I had the feeling that Rhonda couldn't be trusted. How are Sally and Rhonda friends? Why is Sally using a bike that isn't registered in her name? I am liking this story, I can appreciate how build the story with each new chapter. Excellent! !
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: September 30 2014 01:06 pm